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Posted: 19 years ago
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its been like a week man PLEASE update!!!

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Pyar Hua - Part 4



The next morning Kripa managed to wake up early. She was just about to get out of bed when Angad came into the room, to her horror.

"Don't you knock? What do you want?" She slid under the covers and looked at him over the top.

"Rest assured my intentions are completely honorable."

"Kidnapping is not honorable, and it's only 6:30!" Kripa retorted.

"I'm aware of that. I wish to talk to you sensibly. I have to go into the City this morning. I had hoped to avoid it, but I can't."

"Don't mind me." Kripa tried to hide her glee. Her words however did not set his mind to rest.

"I do mind you Miss Sharma. I'm aware that if left alone you will get into your own mischief and possibly in danger. Will you give me your word that if I take you to the City with me you will not try to escape?"

"No!" Kripa had no desire to go into the City with him. He would constantly be on guard and she had no idea where he would be going. If she stayed at the house she could escape at leisure.

"Very well." Angad walked to the dressing table and took her handbag.

"What are you doing? How dare you touch my things?"

"My trip to the City is urgent and I can't just leave you here. You'd simply run away. Therefore you're coming with me, minus your passport, money and ticket. I expect to see you downstairs in one hour. I have a meeting this morning and it is a long drive to the City." Angad then walked out the door closing it behind him.

Kripa was fuming. It was beyond belief! What did he intend to do with her, tie her to the chair while he attended the meeting? But then again, the City was full of people, many who would speak English. And she would be close to the airport. Things weren't that bad after all. He had played right into her hands. By the time breakfast came she was resting on her pillow and smiling happily.

********

An hour later Kripa was getting ready to sit in his Mercedes as Angad held the door for her.

"Please remember Miss Sharma you are in high heels, it would be unwise to leap from the car as soon as the gates open."

"I know I'm trapped for now," Kripa assured him, "I've given in for the moment."

"I doubt it," he muttered as he started the car and drove off.

They left the house behind and sped down the drive.

"So will I be attending the meeting with you?" Kripa asked calmly.

"You are not. You Miss Sharma are big trouble." Angad snapped.

"I intend to be." Kripa shot back. "So if I'm not going with you, what am I doing? Does that leave me wondering around looking at the sights." Kripa asked pleasantly.

"I does not. I intend to lock you up. I have a place."

"That's it I'm getting out!" Kripa said astonished.

"At this speed, you astonish me Miss Sharma. I'd like to see it." Angad said amused.

"I just want to go home." Kripa said controlling her tears.

"And I've promised you, you will as soon as Prithvi's engagement is over."

He never once doubted his brother. Did she look like a seductress? Kripa blurted it out angrily.

"Do I look like a seductress?!"

"No." Angad replied grimly, and that was all that was said throughout the journey.

********

The house was in one of the best suburbs. The house stone-built and elegant. The whole street was deserted. The shutters to every window, each one tightly closed, giving it an alarming look that further depressed her. Kripa knew this is where he intended to leave her, locked up.

Surprisingly it was neither dark nor gloomy inside the house. It was a beautiful house. There were pretty touches, from paintings to plants. It was light because the shutters were also louvered but very solid-looking nevertheless. Kripa eyed them bitterly.

"How do you know I won't open the shutters and go?" she muttered.

"They are locked securely. The shutters throughout the house are locked to save yourself the trouble of exploration." He went up the stairs and she trailed along. They entered a bedroom, were the shutters were also locked.

"Can't you at least open the shutters in here? It's not like I'm going to jump into the street and kill myself." Kripa said irritably.

"You would probably try, I don't trust your judgement," he snapped, "and anyway you would most certainly try to attract passers-by."

"Whatever," Kripa muttered under her breath knowing he had read her like a book, "So who lives here?" Kripa asked.

"I own the house, but a woman lives here."

"A girlfriend perhaps, Mr Khanna. You obviously have set rules for yourself and quite different rules for other people. You kidnap me and lock me up because you THINK I'm involved with Prithvi, but it's quite alright for you to keep a woman in her!"

"You would have not been locked up if you would have stayed in your own country! And I'm not about to become engaged and the woman in question is not after my money. She has plenty of her own!" Angad looked at her ferociously.

"Don't be too complacent, she's probably trying to get more!" Kripa bit out sarcastically.

Suddenly Angad stopped talking and looked at her with a slight smile on his face. "Are you suggesting a woman would only be after me for my money?" Angad said slowly walking towards her and locking her to a wall.

"I…I'm n..not concerned with your affairs." Kripa said nervously. Kripa pushed him away hastily as she realized they were quite alone.

Angad held her arm and pulled her back towards him, whispering in her ear. "It was probably a good idea to put some distance between us, otherwise I might have had to prove that there's more to me than just money…Miss Sharma."

Kripa found herself staring into his eyes again, the hypnotized feeling coming back. She made a great effort and spun around, walking off down the stairs, her cheeks burning. He came down behind her.

"I have to leave for my meeting. I'll be back this afternoon." Angad walked out, locking the door securely behind him, and Kripa went into instant furious action.

If she could open the front door it would be easiest line of escape. She searched the drawers in the kitchen and came up with a long thin knife. In spite of many attempts Kripa couldn't open the lock. Maybe the locks on the shutters would be easier to handle?

They were not. She tried every one and there was not so much as a creak. The house was tight as a drum and she was right where she had been before.

All the activity had made Kripa hot and she longed to throw the windows open and let in some air. She peered through the cracks in the shutters and saw that the street outside looked hotter now than it had been when they arrived.

