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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
Episode 40

(the next day...nandini goes 2 wake up manasvi 4 univeristy...)

nandini:manasvi...manasvi...come on....first day 4 university...
manasvi(drowsy): huh....what....?
nandini: univeristy....
manasvi(waking up): OMG.....university.....oh...same thing like high school.....(remembers how she was late in the 1st episode..and met suraj)
nandini: daydreams later gal...pehle get ready....
(manasvi quickly gets ready and comes down..)
tulsi: oh hi..beta....breakfast?
manasvi: no..mom....late 4 university....
tulsi: come on..u r not that late..
maansvi: luk..i'll grab a apple..and eat it on the way...
savita: beta...take thakurji's blessings...
manasvi: uff...(she does so....and quickly leaves)
karan: hehehe....still the same...
bhoomi: hmm...manasvi aunty...so naughty...late 4 university...
karan: u r no less....r u bhoomi...quickly finish up yur cereal..and u need 2 go 2 school...
bhoomi: i'm finishing it...take a chill pill....
nandini(laughs): come on..bhoomi...less jokes now...
bhoomi: ok..ok...ok...

(next scene: arjun goes 2 wake up suraj)

arjun: hey...brother.....get up....first day at university...
suraj: whateva...
arjun: dont repeat history wid what hapened at high school...
suraj: huh...?(wakes up).....OMG.....first day...at uni....OMG....
arjun: now that got u going....
suraj: um..bhaiyya...get my leather jacket..and white t-shirt and jeans out plz....
arjun: uff...sure...(takes out his stuff...suraj quickly gets ready...and goes down)
shaku: beta...come on..have a bite...
suraj: nah..mom....running late....
baisa: have some coffee....
suraj: fine then....(grabs the cup and drinks it all up)
bhoomi: carefully....could be bad 4 yur body...
suraj: it isnt bhabhi...anyways luv ya all....bye...
arjun: bye....hasnt changed yet.....still the same...
shaku: thats what i like about my cute son....
mamaji(thinking): what if..manasvi is in the same uni? (grins)

(suraj-manasvi both meet up at uni)

suraj: hi..
manasvi: hi..(both hug each other)
suraj: so..shall we go in?
manasvi: yeah....
suraj: so...how have u been?
manasvi: umm....fine...what about u?
suraj: ok...but i missed u...
manasvi: me too....but..we still live close to each other...
(suraj-manasvi have their first lesson....and later have their break)

suraj: no..one was suspicious rite?
manasvi: no...and did yur uncle..?
suraj: nah...but he knows that we r dating each other...but..my family doesnt believe him yet..
manasvi: thank god....umm...shall we take a walk in the park?
suraj: all rite...sure...(both go 2 the park)
manasvi: if yur family members do find out about us...what would be their reaction?
suraj: um...well my bhabhi will be happy...she is restless 2 meet her devrani...mom and dad might be ok...actually everyone might be ok...but kakasaheb and mamaji...a little rough probably...
manasvi: ansh will kill me....if he finds out about this....
suraj: while i live...he wont...
manasvi: so chhweett....
(manasvi trips...pulling suraj towards...both fall down and roll down the hill.....suraj lands on top of manasvi)

suraj: r u...ok.?
manasvi: yeah..i am....my arm hurts a little...
suraj: where?
manasvi: just on the shoulder joint....
suraj: aww...it'll be ok....(smiles and puts his arm around her...but has his other hand on his heart)
manasvi: r u ok?
suraj: i'm ok...i think my neck got a pain...(manasvi kisses suraj on the cheek..then kisses him on the neck...)
suraj(letting go of her): stop it manasvi....plz...
manasvi: u said one in love cant be controlled....why should i control myself?
suraj(stroking her cheek): i didnt mean that...
manasvi: then what?
(both gaze at each other...and r about 2 kiss each other...suraj goes towards her...and kisses her lightly)

suraj: i think...break is over....lets go...
manasvi: ok..

