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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey friends ...............................
i'am back with zindagi ke silsilay part 2
hope u guys will like it .
RECAP:- in the previous part i had written that kashish was coming to India and that she had to stay with the garewals in Shimla . veena tells sujal that he has to pick kashish up from the air port after 2 days . now here is the next part ..........
"ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 2 "
IN U.S.A :-
kashish is bidding good bye to all her family members . sonia starts instructing kashish as to wat she should do and what she should'nt do . kashish starts repeating wat all her mother is telling , because sonia had been telling kashish wat to do and wat not to do for the past 2 days . it's something like sonia telling apna khayal rakna , khana time par ka lena , office ka kaam bohat nahi karna & all other stuff like that { a daughter & mother talk }. the flight is announced and kashish goes in . kashish in the flight starts reading a magzine and then goes off to sleep as it is a long flight .
IN INDIA :-
sujal is in his office , he suddenly gets a phone call
sujal :- hello
veena:- sujal kaha tha mein tab se phone kar rahi thi
sujal :- wo mama mein kuch files dekh raha tha........
veena:- achcha vo sab chod tujhe yaad hain na ki tujhe ajj sham ko kashish ko laane ke liye airport jana hain ???
sujal:- haan ma , mein chala jauga......
veena:-theek hain phir sham ko milthe hain.......
sujal:- bye mama..........................
now sujal gets busy with his work .....................
in the college shlok is sitting with some of his friends . shlok & his friends were ragging the new students who have come to the college { it is the opening days of their college } . suddenly diya { a new character } comes to shlok . diya and shlok r best friends . diya is pratham { sujal's best friends }sister . diya and shlok r very popular in their college .
now in sujal's cabin
rishi and swayam enter and tell sujal that there is something urgent to be discussed .
sujal :- kya hua itine pareshan kyun lag rahe ho ??
rishi:- BIG B , wo accounts mein kuch gadbadi hain..........
sujal:- kya , yeh kya keh rahe ho...............
swayam:- BIG B rishi theek keh raha hain . appko agar vishwaas nahi hota tho app ye file dekh ligiye .
swayam puts the file on the table and sujal checks it . sujal finds that a amount of 2 crocres is missing from the garewal enterprises account . sujal calls mr . sharma the cheif accountant . mr. sharma is found guilty and sujal sacks him from the job . sujal is in a very irritated state because a honest employee had { mr . sharma } cheated them ,just for some money .
after some time
sujal looks at the clock and he sees that the time is 5 in the evening , so he decides to leave for the airport . he is still in the irritated mood . he reaches the airport and is looking for kashish . kashish comes and asks sujal
kashish:- ru from the garewal family ???
sujal:- yes, i'am the eldest son of the garewal family SUJAL GAREWAL...........
kashish:- ok hi i'am KASHISH OBEROI
sujal is suprised to hear that she is kashish becoz , sujal expected some modern babe to land in as kashish oberoi , but the girl in fornt of him was a typical tom boy ......
then they came to the car and got in............
kashish being a very friendly person started talking to sujal
kashish:- well maine app ke bare mein bohat kuch suna hain , ap ne itni choti se umer mein hi bohut kuch paa liya
sujal is not listening wat all she is talking , he is thinking abt mr.sharma .
kashish:- mr . garewal
sujal:- haan , kya keh rahi thi app
kashish:- iska matlab tabse mein hi bake jaa rahi thi , aur appne kuch nahi suna {she makes a sad face }
sujal:- { sujal is very frustrated} actually mein ajnabeeyonnnnn se baat nahi krata.
kashish is shocked to hear that & the rest of the drive both are quite
sujal reaches home . kashish gets down & walks in with sujal . veena & chetan are waiting for them in the hall .
veena:- aa gaye tum log
sujal:- haan mama
kashish:- namaste aunty , telling this kashish touches veena's feet . sujal , veena and chetan are suprised that staying in U.S.A she has not forgotten her sanskar .
veena:- kashish beta upar jaakar aaram karo
kashish:- ji aunty
veena:-sujal jao aur kashish ko uska kamra dikhkao.
sujal and kashish leave from there . sujal shows kashish her room & without telling anything he leaves from there .
kashish is in her room and is thinking about sujal's behaviour . she thinks that sujal bohat hi rude hain . pata nahi log use kaise bardasht karte hain. thank God mujhe yahan par sirf 1 mahine ke liye rukna hain .
