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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
finally maan stoped geet
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

wohooo

finally maan stops her...

let see ab uss sasha-tasha ka kya hota hai...

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Posted: 13 years ago
finally he stopped the guards
eager to know why he took her back to file room
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok finally Maan stops her
I think Maan ka dimaag thikane aagaya
Waiting to read what gonna happen now
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
note: thx for ur lovely comments! love reading ur comments as usual.. enjoy guys! :) ~sara~

PART 24:

maan takes her back in the files room..
everyone is shocked to see geet standing nect to maan and especially maan holding geet's hand!
sasha and tasha are double to double shocked!
sasha: (whispering to tasha) yeh bhenji types yahan ker rahi hai.. woh bhi maan sir ke saat..us ko to maine yahan se nikal diya tha na...
tasha: (whispers back) yes ma'am. even i am thonking about that..
maan still holding on to geet's hand.. he yells..
maan: SASHA!!!
sasha gets scared and comes forward slowly..
sasha: j-ji M-MK...
maan then nods at geet..
maan lets go of her hand..
sasha gets it whats happening..
sasha: MK aap is ki baaton main mat aaye.. shes lying..
maan: shutup sasha! apni bakwaas band kero.. how dare u do this? i trusted u out of all.. but u?! aur geet ne kya kiya tha tumhare saath jo tumnay uske saath aisa kiya..
thats when adi comes in..
adi: kyun ke yeh jealous ho rahi thi geet see.. maan sir aap geet ko zayada importance daitay thay and sasha..
sasha: shutup adi..
maan: bakwaas band kero sasha.. main yeh kabhi bhi nahi bardasht ker sakta ke koi bhi mere employee ke saath aisa behave keray chahay woh meri hi employee ho..
do u understand?! and how dare u talk to adi like this.. main tumhay abhi is naukri se nikalta hoon..
sasha: MK aap is bhenji types ke liye mujhay job se nikaal saktay hain! is ki to main.. stupid idiot.. bilkul kameeni hai yeh..
maan: SASHA!
maan raises his hand to slap sasha.. but geet holds on to his arm..
geet: daikho sasha yahan se sharafat se chali jao is se pehle maan sir ke saath saath mera haath bhi uth jaye..
maan: SECURITY SECURITY!
the security comes..
maan: maan take her of here (pointing towards sasha) forever! (to sasha) ab tumhain is job pe wapis aanay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.. I FIRE U!
sasha shots an angry look at the security guards.. but they didnt care!
with that said the security takes sasha out of here..
maan: (to tasha) aur tum! i will give u one last chance! mujhay pata hai sasha was too bossy on u so i hope jo tumnay kiya geet ke saath u didnt mean to do that! aur agar mujhay tumharay khilaf aik shikayet bhi aayi na to i will fire u just like i did to sasha..
tasha nodded non stop..
tasha: yes sir..
adi comes close to tasha n whispers..
adi: u can stop nodding tasha..
tasha stops n smiles..
maan: (still angry n he's talking to the whole staff) tum sab ke paas koi kaam nahi hai kya.. we have 1 hr till its time to go home.. SO GET TO WORK!!!
everyone gets out of there in one min..
when geet is about to leave, maan stops her by holding on to her arm..
maan: aik min geet..
geet stops!
geet turns around..
maan pulls her towards him n she falls on her chest!
MAHIII...
they were kind of hugging each other accidentally..
geet looks up to him n maan looks down..
MAHIII...
maan: geet..
geet: ji..

MAAN'S POV:
kaisay kahoon main us ko sorry..
i've never used this word before..
how man?!

NO ONE'S POV:
maan: geet.. main tumsay kuch kehna chahta hoon..
geet: ji..
maan: woh... i am... woh..
geet gets it wat he's trying to say..
geet: sir its ok.. u dont have to say sorry..
maan: nahin geet mujhay kehnay do.. i have to speak.. dont stop me..
geet shuts her mouth..
maan: geet.. jo maine tumhare saath kiya was unacceptable.. aur tumne mujhay sachai batanay ki koshish bhi ki but i was rude to u..
geet just looks down..
maan: maine tumharay saath aisa behave kiya since day 1 ke bas.. i dont know y sasha did this to u.. but geet.. i ..
geet's tears starts to flow..
maan notices..
maan: plz geet dont cry..
he wipes her tears..
maan: i m sorry geet!

