Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 50

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!! ur fan_fics jus amazin!!
i jus red all of it (but in 2 days)
awwwww por angad n kripa... i fel so sory 4 both of dem!! dey need 2 get bak 2geva n im sure u'l make sure dey wil cos we all no dat a-k r made 4 eachuva n i luv dem.. in ur story especialy 😆
ur story is absolutly fan-tas-tic!!!
nyway, plz continu VERY soooooon!
im a big fan of ur fan_fic 😆
its jus 2 gud 😃
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 19 years ago
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!
keipa/angad meet!!!!! awesome part!!!!!!!!!! continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii

wow!! ur fan_fics jus amazin!!
i jus red all of it (but in 2 days)
awwwww por angad n kripa... i fel so sory 4 both of dem!! dey need 2 get bak 2geva n im sure u'l make sure dey wil cos we all no dat a-k r made 4 eachuva n i luv dem.. in ur story especialy 😆
ur story is absolutly fan-tas-tic!!!
nyway, plz continu VERY soooooon!
im a big fan of ur fan_fic 😆
its jus 2 gud 😃
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

Thanks for your compliment

luv

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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks to everyone for your comments

luv all

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part i fianlly cought up! 😉 coninue soon 😛 😃 👏
Edited by kripa_angad=luv - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

In London

its sunday kiran sleeping and kripa in the study room, her cellphone rings

k: hello

person: hey kripa this is suman

k: hi suman , kya bath hey bholo

su: kuch nahin lunch pe chale, mujhe tumse kuch bath karni hey

k: nahin suman , mujhe kuch...........

su: please kripa mere pass ek plan hey please .............

k: okay baba

su: ok then i will pick you around 1'0 clock

k: tik hey

around 12:30 kripa wakes up kiran

k: kiran uttho

ki: sone do na kripa

k: main lunch ke liye bahar jaa rahi hun

ki: okay carry on aur athey waqt mere liye bhi kuch khane ke liye lana , one more please lock the door so that no one can disturb me

k: okay phir bye

ki: good night

k: pagal hey

she gets ready and goes out for lunch, they go to olive garden

su: hmmm kripa can you be my girl friend

k: WHAT???????????

su: arey sirf acting karni hey aur oh bhi kiran ke samne hi

k: sorry suman mere se nahin hogha

su: atleast try to act that you are close to me

k: mathlab ................

su: kuch nahin jab bhi tum kiran ki sath hothey ho, thab tum sirf mere bare main bath karna aur dekhna vuski reaction kaise hoghi

k: bath karna hey tho kuch problem nahin hey

su: thanks kripa

they order for lunch , after they had their lunch suman goes to drop kripa by the time they reach kripa's appartment kiran is sitting in the balcony and having some coffe

suman sees kiran outside so he plans something quick and asks kripa to get down the car laughing

k: magar kyun

su: kyun ki kiran balcony main hey and she is looking at the car

k: okay

and kripa gets down with a smile, suman also comes out of the car

k: thanks for the nice lunch , i had a nice time after a long while , her eye get teary remembering the days she spent with angad

su: kripa kya huva are you alright

k: ya iam fine , just got remember of something

su: if you like to share something Iam always there , just remeber that

k: sure

su: then friends and he moves his hand forward

kripa moves her hand : friends and they both shake their hands and kiran gets jealous

when kripa was sbout to open the door kiran opens it

k: (acting) kya tum utth gayi , i thought you will be sleeping till evening, ye lo tumhara favourite food

ki: kya tum akheli (alone) lunch pe gayi olive garden ko

k: nahin tho suman ke sath gayi thi

ki: oh , tho tum vuss lambhu ke sath gayi thi

k: lambhu kuan hey(acting like she don't know)

ki: oh suman ka dhusra nam hey

k: oh vusne tho mujhe bathay hi nahin

ki: oh actually oh mera school mate tha punjab main , oh vus waqt bahuth gidda(short in height) rehtha tha , patha nahin ithna lambha kaise hogaya

k: short rehtha tha tho vuse lambhu bholkar kyun bhulatey tey

ki: kyun ki oh har roz apna height check kartha tha

and tehy both laugh

k: kiran main ek bath bholu

ki: haan bholo

k: kiran oh tumse pyaar kartha hey

ki:(shocked) what?????

k: yes he loves you from his child hood , oh abb london ko aya hey tho oh bhi sirf tumhare liye

ki: kripa shayad oh mazak kar raha hey

k: nahin kiran maine vuske ankhon(eyes) main tumhare liye pyar dekha hey

ki:( almost teary) kripa tumhe bhi patha hey main abhi abhi apni purani jakam se bahar arahi hun phir abb .........

k: give him a chance to prove himself

ki: phir bhi kripa mujhe dhusri jakam khane ki thakath nahin hey

k: vayise kuch bhi nahin hogha

ki: mujhe soch ne dho kripa main abhi kuch nahin kahunghi

the whole week passes by busily

its friday angad and josh attended their meeting returning back

a: its nice we got the deal

j: mujhe pehle hi patha tha ki oh deal humhe ayegha

a: oh kaise

j: after all they are going to deal with angad khanna right?

a: bus kar abb sidha bhol kya problem hey

j: oh kuch nahin angad mujhe aliya ko dinner ke liye bahar lekhar jana hey , if you say yes

a: okay but come back before 11

j: okay, under his breath, typical bhai

a: kuch kaha

j: haan shall we have some coffee

a: okay

they go to starbucks near by and order their coffee , just then kripa enters starbucks and orders her coffee

she spots angad and gets worried and about to move but suman comes in

su: kripaaaaaaaaa

angad and josh looks towards the person who is calling kripa and towards kripa, they both are shocked, actually 3 of them are shocked as kripa didn't wanted angad to see her

trying to ignore angad and josh

k: kya hey suman

suman hugs her tightly

su: kripa you don't know how happy iam , you just made my day by saying yes

k: (almost whispering) mathlab she said yes

su: yes kripa , kripa I love you, I love you so much kripa , thanks again, mujhe bahuth sare preperations karni hey

k: congrats

su: thanks for everything kripa and he gives a small peck on her cheek and runs out of the starbucks

angad and josh who are listening to this are not able to understand whats going on, tehy were only able to listen to suman's talk kripa was almost whispering

angad nad josh come back of shock moves towards kripa but kripa runs away from their.

a: josh kripa yaha hey , itne dhin , itne bar hum log london ko bahuth bar aye lekin kabhi ithna kush nahin hun main jithna ajj main hun

j: lekin angad oh ladka kripa ke sath jo bhi bath karaha tah vuse tho lagtha hey ki oh dhono ek dhusre ko chahthey hey

a: oh kuch bhi hojaye kripa sirf meri hey

tahts for today

please do leave comments

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

next part in 10 minutes

luv

sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago
omggg sweety!! i cant wiat....continue soon!!! loved the part! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!! wowwwwww........... they met.. kripa dont make suman cause problems.. or angad will kill him.. and u no that..(not literaly!!) dont think id calll that hunk a murderer..kk!!!!

angad ab usko vapas lai ga.. but yd they seperate.. plz fill me in.. i forgot..

continuee veryyyyyyyyyyyy soooooooooooooonn!!!!!!!!!

cant waitt!!

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