sujal is in his room repenting for what he told kashish in the car . he thinks that he will apoligize to kashish later . now he thinks that ye kaisi ladki hain ,is se dekhkar koi nahi kehyaga ki ya U.S.A se aayi hain . sujal starts thinking about kashish even though he wants to divert his attention .
the same case is with kashish in her room she is unable to fogert sujal's rude behaviour . then she goes to get fresh .
veena calls kashish down , all the brothers and sneha are sitting in the hall and doing masti .
kashish comes down .
she sees sujal playing with rishi & teasing sneha . she is deep in thoughts that is he they same person who talked to her so rudely . she is deep in her thoughts when veena comes
veena:- aao kashish beta . hamare saath baito .
kashish:- ji aunty .
now everybody introduces themselves to kashish . kashish is happy to see a family which has a very good bond .
swayam:- kashish tum yahan kis deal ke silsilay mein ayi ho
kashish:- mein vo mr.gupta ke deal ke liye aayi hoon . pata nahi kya hoga .
rishi:- jab hum sab hain tumhare saath , tho tumhe kya fhikar .
all smile
veena:- ab office ka kaam chodo , chalo saab khana ko lo.
all go to the dining table . all finish their dinner and it is time for desert .
veena serves gajar ka halwa . kashish's face glows when she sees the desert .
veena sees this and tells kashish , kashish tumhe gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain.
kashish smiles & nods her head .
now rishi tells
rishi:-aap aur BIG B kitna milthe ho ek doosre se . kyunki BIG B ko bho gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain .
sujal & kashish look at each other and then the thoda sa music is played in the background .
all leave for their rooms .
sujal goes to kashish's room
kashish:- app yahaan
sujal:-{ sujal hesitates and then says } hain mein wo actually , appse sorry kehne aaya tha meri behaviour ke liye .
kashish:- it's ok .
sujal:- nahi actually maine kisi aur ka furstration app par nikal diya .
kashish :- it's ok mr. garewal , mein samaj sakthi hoon .itna bada business empire chalana koi aasan baat nahi .
sujal:- thanku
sujal is abt to leave when he suddenly turns back and says :- friends { in typical sujal style }
both shake hands . & then sujal says ajj se app mujhe sujal bulana
mr.garewal nahi ,bohat ajeeb lagtha hain.
kashish:- theek hain lakin ek shart par app mujhe tum , aur kashish kehayge.
sujal:- ok done and then both smile .
sujal tells kashish that if she wants she can join him in the office 2mmorrow , he also tells that he would leave at 9 .
sujal:- gud night , sweet dreams
kashish:- gud night . same to u
sujal leaves
sujal is on his bed is thinking abt kashish and here kashish is on her bed thinking abt sujal .
the song in the babkground :-
" ye achchanak kya hua hain
dil ko ye kya hone laga ......
yaad kisiki aane lagi hain
jaan jaane lagi hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
thoda hain baki...................... "
both sujal and kashish go to sleep thinking about each other .
here ends the 2nd part. hey guyz please tell me if this part was too long or too draggy . please let me know if u have any suggestions or complaints . thanku very much................
take care..........................................
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee............................... .....................................................
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
sorry guyz i missed to post the first part......
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#13
so i'am posting zindagi ke silsilay part 1 & 2.

"ZINDIGI KE SILSILAY--PART 1"
IN SHIMLA:-

it is 7 in the morning in Shimla . mostly all the people in shimla are asleep , becoz the mornings in shimla is very cold . in the garewal mansion veena is awake .she enters a room and then
veena:- utto beta
son :- maa bas 10 minute aur .plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
veena:- beta 7 baj gaye hain office ke liye tayar nahi hona hain kya ??
son:- kya 7 baj gaye , mujhe tho ajj office jaldi jana tha..........
{ saying all this the son uncovers the bedsheet from his face & sits on the bed with a jerk }
veena :- sujal raath ko der thak kam karoge tho aisa hi hoga. mujhe lagtha hain tumhe ab shaddi kar leni chahiye ??
sujal :- mom shaddi aur mein
veena:- kyun tum insaan nahi ho kya ??
sujal :- aisi koi baat nahi mom , lekin shaddi usse karni chahiye jo hum se pyar kare aur ab thak SUJAL GAREWAL ko aisi ladki nahi mili hain.........
veena:-tujhe ladki nahi mili tu tho subah shaam office office kartha rehtha hain tho phir tujhe ladki kahan se milege...........
sujal:- maaa
veena:-achcha tujhse bahas karna bakar hain mein ab chalthi hoon tu tayar ho ja thik hain .
