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Posted: 13 years ago
when ur going to update??
Plz update soon
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok i would b very frank with my comments...this is purely MY POV please do not take any offence...the teachings which my mom has given me they say only 1 thing never to give away your self-respect and dignity...you are a human being too women are NOT toys...i feel bad the way some IF writers degrade women in their fan fictions...tolerating so much of humiliation???do you have no self-respect at all???women are not toys so stop degrading them...to be very very honest the woman in your story is a BLACK SPOT on womanhood...through your writings you should make women realize that they are NOT weak in fact they are stronger than men in every aspect...

P.S- please i beg of you dear please do not take any offence this is purely my POV...i am extremely sorry if i hurt you in any way but after reading all that i could not control myself n so i wrote all those things...m really sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alfiya7

ok i would b very frank with my comments...this is purely MY POV please do not take any offence...the teachings which my mom has given me they say only 1 thing never to give away your self-respect and dignity...you are a human being too women are NOT toys...i feel bad the way some IF writers degrade women in their fan fictions...tolerating so much of humiliation???do you have no self-respect at all???women are not toys so stop degrading them...to be very very honest the woman in your story is a BLACK SPOT on womanhood...through your writings you should make women realize that they are NOT weak in fact they are stronger than men in every aspect...


P.S- please i beg of you dear please do not take any offence this is purely my POV...i am extremely sorry if i hurt you in any way but after reading all that i could not control myself n so i wrote all those things...m really sorry

I am a woman and will never degrade a women... This is just a start dear and I was actually about to put my note on this point.
This is just a start of the story... It is not to Degrade a woman, as If you read my other FF (yeh rishton ke uljhan), it will show how Maan falls in love with Geet due to her strong values.
It is to show how love has made her to bow infront of him, she is bending for her love not to a MAN and going further the story is going to prove that anyone ... irrespective of men or women anyone who falls in love... in deep love is going to do bend to any lenght to get it...
Just wait and watch ... I am always saying to my readers that Maan's turn will come too and this is just a start. Also we will see the other side of Geet too when she will stand for her own self.
This is just a start of the story.
Thanks,
Anu.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Lovely and mind blowing update. I love how u have written it out in detail.

but I am not happy with Maan 😡 I am so mad at him.
How can he do such to her...she is breaking day by day...little by little...i hate him😡
Silence and humiliation is the worst killer ever.

A person can put up with anger, harsh words..etc...but silence and humiliation...
it brings ur self-esteem down to the pits..and that is exactly what he is doing to geet.
I feel he is an abuser...

I hope he changes...

N once he changes I hope he repents big time

Hi Dear,
Thanks for such an awsome comment. All your wish will be fulfilled and Maan's turn will come for sure when he realises his love.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow Anu...2 updates...so i will comment also twice...you deserve it girl

part 9
Maan is being stubborn and wants to blame his heart's desire also on her. Koi na...this is first step towards realising he do anything to be with her...conciously or unconciously
He is admiring her beauty when she is sleeping...again that is just a start. I am sure he will get so habituated to ehr soon that GHSP dialogue is gonna repat - "Mujhe tumhaari aadat ho gayi hai Geet"
But you know what saddened me a lot. Her expectation that he will be angry with her. Her disbelief that he did not shout at her. At some level reminds me of domestic abuse cases where wife is so scared of her hubby that even his being calm is a signal of impeding storm. And indeed taht is the case. Instead of taking out his anger, Maan has decided to punish her by humilation. If I wasn't sure about her love, I would have felt this was as bad as doemstic abuse.
I am happy that she will be joining office. Atleast some semblance of sanity in madness

Hi Dear... thanks for understanding my POV...
some ppl may think that I am degrading women... but that is not at all what I am trying to show...
This is just a start and all she is taking on is because she is madly in love with him but with time and situation that he is creating... she will change and he will change...
This is just to show how she is bending infront of her love and not infront of a Man
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Sorry Di like button is not working and sorry for the late commenta as well Di my job timings r from morning 9- evening 7 so from now onwards i will b late

ok now the update
maan can u pls explain me what humiliation did u have to go through o u might be talking abt the so called proposal right? Did geet come and tell u k pls marry me i so wished k geet tumhe mana kar dethi ...
khair u r enjoying the sight of ur beautiful wife u want her attention but u r also hurting her and enjoying it u r a devil maan andd i hate u
ek salah ho sake to maan lena itna bhi geet ka dil zakmi mat kar dena k tum kabhi bhi uspar malah laga na paau... u said u don't love her...well aage aisa na ho k tum ye bol dho k geet i love u but geet uss par bharosa na kare
good pure update mein ek baar toh tum irritate hue... geet well done maan ko nahi bataya bahut achha kiya... good u rejoined the office
i m sure aage maan geet se kahega k join KC ... dekh lena
continue soon di
love u loads
urs- piggy (Piya)

Hi Piggy Loved you comment Dear...
Your anger on maan is justified and he will pay full for his deeds trust me.
this story will show both side of both Maan and both side Geet too...
I will never show Geet week... see she has already started enetring in him... his realization is left
But trust me I will show Geet's strong part too...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hi Piggy Loved you comment Dear...

Your anger on maan is justified and he will pay full for his deeds trust me.
this story will show both side of both Maan and both side Geet too...
I will never show Geet week... see she has already started enetring in him... his realization is left
But trust me I will show Geet's strong part too...

i trust u completly Di
and i know geet is not a week girl she is strong and i m sure maan will repent but i know k time lagega and i will wait for that time to come...i love this ff of urs love u di😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
I have replied to many of you. I wanted to reply to all of you but got stuck with something else and to give you the update sooner I just could not reply to many of you. So please don't be angry on me.
Now, for actually why I am writting this note
To all of you who thinks that I am degrading woman in this FF, I want to say, No dears thats not at all that I am trying to show.
When Geet is bending in front of Maan, its not a woman bending infront of Man. Its her love for him which is making her helpless. She is not weak that you will see as the story will proceed.
She will carry on with her career and I am soon going to show her different side.
This story will show you how love can change anyone and when Maan will realise his love he will also go to any extent.
This is not between Man and Women but it is about Love. I am a women myself, so I will not degrade women by any chance.
This is just a start of a story so please do not jump to any conclusions. I promise you it will be different.
I was not intending to give the story heads up but as readers may take things wrong, I had to to this.
Thanks
--Anu
Will Give an update today.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice story waiting for ur update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di i agree with u and i believe that love is a magical and the most divine feeling and it has the potential to change anyone
go ahead with ur story di i have full faith on your writing skills
love u- Piya

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