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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Hey nice characters loved it... Continue soon dear and thanks 4 PM aur Aage bhi karte rahna...

thanku so much i will 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Great character sketch...👏 Waiting for your FF...😉 Please continue real soon and thanks a lot for the PM...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Great character sketch...👏 Waiting for your FF...😉 Please continue real soon and thanks a lot for the PM...😊

aweee so sweet thanku so much i will 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Character sketch is so good.!Cant wait to read the ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaiiNa1

Character sketch is so good.!Cant wait to read the ff

thanku so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
part 1 abhay enters
guys this is not gone be so romantic as you all know i have to introduce pkyk characters
.abhay is coming from the london after 10 years
(in the raichand mansion at 8 :30 pm )
haseena :i am so happy today that my son is coming back moon ,
chand :dont be so happy sweet heart abhay ,he had so many responsblities after all he is the leader of the clan and the son of the king vampire(chand ) (in a hissing voice )
haseena :i know moon ,but dont start now coz our son is child now dont make him man .
chand :yaa a child who is 200 years old (with a smile )
they both smile at this .
(abhay comes at the day before as he wants to give surprise to his parents .)
he arrives at the air port main door he feel something strange that there is soneone he is waiting for coz he never fall in love with anyone .he moved . suddenly ,a girl comes hugged him and kissed him on her lips .
girl :ohh !!sugar ,i miss you much she said. remember we spend whole night in one bed .
abhay tried to remember as he sleeps with so may girls that he cant remember .he tried to remember
flash back
abhay and the girl is sleeping in the bed they both were naked .they both were kissing each other
g ;abhay give me more love
abhay stands from there and sit on the sofa
a :sorry sweetheart ,i have to go now as you know i am going back to my hometown
abhay wears her black shirt and moved ...
flash backk ends
present
abhay :ohh senorita ,what are you doing here bitch ??

girl :my name is jenna not senorita .who is senorita ??(with a shocked voice )
a : sorry my mistake what are you doing here??

jenna :darling , i am missing you so much common give me some love i had already booked a room .
abhay :what ?
abhay kick her ass and made hm far away from him
abhay with her special ears listen the murmuring of the girls .ohh look at that boy he is so hot and handsome .
abhay just smile at these words as they are common for him .when abhay moved for his car .one girl comes at him and said hii handsome soo what you are doing in night ?(with a seducive voice )
abhay leaned on his car
a :abhi toh kuch nahi but after seeing i have some plans in night with one beautiful girls .
the girls laughed at this .
g :can i take your phone for a minute??
a :sure (give him the phone )
the girl feed her number on abhay "s mobile
g :call me at night .
a :sure ,honey
girl kissed him on her cheecks and moved away
abhay (in mind)-ohh!!these dehrandun girls ...they are so fast no friendship ,no name only bed .they are so modern . abhay sits in his car .when abhay travell around 8 km and reach at his house
abhay before opening the door welcome home mr abhay raichand .
when abhay opens the door ( the entry is just like kabhi kuchi kabhi gam as sharuk enters in his house )
haeena and chand were shocked as well as maids also .

maids : abhay baba has arrived ...(the plates fall down from her hand )with a shocking voice .
chand and hassena get shocked but in few minutes they realized that he is abhay only .haseena teers falls down on seeing her son after so many years .they both comed and hugged abhay .
a:mom why are you crying i s everything ok ??(with a worried voice )
h :no abhay it is just that i am meeting you after so many years .
a : ohh mom !!
a :mom plz aap karun arjun baar mat dekha kijye ...
then suddenly sid enters and hassena gets more happy
sid :can i aslo enter in this vampire famile reunion ????
h :sure son come !!
sid also hugs them
a ;nahi toh mom khange mere abhayaaa and siddaa jaroor ayenge mere abhayaa and siddhaa jaroor aayenge .(witha teasing voice )
the whole family laughed at this .
h :but abhay and sid you are coming tommorw na !
a :mom me and sid make a plan that we come one day before so we can give you a surprize .
h ;yaa you make me happy .my sons makes me complete.i am nothing without my family .
h ; gets ready sons this is time we are together and go hunting for the forest .you may feeling hungry
a : mom hum toh toh buke bedhe rehte hai
sid nods at this
a and sid :yes mam (with attention postion )
h :you both were not gone stop teasing me...
abhay and sid leaved for their room .abhay is geting ready as sid is already get read y quickly .
enters in abhay "s room
a :what happened bro ???is everything thing ok you have good practise to change clothes quickly .after sleeping
with so many girls .
sid smiled at this .
they both moved out from the room .
chand : go my sons for hunting you both might feeling hungry .

abhay and sid ;yes dad
abhay and sid leaved as abhay is feeling someone special is coming
precap :piya comes fast and hugged abhay
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
that was a really good start
abhay is such a player
haseena seems to be a good mother
thanks for pm and update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hey that was gud.abhay is such a player.
Piya hugs abhay.nw what does that mean.loking forward to next update.continue soon.thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
hey... abhay is a real casinova... dats cool... cont soon... n thanks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

that was a really good start
abhay is such a player
haseena seems to be a good mother
thanks for pm and update soon

thanks shivani i will update soon 😳

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