Precap: Suraj takes Manasvi to meet Kashish. Kashish is shocked on learning something about Manasvi.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
lovely........ 👏
they look soooooooooooooooo sweeetttttt.... nazar naa lage 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
lovely yaar....cho cho cho cho cho cho chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet... 😳 😳 😳 yaar that was soo romantic........bas mamaji koi fuss create na karian......
yaar keep up da good work. 👏 👏 👏 ....bas aisi hi romantic stories likhti raho.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
Episode 41

(Arjun and bhavri r getting ready go 2 work...)

arjun: bhavri....hurry up...
bhoomi: ok...i am....just need 2 set my hair rite....
arjun: ok...chale..if u r ready...
bhoomi: yeah..lets go...
arjun: ok...bye mom...bye....dad..
shaku: bye beta....

(arjun-bhoomi leave)

suraj: umm...kashish di...i need 2 tell u sumthing...
kashish: what...?
suraj: di...i'm in luv...
kahsish(surprised): what?
suraj: seriously...not the flirting kind...but really..i'm in luv....
kashish: really...who is she?
suraj: manasvi....her name is...
kahsihs: i knew it....that u luved her ....sumhow...
suraj: di...i'm even seeing her...going out wid her...
kashish: does..any1 else know about this?
suraj: no..i told u...so..if they do find out...u cna back me up...
kashish: hey...anytime..brother....anyways....can i meet manasvi...?
suraj: sure...erm...di...there is one more thing..
kashish: what?
suraj: erm..mamaji is onto me...he knows about this...
kashish: what....uff...mamaji bhi na....
suraj: he is always like that....
kashish: ok...just be careful....from now on...
suraj: di..wheneva i go out...just make sure..mamaji is not there....2 follow me...just get him busy wid some other job....
kashish: anything 4 u...
suraj: thanx...di...
kashish: erm..hey suraj...the family is going out 2nite...
suraj: where?
kashish: erm.....to Mr. sharma's house...4 dinner...will stay there pretty long...i was wondering..if manasvi can come over...i want 2 meet her...
suraj: sure di....

(later in the afternoon....suraj-manasvi meet up in the park...suraj is sitting down..wid manasvi in his arms...)

suraj: umm..manasvi...can i say sumthing..?
manasvi: hmm..sure...
suraj: umm..yesterday..about the..ahem-ahem....
manasvi: i no..i didnt mind...
suraj: umm....manasvi...i told kashish di...about us two...
manasvi(tensed): what....why....?
suraj: dont worry..shez safe wid it.....and she wants 2 meet u...at my house...
manasvi: but..wid yur family....
suraj: dont worry....my family is going out....for dinner...
manasvi: oh..ok...anyways my family is going out 4 dinner...as well....some mr.sharma's place...
suraj: really..my family is going out as well...to that place....
manasvi: we have so much in common.....rite?
suraj: i no...(both hug each other...tightly)

suraj: ok..um...shall we go...?
maansvi: ok....but..umm...
suraj: umm..what?
manasvi: nothing...
suraj: no..what is it?
manasvi: i'll tell u later...
suraj: ok....

(the goenkas have gone out 2 dinner.....suraj-manasvi reach heritage house..kashish is in the living room..watching tv)

suraj: hi..di..everyone gone?
kashish: yeah...hi manasvi...
manasvi: hi..kashish didi....(both give a hug 2 each other)
kashish: really..i wanted 2 meet u..badly..anyways....what family r u from?
manasvi: from the virani family.... 😲
kashish(shocked): virani...?
manasvi: yeah..anything wrong....
kashish: r u mihir virani's daughter....and karan virani's sister?
manasvi: yeah why?
suraj: di..is there anything wrong?