MAAN'S POV:
there i said that word..
i dont know how but i did..

GEET'S POV:
i cant believe it he said sorry to me!
thats unbelievable..
now all of my pain is gone..

NO ONE'S POV:
geet smiles..
n maan also smiles..
geet: its ok maan sir.. u dont have to say sorry.. i understand!
maan again smiles..
maan: lets go geet..
geet nods n they leave the room..
geet is so happy..

AFTER HALF AN HOUR:
both are so lost in their thoughts..
none of them can concentrate on their work..
they both are thinking about that little scene in the files room..
OVER TO MAAN:
tasha comes in maan's cabin..
she ofcourse knocks first..
maan: hmmm.. ander aao..
tasha: maan sir mr. sharma is waiting in the conference room..
maan: per aaj hamari un ke saath meeting nahi thi..
tasha: yes sir.. u r right.. but he said there is an emergency.. he called geet there too..
maan nods n goes..
tasha goes over to geet..
tasha knocks..
geet: come in..
tasha comes in n geet is shocked to c tasha knocking?!
tasha: emm geet ma'am aap ko mr.sharma bula rahay hain conference room main..

GEET'S POV:
i think i m deaf..
did i just hear her say ma'am to me!!
this is the most shocking news i've ever heard..
geet: ji? ma'am..
tasha: yea ma'am.. aap mujhse bari hain i mean in the office.. u r a secretary n i m just an ordinary employee.. so izzat to daini chahiye na..
geet puts her fingers in her ears..
she shakes it just to make sure if she didnt hear her wrong..
geet: tasha u dont have to say ma'am to me.. hum dono ki same age hai job main secretary hoon to kya huwa.. but plz dont call ma'am... call me geet..
tasha: ok geet.. so chalain..
i nod n we both leave..

NO ONE'S POV:
geet enters the conference room..
maan and mr. sharma are waiting in the room..
mr. sharma: aaa ms. geet.. welcome.. kaisi ho aap?
geeT: i m fine sir how are u?
mr. sharma: perfect.. my wife really admires u..
geet: thats too nice of her..
mr. sharma: yea.. i've told her everything about u n ur plan on pur dream house.. she loved it..
geet: thank u sir..
mr. sharma: anyway i came here to invite u both on a party i m throwing..
maan and geet: ji?
mr. sharma: woh actually its my son's birthday n i m throwing a surprise party.. i wanted to invite u..
geet: (blurted out) how old is son sir?
mr. sharma: he's 19..
geet: oh great.. he's almost my age..
maan looks over to geet..
maan gives her this glare to tell her to be quite..
geet looks at him..
geet shuts up..
maan: yes sir we will love to come..
mr. sharma: heres the invitation card..
he hands maan the invitation card..
mr. sharma: ok maan n geet i will take a leave.. see u at the party tomarrow 8 pm..
mr. sharma leaves..
geet has a smile on her face.
geet: (blurts out) party!! sir hum party main jain gain na?
maan glares at her...
maan: i will think about it geet..
geet: (murmurs) DUSHT DHANAV!
maan: kya kaha tumne..
geet: (eyes widened) maine! nahin to..
geet walks out of there but maan pulls her by her arm..
geet again hits her head on his chest..
maan: (whispers) kya kaha tumne...
geet: maine.. han maine kaha ke main ghar ja sakti hn.. i mean i m done with my work.. aur 7 baj gaye hian..
maan lets go of her..
maan: hmmm...
geet leaves smiling..
maan is also looking her leaving..
he shakes his head in she's crazy..
maan: pagal hai bilkul.. aur mujhe bhi kerday gi..

precap: kya jain gain maan n geet party pe ya kerain gain kaam in the office??


hope u all like it! :) cant wait to read ur comments! ~sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 23 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update lovedit
sasha thrown out of office
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 24 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally MU is over and sasha is fired 👏
was super duper update
loved it
want maan to get J big time in the party 😛
cont. soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update luvd it...acha hua ki maan ne sasha ko Fire kiya...plzzz continue soon..

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