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Tinu

@007jindal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Oh superb. Read the whole upds in 1 go. Reli enjoyd. Felt too bad 4 geet. Maan is too egoistic, stubborn n mean

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

wow Anu...2 updates...so i will comment also twice...you deserve it girl

part 9

Maan is being stubborn and wants to blame his heart's desire also on her. Koi na...this is first step towards realising he do anything to be with her...conciously or unconciously

He is admiring her beauty when she is sleeping...again that is just a start. I am sure he will get so habituated to ehr soon that GHSP dialogue is gonna repat - "Mujhe tumhaari aadat ho gayi hai Geet"

But you know what saddened me a lot. Her expectation that he will be angry with her. Her disbelief that he did not shout at her. At some level reminds me of domestic abuse cases where wife is so scared of her hubby that even his being calm is a signal of impeding storm. And indeed taht is the case. Instead of taking out his anger, Maan has decided to punish her by humilation. If I wasn't sure about her love, I would have felt this was as bad as doemstic abuse.

I am happy that she will be joining office. Atleast some semblance of sanity in madness

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

superb parts!

feeling sorry for geet!

i am hating this maan!

maan will 4 sure regret this later!

continue soon!

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

part 10

They are getting serttled in the new relationship. Geet is ready to try as ever and Maan is ready to umiliate as ever. But there is a change. He has started admiring her beauty, her presence, her care and her being around him. Be it his morning drool session, her cooking, her being around him. He has already got used to it.

Let's hope Maan misses her a bit as she joins office. His ego will not let him ask her to work with him but he will surely miss those small gestures he got used to in just one week.

But I got confused in the last. I thought she did prepare breakfast for him. Did Dadi switch it to see his reaction or did I misread it?

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srilu

@srilu_123

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

hai

just awesome and great

hope maan understand his feeling s soo n

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pinky6

@pinky6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#576

awesome part 👏 update soon😊

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590865

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Loved both the parts
maan is such a mean jerk!! He is hurting her at the same time wants her too!!!

Plz continue soon n thx for pm

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

I can't believe that Maan can be such jerk😡 he is satisfying his ego by torturing poor Geet😭 I really wish Geet should also start going away from him then only he will realize his mistake, but usmain bhi kahi deri na hojaye...

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Awesome update once again. So maan is nt ready to accept. I only fear is dat it dont get too late 4 him to realize nd he left wid nthing bt only remorses. I feel pity on Geet. Actually i pity Maan who's nt understanding her unconditional Love

Loved it. Update d nxt part soon. I eagerly wait 4 dis FF of urs to update. Update soon dear.