Shifting Sands Thrd 2- epilogue/pg 71

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: goldenball

This thought of line is really interesting...Maan has already an impression that she is open minded girl and she may not mind...

I had one scene in coming parts where he again gets physical with her because of her continuous refusals...but then i deleted it because it was not now fitting into story...He is man of principles...values...he cannot become low again and again...

But this really interested me..I will keep it in mind...I will use it in my coming FFs.

yah Maan is a man of principles,values and we can't see him getting low...but he is angry young man also when somebody tries to deny him he gets impatient...

same thing we observe in GHSP serial also...he used to hate women but when Geet back answer him...he never hesitate to become physical...many times we see him pulling Geet towards him with force,even hurt her...that is why I thought in that line.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: goldenball

This thought of line is really interesting...Maan has already an impression that she is open minded girl and she may not mind...

I had one scene in coming parts where he again gets physical with her because of her continuous refusals...but then i deleted it because it was not now fitting into story...He is man of principles...values...he cannot become low again and again...

But this really interested me..I will keep it in mind...I will use it in my coming FFs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

u have already planned coming FFs...that is great...I am looking forward to reading that

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blueopal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

hey 2'y i had some free time...
that's y am here...awesome updates yaar...
geet said maan is affecting her😉...interesting...looking fwd...

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

that was awesom...why he cant do comittment, no one can know about the past unless you tell them yourself. and what if they know, i mean who care these days about the background. people will talk a few days then they will indulge in their own business...i think they both should give each other sometime to let them understand, what they want. and maan is right, they should just follow what their heart says. and let it happen... continue soon.

Edited by softly_spoken - 13 years ago

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

great update...

at least she told him that he affects her..

cant wait for more

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

part 23
i feel so bad for Geet...
Maan is making it more hard for her...
when he cant decide and assure why is he meddling with her life?
nice part...
wanna know what Geet has faced in the past...
cont soon dear...

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537048

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

Oh ho so geet admitted dat he affects her do update soon

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

awesome part
loved it
finally geet admit maan affect her
but here maan has to over come manythng but it'll not easy for him also
as I guess geet's hurt in past and her wound is too deep
it'll take long time to heal
continue soon