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Posted: 13 years ago

Mee too Joining you 🥳
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bacchi, please edit the indexxx because i wanna comment but idk where the part is and where i resed 😕🤣

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wait...the last part was 14 A on p27? is that all i have to comment on?
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i feel like throwing my laptop and breaking it. I am so angry. i was writing my comment to 14A and it suddenly deleted. Now i'm annoyed -_- i'll comment later when i'm less angryy 😡😡😡
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part 14A
At first i was so confused as to why muskaan was emphasising armaans name so much...then i thought maybe its because she's really close to him and they are good friends! But how would muski know armaan? i was thinking that maybe rahul introduced her to him but armaan was away for agess! But then, muski started defending him so i used my detective brain and i thought that maybe she knows that armaan and riddhima got married 😲😲😲 and she was so excited when armaan was talking about riddhima, so i became sure that muskaan knows the story of their marriage. But if she knows then why won't she tell riddhima? This is too confusing...i think i'm overthinking everything 🤣🤣 But maybe armaan told rahul to tell muski not to tell riddhima because he didn't want riddhima to be forced to love him just because he was her husband..maybe he wanted her to love him just because of his personality!
when muski was excited...even i got excited and i thought that maybe riddhima would tell muski that armaan was handsomee or that she likes him..but no she said that he doesn't have a right for that kiddish behaviour..BUT HE DOES! he is your husband..duh 😛🤣🤣 so then i got a bit sad that riddhima didn't like armaan but then EEKSSS she started blushing 🤣 she was remembering armaan and she was blushing which means that his closeness affected her 😉🤣🤣 OMKAJEN now i am pakkaaa sure that muski knows! because she said that armaan has a RIGHTT. how does muski know? 😲😲 and you know what? its so sad that muski is getting married. They've both lived an orphanage and they only depended on each other...and now i'm worried about riddhima, and how she'll cope without muskaan in her life. and i really don't want anything to change 😭😭 But just promise me that even if muski is married, she will still talk to riddhima regulary...atleast everyday on the phone and they'll meet atleast once a week and talk and talk until they get tired! OMKAJEN i'm feeling so sad, as if they are real people. i always get so senti 😡
and also please can you show armaans interaction with muski and adiii and the rest of the girls? Because i know that armaan has a close bond with rahul, atul and vivek but i also wanna see how he treats muskiii and i wanna know if armaan and muski have already met before! AND UPDATE JALDI. i want an update today. and whyyy do you keep avoiding me when i ask you about the surprise 😭 i want it now because i'm sure its about some new exciting storyline so i wanna knowww! and yes my comment deleted again 😭 idk if you believe me or not..but my comment seriously keeps deleting, i'm not just saying it because i don't want to comment. Grrr i hate this laptop.
Edited by kajen_hamesha - 13 years ago
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OMRADHU DI..Aap itni innocent che..Heheh..I dint avoid you jaani. I thought I will reply later after I give update warna you guys will kill me. Surprise toh mere haath mein nahi hai jaani. When its done, the other angel whos doing it for me will give it me and I will post it here. But I dont know when it is. Update on its way. I don't understand why its taking me so much time getting this right. UGH..
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Part coming in 2 minutes. So , if you any of you wants to reserve first. Be ready. Mujhse maarna mat.
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Heyya Jaanis,

I am back after that 2 weeks of horror. I am finally free and yeah back to updating YAS. I have nothing more to say because I think I should give the update first. You guys have been waiting for long for it. I owe it to you, guys. Just don't forget to read the essay I shall write at the end of the update. <3 Enjoy.

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Chapter #14(B): A Little Lighter

"So you have no answer to that, right?" Muskaan questioned with victorious looks.

"No. What give you the idea-" faught Ridhima. She definitely din't want to lose this conversation and make a huge blunder today. At least not today.

"So I guess I am the only one in this," murmured Muskaan.

"See Muski. It's not like that-" Ridhima bit her lip, unable to figure out anything in her muddled head.

Threatening tears in Muskaan's eyes brought fear. Sudden Fear. Till now, Ridhima hadn't understood how much of a thought Muskaan would give this. But now that she had seen the emotion swell up in regret, she felt like punching herself for being a heartless friend. She should have been the solacing and not the one changing topics. Her heart did somersaults when Muski leaned forward and burst into silent sniffs, hiding her face behind her hands. Helpless, Ridhima hugged, hoping fervently that letting her cry might calm her down.