(kashish has tears in her eyes....and luks at LK's idol...and remebers the incident that occured 2o years ago)

kashish: guys...u two better sit down..i need 2 tell u sumthing...
suraj: tell us what?
manasvi: is everything ok?
kashish: suraj...arjun bhaiyya was saying u asking about some raj goenka and paro virani rite?
suraj: yeah....?
manasvi: shez...from my family..
kashish: thats rite..maansvi..today..i will tell u who were raja nd paro..and what happened 20 years ago...that nite...and why...suraj..we neva mentioned anything about the viranis 2 u...

(suraj-manasvi exchange luks)

Precap: Kashish tells the story to Suraj~Manasvi. Both Suraj~Manasvi are hurt badly, Manasvi runs out of the Heritage House.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
oh..... poor thing 😭 😭
lagta hai no1 can see suraj happy...... always some prob 😭 😭
i just hope it gets solved
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
i hope k every thing gets better ....bas dono aik ho gayain......
good work shir................ 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
Episode 42

(Kashish begins 2 tell the story 2 s-m)

kashish: the viranis and the goenkas were great frends at the start....mihir virani and papa were childhood frends....and...arjun bhaiyya was like 5 yrs..and i was 4 yrs. Papa had a brother named Raj...Raj was luved by all...he was a bhabhi's smile, a mother's lamp in her eys..and he was all perfect....but made one mistake...he fell in love. Mihir virani had a sister named Parvati Virani...short named paro...paro and raj in lodndon..went 2 the same high school...that u two went to...and basically...first they were frends....and slowly..slowly...their frendship turned to luv...and they started to luv each other. But, one day papa was coming back..and heard sumthing...he saw that raj was wid paro..they were at dinner together..seeing the two holding hands..papa was shocked..thinking what will hsi best frends say. Raj and paro dated eahc other..like u two r. papa talked 2 raj chachu..and chachu...accepted the fact that he luved paro.

suraj: how do u know the story?
kashish: well....arjun bhaiyya, shakti bhaiyya and i saw everything from a corner...and heard everything...even mom and dad told us...but...forbidded us from telling u anything
manasvi: what happend..then?
kashish: later...paro started 2 feel unwell...always having headaches..feeling dizzy, and vomting, stomachahces and so on. She went to the docotrs and found out that she was...
suraj: was what?
kashish: pregnant....paro was expecting...she told this 2 pooja virani...yur chachi...manasvi..
manasvi: hmmm?
kashish: and...pooja aunty told paro 2 elope...wid raj..and paro told everything 2 raj...and pooja aunty prepared everything 4 them....but...sum1 in the virani family overheard pooja aunty and paro...and decides to find raj goenka...and not spare him. Paro and Pooja aunty waited 4 raj..but he didnt come. Raj went 2 get some money, and when he was coming back...mihir's brother took out his knife and stabbed raj..and stabbed again and again...he viranis brutally murdered our uncle..pooja aunty saw all this....and quickly told paro..paro was heartbroken...and ran quick as she could...and saw raj's body..blood everywhere...arjun bhaiyya...shakti bhaiyya and i were at the scene..and saw everything...paro picked up...raj's pistol..an shot herself in the head..and died there. Arjun Bhaiyya stayed there shcoked..shakti bhaiyya run away...but i stayed there...the viranis came out...and saw paro's body..and the goenkas came...and thus both families swore..that the viranis and goenkas shall be enemies 4eva...
manasvi(crying):my family killed yur uncle...?
kashish: and ater that...we hoped that history would neva repeat...but is repeating...u two met at the same school, u both r seeing each other..and...suraj..u even...
suraj: what...?
kashish: nothing....but..
suraj(luking at manasvi): so...yur aunty was expecting....and no wonder she said in one her letters..that "hez wid me...i dont feel alone.."...she was talking about the child...

