Anjaan-AK FF pg.117 10/12, THE END - Page 21

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Posted: 19 years ago
tht was amazing - luvd the proposal n the ring is buff (like angad 😳 lol...) plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
recap:
angad slips the ring in kripas finger
suddenly we hear someone clapping , they both turn adn ar shocke dto see
now..............
they are shocked to see the whole gang clapping and dancing
angad and kripa are both blushing 😳
the whole gang surrounds them,
everyone wishes kripa for her birthday and wishes both angad and kripa for finding their true love
next day
shakthi takes out a cd and hands it to kripa and angad
a: what is this shakthi
sh: this is the memory of your beautiful moment
a: mathlab
sh: first you promise me you won't do anything
a: ok promise
sh: oh kya hey na kal rath jab tum aur kripa bahar gayetey thab ..........
a: haan thab
sh: thab.........thab ......... arey yaar rohan thu bhol na bakhi ki bath
ro: oh oh actually mujhe kuch kam hey sohan bathayega tujhe
and rohan goes out from their
so: oh mujhe bhi kam yaad agaya and he was about to go just angad catches back of his t-shirt
so: angad chod na mujhe i need to go
a: no you are not going any where if you are not telling me what is this cd i don't know what i am going to do
so: ok ok bholungha pehle mujhe chod tho sahi
angad leaves sohan
so: oh hum sab log milkey kal rath tum aur kripa jithna bhi time spend kiye tey oh pura iss cd main hey
a: pura mathlab
so: jab se tum idhar se gaye tey thab se lekhar tum usko propose karma oh maan jana pura hum ne record kiya tha
angad is totally shocked
a: youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu before he can say something he sees that whole cottage is empty
back at girls cottage
kripa came out from shower she is full happy she is humming,
guari: kripa
k: hmmm
gu: this is your birthday gift
k: what is this
gu: check yourself
kripa opens it and finds a cd in it
k: what is this cd guari
ha: thu kudh kyun na dekh le
kripa with a confusion goes near the tv and plays the cd as it started
k:youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu she looks around to find herself all alone in the apartment
kripa takes out the cd and keeps it in her bag, after a while she gets phone call from pallavi
k: hello
pa: hi kripa , ajj tujhe camp pe aneki jarrurath nahin hey you can enjoy your day with angad
k: par
pa: bye bye
and before kripa could say something pallavi hangs up
kripa gets ready to go out she opens the door just then to see angad who was about to knock
a: wow kripa tumhe kaise patha ki main dharwaza katkattane valla hun
k: ................
a: i think some one is angry on me
k: yes and she turns on the other side
a: don't tell me that tumko bhi oh log cd dhiye hey
k: tumhe bhi mathlab tumko bhi
a: haan
there is a silence , after 5 minutes
a: ajj ka program kya hey
k: program tho kuch nahin hey , thought to go around the forest
a: tho chale
k: kaha
a: on a drive
k: confused on a drive
a: ofcourse yes

thats for today hope you guys like it
THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS AGAIN
luv
sweety



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Posted: 19 years ago
It was gr8cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks to everyone for writting comments and reading my fanfiction

luv
sweety
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Posted: 19 years ago
recap:
angad asks kripa to go for a drive