*

"Hey bhagwaan," cried Rahul, as he dropped into his couch. "What a lovely start for a lovely day" he added sarcastically.

"It sure was," grinned Armaan happily, flashing his brilliant dimples.

"Look at you," said Vivek boringly. "And to think you are not even divulging me the facts. PSHT. I wonder what happened. Haina Ral?" Rahul nodded.

"And why would I tell you guys?" Armaan questioned back, in perfect attitude.

"Yeah yeah. Get on with your attitude. I just can't imagine what we would have to bear with when you both actually get together," complained Vivek.

Zooming his video player here and there, Armaan heard all this and obliged the duo accompanying him with bowing heads and too frequent nods. He din't waste by a minute without grinning with content.

There, Rahul and Vivek watched the kid in Armaan, lurking in his fantasy world; warm smiles adorned their cheeks.

Just then, Vivek's cell reverberated.

*

"I din't know you were this weak, Muski" said Ridhima. She put in her best to sound normal.

"Chi," Muski smacked her on her hands. Seconds later she drowned into tears once more, falling weak onto Ridhima.

"Hey Hey Hey," Ridhima said. "Why are you crying, Muski? You are not leaving me, okay. I will kill you myself if you pass a day without thinking of me. You are going to start a new life and I am not going to send you off to that life if you are going to weep like this." Ridhima asserted sternly, making sure her advice went right through the idiot's skull.

Muskaan's sobs slowly decreased light sniffs. Ridhima wiped off the tears from Muskaan's face. She cupped her cheeks with her hands and spoke softly.

"I will not leave you, Muski. You are my first and last friend. Aditi and me will always be here for you. I know you love Rahul. And so you are not doing anything wrong here. Just go and live your life.Okay. I want that. I really want that." She paused giving time for Muskaan to absorb in this much. Upon seeing a calmed out Muskaan, who was nodding slightly in acknowledgment, Ridhima heaved a sigh of relied and sat and straight, with a hand placed on Muskaan's thighs. Muskaan fell on Ridhima's shoulders and played with her engagement ring. Ridhima chuckled. How she loved Muskaan.

"So I guess getting married isn't going to bring too much difference between us," said Muskaan dreamily.

"Nope," said a confident Ridhima. Despite her own fears, she knew that their friendship could not be sidelines upon anything. Moreover, it wasn't about friendship anymore. It was about being each others family. It was a part of their strongest childhood memories. When they both were hardly 14 years, and on realizing what being an orphan truly meant, they had found solace agreeing on a life time deal of being the family of one another. Childhood innocence had not left them and God had blessed the two friends with pure happiness when they were together. All those moments would not just vanish into thin air, Ridhima was sure. The missing part of it was inevitable. But somewhere, deep down Ridhima was happy that at least one of the two was getting a true family. Though that bit, brought her to think about her own wildly unsure future, she ignored it leaving everything in the hands of the Almighty. Life had taught her to smile always and that's what she did. Even now.

"Hmm. So I guess I am being a kid." Muski analysed herself.

"Hahaha. Nothing new about that one. You always were." chuckled Ridhima.

Muskaan gave a 'whatever' expression and said: " I will miss Nest a lot. You know those woods and garden. It's gonna be different, right." Nest was the nickname given to the orphanage by the young adults there. A loving name for what others called 'orphanage' and spoke with either extreme sympathy or hard core mock.

"I know. But I am sure Rahul will keep you happier."

Muskaan blushed in embarrassment.

"So I guess this talk should end here." Ridhima contemplated.

"Yeah. I think this senti business is a black mark on my reputation." a laughing Muskaan said.

Ridhima shook her head at Muskaan and then joined in laughing.

"So two people. With a beautiful childhood. With a blessed friendship. With no secrets to part us. With a lovely bond. Hmm. I guess we are strong enough to be life time friends." calculated Muskaan.

Ridhima's pleasant look lifted. Why did this have to come up? Secrets. How she hated carrying a secret that Muskaan din't know. For long, she had debated on telling her or not. She had reasons to hide and reasons to disclose. And it was a huge mess. But now. Now, maybe their last few moments completely together, she had the insuperable urge to tell her and feel a bit of her burdens dissolve away. And anyways what difference would it make? What could Muskaan do? Nothing. Though the 'secret' had taken a back rest in her head, she decided that it would make her feel like a better friend. She went for it.