She felt stifled, claustrophobic. He didn't care if she collapsed in here. She went from room to room but it was the same. Kripa felt so hot, sleepy and agitated. At this rate she would be lying unconscious on the floor.

Kripa slogged up the stairs and went into one of the bedrooms. She was starting to feel light-headed now. She decided to take a cold shower and then lye down on the bed wrapped up in a towel. She would lie on the bed until she heard Angad come in and then she would quickly get dressed. It was the obvious solution.

Kripa fell asleep. It was something she should have expected but it never occurred to her. She had been making escape attempts since she had arrived in Greece and she was exhausted.

When Kripa opened her eyes later, she was horrified to see Angad standing in the doorway. Kripa just sat there looking at him shocked. When she came out of her momentarily disoriented state she quickly grabbed the bed cover and covered herself with it, not looking at him.

Angad just stood in the doorway smirking at her. "Miss Sharma, Miss Sharma, you would stop at nothing to get your way would you? So you finally showed your true colours didn't you? I'm glad you did, because I was starting to think that I had you all wrong."

Kripa looked down at her fingers. She would not embarrass herself further by crying in front of him. Kripa was so filled with shame that she couldn't meet his eyes. She knew how it looked and he was not about to give her the benefit of the doubt.

"I-I didn't mean to fall asleep," Kripa whispered, "I felt tired and I-I was just lying down."

"A good story. So what was this all about Miss Sharma. Was it meant to make me let you go or have you just diverted your attention from Prithvi to me?"

"I was hot!" The tears of shame suddenly escaped pouring down her face. "You locked me up in this stifling house and left me to suffocate! I-I couldn't take it!"

Angad just stared at her for the moment, the mockery dying from his face. Kripa couldn't stop crying. He muttered something under his breath, taking a step towards her and then stopping.

"I forgot to turn on the air-conditioning. Damn it! It never entered my mind."

He turned and strode out of the room and a few minutes later she heard the sound of the air-conditioning unit flare into action, but this made no difference to Kripa. She just sat there and cried. It had all been too much for her. The way he had captured her and isolated her. And now the final humiliation. She was wrapped in the covers, her head resting on her knees. She wanted to go home so much that she was ready to scream and scream.

"I'm sorry Kripa. I've been very cruel to you." He sat beside her on the bed and she just cringed away. "I'm not going to hurt you, I'll never hurt you."

"You've locked me up and now you've tried to smother me!" Kripa screamed.

"I didn't realize how hot it would be in here. In any case I was too busy arguing with you to remember the air-conditioning."

Angad suddenly cupped her face in his hands and looked into her eyes.

"Aren't you going to forgive me Kripa?" Angad asked as he wiped her tears with warm fingers.

"You can't seem to understand that I'm a prisoner here can you? No amount of kindness can wipe that out. Why can't you understand that I don't want to marry Prithvi and he's lying about us." Kripa said fiercely.

"Do we have to bring Prithvi up," Angad said standing up, "I know that if I relax my attention for even a minute, you will escape and go to him."

"I won't!"

"I hope you're saying the truth because if you're not we'll have to go to the island and settle things an entirely different way. Like this."

Angad cupped Kripa's face again and met her lips with his own. The world started spinning around Kripa as Angad Khanna kissed her. Kripa wanted to push him away and scream at him. This was Angad Khanna after all and she hated him. But she couldn't break away. She hardly remembered her own name as Angad deepened the kiss.

Angad was not in the best state himself. He never thought kissing Kripa would be like this. She was so warm, so sweet, and so delicate in his arms. He knew that he had to pull away before he lost all control.

Angad forced their lips aparts and all Kripa could do was look at him mesmerized. When Angad spoke her trance broke and anger resurfaced.

"Prithvi wouldn't want to marry you if you were already my girlfriend." Angad said calmly, trying hard to hide the affect she had had on him.

"I'll-I'll kill you." Kripa whispered angrily, trembling and breathing hard from the earth-shattering kiss she had just faced.

"I'm sure you would want to get dressed first Miss Sharma, I'll be waiting downstairs." Angad left the room closing the door.

As soon as Angad left the room, Kripa fell on the bed closing her eyes. She was horrified to discover that she was getting used to him. She was getting accustomed to his tall frame, his black hair and dark eyes. Even his odd humour. Heavens! She even found him protective. Kripa remembered what he had said about getting attached to your captors. It was not going to happen to her. Never!


I'm sorry for the delay. I would have posted this part earlier, but my Internet was playing up. 😡 Anyway I hope you like the part. Keep your comments coming, they're what keep me typing. 😃


Coming up: Kripa's escape attempt goes horribly wrong and now she's fighting for her life. Will Angad get to her in time? 😕

Edited by AngadKripa4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow......amzing continue soooooooonnnnnnnnn 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey
that was gr8 cant wait till the next part . cont soon
ruch
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW!!!! if ur gonna make us wait this LONG and then give us THIS good of a part then i hope ur computer messes around more often!! lol just joking that was a great part please continue soon and i take my words back i DONT wanna wait that long AGIN!!! so please continue SOON!!!
lots of luv and suagr
Hina
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I just caught up with ur fanfic... in one word... Engrossing. Simply loved it. Beautifully written. Thank u for such a wonderful story.
Luv
Anu.
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Excellent part plz continue soon. 👏
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it was graet plz cont. soon
Kashish 😛
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wow pls cont soon......ab aur intzaar nahin hota 😭
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that was an awesome part! im so happy they kissed! Cont. soon!

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