FF- Business Trip with a Twist? Part 4 on pg 27

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Big hugs Mya and Aahana!!

🤗🤗

Fab update.

My god...Arnav is so incredibly hot when he's possessive like that!! Loved it!!

Khushi's reaction was cute. I love the way she understood his expression and went quiet!!

Looking forward to the next part girlies!!!

Thanks for the PM!!

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Shuveniya

@niya_s

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Yeah Awesome Update !!!! Arhi all the way baby 😊

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Commenting on First Part:

Ahahah! 🤣 The Titanic and Sallu Bhai references were brilliant! You girls have got such a great skill combining just the right amount of comedy with romance! I was giggling the whole way through, especially when she doesn't care and digs her fingers deeper and deeper into his arm! 😆

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Part 2 Comment:

What a classic part! 😉

"This felt good she decided. It felt very good and they stayed that way for what seemed like a minute for her. She did not want to let go, this was nice!"

Love her innocence in this part! She's decided it feels nice and so she feels she can and wants to remain like this forever! 😆

"...she stumbled almost falling on her face, grabbing him before her face become as round as a chappati. "

Simply 🤣 What a picture!? Your description is hilarious! You girls balance the romance with the comedy superbly! 👏

"Oh great! ab mein gaya, he thought to himself, turning around to face the lady who had a happy grin on her face like a child does when they find a lollipop."

Aw! What has Arnu Baba got himself stuck in! 😆 I can just imagine the comedic moments this storyline is going to give us!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

awesome update!!!!

hahahah loved the very possessive arnav!!

thank you soo much for the pm!!

wasnt bored at all!! loved reading the update!!

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

hey love the update... The way u have pen down it, it's superb.. Like it

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Loved it sooo much

khushi is right arnav does look good in a stuble

the end cracked me up

i can't wait til the next update

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Awesome Mya and Aahana my awesome duo!! Great work!! loved how Khushi admitted she liked his stubble!!😆and oo la la the "hubby-wife" in the king size room!!🤣hmm kya kya hoga agay?! 😉

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

awesome update...loved it very much...loved how Arnav kept saying "my wife" and Khushi's reaction was so cute...excellent job both of you...can't wait for the next part...please update soon