"Muski, I want to tell you something."

*

"Yeah, it's me only Madam." Vivek said irritated.

"What?"

"Now?"

"Par doctor ne toh-"

"You are out of your head Adi.Koi aur kaam nahi hai kya?"

"Acha Acha. Dont kill my ears. Main aa raha hoon"

Rahul and Armaan saw with non-understanding eyes as they heard the one-side conversation.

Vivek disconnected the call and got up. Vivek flung up and darted to the door.

"Where are you going?" asked Rahul.

"Women and their never ending demands." Vivek answered, waving his hands in air.





That's It guys. A short update. More like a short part to Chapter 14. This chapter is not complete; Another 1 or 2 more parts to go.😳 Guys, do take note of the following points.
  • From now on, I am not going to write in installments and edit the original posts because editing is a messed up thing for me and I don't know why it happens.So, I will be writing in parts. Now, because I call these parts, I am going to refer my previously known parts as chapters. Hope you guys get my point.
  • Updates maybe short or long depending on the time I get because I have Boards in a few months and before that a few competitive exams to attend to. But I will be writing. And to make sure I write, I want you guys. I intend to give you guys something every 3 days. Like anything, even a small paragraph. But I want to move the story. And from here, it looks like a never ending tale. And I don't want to feel like that all along. So, those of you guys who remember that 3 days are up and no updates are seen, do send me a PM and kick my a** and tell me to update. (No spamming here. ONLY PMs 😈)
  • PMs: I am top class lazy creature. So, please don't feel sad or bad or angry. I will definitely PM when I am upto it. But I will only PM after each chapter, not after each part.
Okay, that's all for tonight. Storyline ke baare mein I am not talking. I want you guys to read it. 😳
Love and Prayers
Amal
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Posted: 13 years ago

1st again...! am i d only one awake now????????😳

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okay, i wasn't first, but atleast i was second 🤣🤣 And that muskaan and riddhima scene was so sad 😭😭 I thought that only riddhima would be affected by this, and muskaan wouldn't really think about it because she would be excited because of her marriage...but i really underestimated the deep bond of friendship that muskaan and riddhima share! Both of them seemed so upset, and so broken just at the thought of being apart from each other...and even though their only fictional characters...they made me feel so sad! I can't imagine them being away from each other...why does muski have to move to delhi? I wanna cry 😭😭😭😭 Why can't they just stay together forever like a happy family? 😭 and OMKAJENNN RAHUL AND VIVEK KNOWWW 😲😲😲😲 HOW DID THEY FIND OUT? DID ARMAAN TELL THEM? 😲😕 and its so cute how they're teasing armaan 🤣🤣 and ammy is so cuteee...he's like a small bacchaaa who keeps smiling all day and gets excited at little things..i love this side of my ammy 🤣
and i seriously have no words to describe that muski and riddhima moment...it is just so sad 😭 saying its sad isn't enough...because its more than that...its heartbreaking 🥺 But riddhima's confidence that their friendhship would never break made me feel a lot better 😃 and i'm sure it won't , because years of friendship can't just break with a little bit of distance...look at both of us...we're good friends and we've never even seen each other...so i'm sure that riddhima and muski will make it through 😃😃 and they say...absence makes the heart grow fonder 🤣🤣 and god will make it all okayy...it might seem so hard to live without your best friend...but one day you'll be able to cope with it riddhima...it'll be okay i promise you <3 and i got so confused when muski said i will miss nest a lot 😕 i started thinking...are riddhima and muski birds? 🤣🤣 and muski is so cunning...she purposely said the no secrets thing because she knew riddhima had a secret 🤣🤣 and bechari riddhima felt so guilty...but muski already knows 🤣
and awww i loved the short vivad moment at the end 😃 i missed them so much 🤣🤣 poor vivek...i bet adu has some weird craving or something because of her pregnancy 🤣🤣🤣 and okay...i can't believe i actually understood the first part of the note at the end 🤣 and OMKAJENNN what are these boards? 😕 even CSG (maitree) has them in february or march...are they really hard? 😕 and YESSS...AN UPDATE EVERY THREE DAYS?? I LOVE YOUUU 🤣 and i'm sorry but i'm too lazy to PM you...i have to spam 🤣🤣🤣
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