(manasvi runs away from the house..and goes back 2 shanti-niketan...and sits down)

manasvi: what have i done....i repeated history again..(remembers when suraj and her kssed eahc other)...oh god....(starts crying)

(the next scene: dinner at sharma's house..the goenkas and viranis r sitting opposite each other..wid angry luks)

arjun: bhavri...pass me the water..
bhoomi: but its next 2 ansh bhaiyya...
ansh: DO NOT CALL ME BHAIYYA WITH THAT BLOODY TONGUE OF YURS!!!!
arjun(getting really angry): WATCH YUR TONGUE...U BLOODY VIRANI!!!
shaku; beta..plz...calm down...
arjun:no mom....i cant....what the hell do u viranis think of yurself?
karan: shut the hell up..arjun...
arjun: u shut up....
shakti: u insulted my bhabhi...if i insult nandini....how do u feel?
karan:insult my wife...how dare u?
tulsi: KARAN....JUST STOP IT!!!
ansh: well..at least in our family..us boys neva slept wid any girls..beofre marriage...like yur uncle did..arjun..
arjun: well at least the girls of our family...dont get preganant before mariage...like yur aunty did...
karan: at leats...we boys dont marry servants of low status
arjun: wel..at least the boys of this house..dont rape innocent girls..(luks at ansh..)
(the viranis lower their eyes wid shame)
mansen:shame....think before u talk....viranis....
shakti: lets get out of here....

(the viranis gets home..ansh and karna r in a enraged mood)

ansh: bloody goenkas....what the hell do they think of themselves....if i dont murder that arjun goenka or his entire family....then my name is not ansh virani!!!!
mihir: JUST SHUT UP...ANSH...whateva u did wid nandini in switzerland....we have 2 suffer....that arjun goenka..threw it in our face....threw the fact in our faces...that u raped nandini...
karan: plz papa....plz...dont remind me and nandini f that...and u ansh....keep a grip on that blinking loud voice of yurs...understand?
manasvi: what happened?
tulsi: nothing beta...
damini: u go upstairs....
(manasvi is upstairs in her room)

manasvi: i know..what happened....the goenkas confronted my family....i havr 2 forget suraj....but...but...i cant...

(next scene: heritage house)

arjun: bloody...viranis...mom..i'm not going to spare them..
siddarth: ENOUGH ARJUN.....ENOUGH!!!
mansen: siddarth..plz....hes yur son...
siddarth; thats the tragedy....why..did u raise yur voice..there?
arjun: papa....they insulted bhavri....
siddarth: u r actng like if bhoomi is only yurs...isnt she related 2 us....our bahu..we felt pain..when she was insulted....
(kashihs and suraj come down..)

suraj: what happened?
mamaji: oh nothing bhanje....another confrontation wid the viranis....
suraj(shocked): what...?
mansen(slaps khushal):JUST SHUT UP....beta suraj...its nothing....they're our business rivals....ok?
suraj: alrite...
yuv: umm..suraj...i want u 2 see my new car...lets go..and hang around 4 some time...shefali..u come as well...
kashish: can i come?
yuv: sure...come on..kashish....hurry...
kashish: ok..(all go out 2 the cinemas....)

suraj(thinking): luks like arjun bhaiyya had a argument wid the viranis...i cant let history repeat...what willhappen 2 mom...they wont be able 2 bear the fact that my only luv has sprung from my only hate....i have..have to...forget manasvi.

Precap:Suraj tries calling Manasvi, but Manasvi does not take his calls, meanwhile Kashish is getting more worried about the enmity between the two families.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
koool yaaar...good work... 👏
ab kiya hoga..how will they unite......
yaar u have reallly created a tension... 😕 😕 😕 ....etka k serials se bhi ziayada...... 😕 😕 😕 ...main to bas yehi sooche jaa rahi hun ..k ab kiya hoga..plzz update it soooon......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Mastang

koool yaaar...good work... 👏
ab kiya hoga..how will they unite......
yaar u have reallly created a tension... 😕 😕 😕 ....etka k serials se bhi ziayada...... 😕 😕 😕 ...main to bas yehi sooche jaa rahi hun ..k ab kiya hoga..plzz update it soooon......

they will unite....every jodi does unite in one way or the other....bas dekhti jao...😊😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey thanx 4 the remarks amal...adding episode 43 😃

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