now............
a: kripa ek min
he takes out a black cloth and ties it around kripa's eyes
k: angad ye kis liye
a: surprise
k: oh ......kya surprise hey angad
a: kripa bhola na surprise
k: nahin angad kaise bhi abb tumne jo mere akhaine bandh dhi aur main kuch nahin dekh sakthi tho
a: kripa tumhe doctor kisne banaya
k: confused, kyun
a: pehle ek kam karo
k: kya
a: apna mun(mouth) bandh karo aur mere hath pakad lo and he takes kripas hand in his
they both are walking in the middle of the forest kripa is asking something the other, at last
a: kripa tum sawal bahuth puchthi ho , tumne right profession choose kiya hey, doctors bahuth sawal puchthey hey
kripa laughs
a: kyun hass rahi ho
k: kuch nahin angad thune hi kuch dher pehle bhola ki kisne mujeh doctor banaya hey aur abb tum keh rahey ho ki maine right profession choose kiya hey
a: acha baba mujhe patha ki tum bahuth hi talented ho
k: kuch nayi bath bholo
a: now will you please zip up your mouth
k: aur kithna dher angad my legs are hurting
a: ek minute
and he blindfolds her and points in a direction,we can't see what is their in that direction
kripa is shocked
k: oh kya hey
then we see that it is a cycle
a: tumhe patha nahin oh kya hey vuse cycle kehthey hey
k: oh tho patha hey lekin kya ye hey mere surprise
a: nahin lekin tumne hi tho kaha ki tum aur chal nahin sakthi issliye
k: lekin ek hi cycle hey yaha
a: haan tum chala na main tumhare piche piche avungha
k: lekin mujhe tho chala na nahin atha
a: tho ek kam karthey hey main chalavungha aur tum samne bytna
k: lekin.....
a: lekin kya
k: oh....
a: what kripa
k: kuch nahin
a: chale
she just nods her head, angad sits on the cycle and kripa goes and sits on the cycle
k: angad hum jaa kaha rahey hey
a: kya tum dho minute keliye bhi chup nahin rahsakthi
k: aghar tum mere sawal ki jawab dhoghey thab main chup rahunghi
a: tho tumhe meri bhi ek sharth mani padeghi
k: kya hey oh
a: mujhe ek kiss chahiye
k: oh ..... kya????????? main nahin dhunghi
a: tho main bhi nahin bathavungha
k: angad please
a: no
k: please kaha na
a: tho main bhi please kahungha, please kripa sirf ek
k: no
a: phir main bhi no
k: please and she makes a puppy face
angad can't resist himself on seeing kripa
a: ok ok dho minute hum pounchenghey
k: dho minute main jeyenghey na
a: haan

thats for today , hope you guys like this part
luv
sweety


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Posted: 19 years ago
great !! continue sooon!!

take care
Laiba
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Posted: 19 years ago
really nice...plzz continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS TO EVERYONE
next part will be posted soon
luv
sweety
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Posted: 19 years ago
recap:
angad and kripa go out
now..........
angad takes her to the same place where he proposed her
k: angad hum yeha kyun aye
a: hum yeha issiliye aye ki..........
k: bholo na
a: tum pehle ye bholo tumhe dream home kaisi honi chaihye
k: abb oh kissliye
a: kripa tum sawal bahuth puchthi ho, pehle jo maine pucha vuska jawab dho
k: hmmmm.......... ghar ke charo taraf haryali (greennary), enter hothey hi ek bada sa hall, ek taraf pooja ki mandir dhusiri taraf kitchen, upstairs bedroom honi chahiye, aur bedroom ke kidiki(window) se subh suraj kirane aur rath ko chand chup chup kar kamre main dekh raha ho....... yehey meri dream house
a: ek min then he takes out his mobile switches of the speaker mode and talks with someone (sn)
a: sunliya na pura
sn: yes sir
a: everything must be ready by the time i come back got it
sn: it will be ready sir
angad disconnects the call
k: angad ye tum kisse bath kar rahey tey
a: oh he is my manager
k: lekin mere dream house ke bare main ........
a: kripa ek bath main puchu
k: haan
a: tumhe ye jagha pasand ayi
k: bahuth....
a: yeha tumhara mera mathlab humara dream house banegha
k: angad ye forest hey, agahr humain yaha ghar bannana padetho bahuth sare formalities hothey hey na

angad hugs her from back and keeps his chin on her neck

a: ye jagha forest area ki andhar nahin athi hey, ye mere friend ke papa ke nam per hey , jungle ko nazidhik hey issliye yaha koi nahin rehath aur ye jagha bhi jungle ki tarah hogayi, ajj subh hi ye jagha karidhi hey aur humare shaadhi ke andhar yaha...... our dream house will be ready
k: angad lekin ratho rath
now angad turns kripa to face him and cups her face in his hands looking into kripa's eyes
a: kripa ye mere liye bahuth khasss jagha hey ,i love this place becuase you became mine forever and ever here
kripa has tears in her eyes
a(wiping those tears): pagal ro kyun rahi hey
k: angad main kya kahun samajh main nahin a raha hey maine sapne main bhi nahin socha ki hum milenghe aghar mile tho bhi hum ek dhosare se pyar karenghe.......... angad mujhse ek vadha karo ki tum kabhi mujhe chod ke nahin javoghey kabhi nahin
a(with teary eyes): never kripa never and he hugs her tightly they apart and stare in each others eyes and slowly angad's face comes near kripa's there lips brush with each other and it turns to be a long passinate kiss ❤️
background happy version of KYPH is playing

thats for today hope u like it
please do write comments
luv
sweety
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Posted: 19 years ago
Lovely part! It was so romantic! cont. soon!

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