{ veena leaves the room }
sujal goes and stands by the window & starts dreaming about his dream girl . in his imagination he sees a girl wearing a white beautifull saree , but he does not see the face . sujal suddenly looks at the clock and realizes that he has a meeting to attend at 9 so he rushes to get ready .
now coming to the other brothers
there is room which is full of posters & that is rishi , shlok , aman and varun room . they r all getting ready to go to different places .shlok to college , varun , rishi & aman to the office . swayam is sitting in the study and going through some details .
{ lalit's sons aman , varun , akshat & piyush stay with the garewals after losing their family }
everbody comes to the dining table to have there breakfast .piyush is a lazy bug so he is still asleep .
chetan :- morning everbody
all say good mornning & then sit for the break fast .
rishi starts teasing sneha regarding some competition
sneha :- BIG B ye dekho ye bhai mera mazak bana raha hain..........
sujal :- kido kyun pareshan kar rahe ho gudiya ko ??
rishi :- kya BIG B app tho hamesha iski tarafdari karthe ho .aur waise BIG B ye app ko kis angle se gudiya dikthi hain ??
rishi runs & sneha runs behind him .
veena enters & says beta ye akshat kab wapas aa raha hain .
sujal :- maa bas ek mahine ke ander aajayega { actually akshat is aboard & has competed his law practice }
sujal :- thik hain main chaltha hoon . der ho rahi hain .
shlok & sneha together say BIG B plz humme college chod dijiyena , hummari gadi garage mein hain ??
sujal agrees & leaves with them . then one by one all leave . & veena is alone.
suddenly the phone rings veena picks it up . veena recognizes the voice as
sonia oberoi's voice .
veena :- kaisi ho sonia ??
sonia :- bilkul theek hoon. aur tum ?
veena:- mein bhi theek hoon .
sonia:- mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye wo actually meri badi beti kashish INDIA aa rahi hain koi kaam ke silsilay mein, wo shimla mein rahegi tho mein chahthi hoon ki tum uske liye ek hotel room book kar do .
at this veena interupts and says kya hotel main kyun wo hamari bhi tho beti hain na . ab koi baat nahi sunugi wo hamare saath rahege bus...............
sonia:- ok { she says bye and cuts the phone }
now IN U.S.A:-
sonia goes out and calls a girl who is playing basket ball in the garden.
sonia:- kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh , ab ander aajao . kashish comes running .
kashish:- kya mom , kya hua ??
sonia :- kashish tum ek ladki ki jaise kab pesh aaogi .
kashish:- mom it is cool .
sonia:- tum aur tumhara cool . achcha suno tumhe garewal mansion mein rehna hoga , ab yeh nahi kehna ki tum nahi rukogi ?? samjhi.....
kashish:- yes mom .
just then all the other sisters enter
sonia :- tum log utgaye.
{sumeet enters }
sumeet:- kya ho raha hain bhai ??
sonia:-ye meri paanch betiyan jo ek dusre se itni alag hain bhagwan bachchaye un becharo ko jo in logon se shaadi karega .
all the sisters together shout mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... ..
sonia:- aur nahi tho kya ye dekho ye archie jo hamesha apni computer ke samne rehthi hain , yeh mehak jo ek padaku hain , ye gauri jo ek chasmis aur hamesha chup rehthi hain{ 2nd kutumb's look } , ye charu jo ek sport lover hain aur in sab se badi ye kashish jo hamesha business par dhyan dethi hain aur ladko ki jaisa bartav karthi hain . { basically kashish is a TOM BOY . she always wears a jeans & a shirt with a high tied pony . kashish does not wear any other ornament like earing etc }.
sonia continues talking
tum log kisise mat kehna ki tum U.S.A mein pale-bade ho .koi vishwaas nahi karega .
all giggle and then kashish talks to her father about some business deal and then goes to do her packing to leave for INDIA .
here in INDIA all the garewal family members return home and r sitting in the hall
chit-chatting . veena tells everybody that oberoi's elder daughter "KASHISH OBEROI " is coming to stay with them for some days .she also tells them that she is coming there for some business deal & sujal should help her in that business deal . she tells sujal that he has to pick her up after 2 days from the airport .
sujal agrees & all retire to their rooms as all r tired .



"ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 2 "
IN U.S.A :-
kashish is bidding good bye to all her family members . sonia starts instructing kashish as to wat she should do and what she should'nt do . kashish starts repeating wat all her mother is telling , because sonia had been telling kashish wat to do and wat not to do for the past 2 days . it's something like sonia telling apna khayal rakna , khana time par ka lena , office ka kaam bohat nahi karna & all other stuff like that { a daughter & mother talk }. the flight is announced and kashish goes in . kashish in the flight starts reading a magzine and then goes off to sleep as it is a long flight .
IN INDIA :-
sujal is in his office , he suddenly gets a phone call
sujal :- hello
veena:- sujal kaha tha mein tab se phone kar rahi thi
sujal :- wo mama mein kuch files dekh raha tha........
veena:- achcha vo sab chod tujhe yaad hain na ki tujhe ajj sham ko kashish ko laane ke liye airport jana hain ???
sujal:- haan ma , mein chala jauga......
veena:-theek hain phir sham ko milthe hain.......
sujal:- bye mama..........................
now sujal gets busy with his work .....................
in the college shlok is sitting with some of his friends . shlok & his friends were ragging the new students who have come to the college { it is the opening days of their college } . suddenly diya { a new character } comes to shlok . diya and shlok r best friends . diya is pratham { sujal's best friends }sister . diya and shlok r very popular in their college .
now in sujal's cabin
rishi and swayam enter and tell sujal that there is something urgent to be discussed .
sujal :- kya hua itine pareshan kyun lag rahe ho ??
rishi:- BIG B , wo accounts mein kuch gadbadi hain..........
sujal:- kya , yeh kya keh rahe ho...............
swayam:- BIG B rishi theek keh raha hain . appko agar vishwaas nahi hota tho app ye file dekh ligiye .
swayam puts the file on the table and sujal checks it . sujal finds that a amount of 2 crocres is missing from the garewal enterprises account . sujal calls mr . sharma the cheif accountant . mr. sharma is found guilty and sujal sacks him from the job . sujal is in a very irritated state because a honest employee had { mr . sharma } cheated them ,just for some money .
after some time
sujal looks at the clock and he sees that the time is 5 in the evening , so he decides to leave for the airport . he is still in the irritated mood . he reaches the airport and is looking for kashish . kashish comes and asks sujal
kashish:- ru from the garewal family ???
sujal:- yes, i'am the eldest son of the garewal family SUJAL GAREWAL...........
kashish:- ok hi i'am KASHISH OBEROI
sujal is suprised to hear that she is kashish becoz , sujal expected some modern babe to land in as kashish oberoi , but the girl in fornt of him was a typical tom boy ......
then they came to the car and got in............
kashish being a very friendly person started talking to sujal
kashish:- well maine app ke bare mein bohat kuch suna hain , ap ne itni choti se umer mein hi bohut kuch paa liya
sujal is not listening wat all she is talking , he is thinking abt mr.sharma .
kashish:- mr . garewal
sujal:- haan , kya keh rahi thi app
kashish:- iska matlab tabse mein hi bake jaa rahi thi , aur appne kuch nahi suna {she makes a sad face }
sujal:- { sujal is very frustrated} actually mein ajnabeeyonnnnn se baat nahi krata.
kashish is shocked to hear that & the rest of the drive both are quite
sujal reaches home . kashish gets down & walks in with sujal . veena & chetan are waiting for them in the hall .
veena:- aa gaye tum log
sujal:- haan mama
kashish:- namaste aunty , telling this kashish touches veena's feet . sujal , veena and chetan are suprised that staying in U.S.A she has not forgotten her sanskar .
veena:- kashish beta upar jaakar aaram karo
kashish:- ji aunty
veena:-sujal jao aur kashish ko uska kamra dikhkao.
sujal and kashish leave from there . sujal shows kashish her room & without telling anything he leaves from there .
kashish is in her room and is thinking about sujal's behaviour . she thinks that sujal bohat hi rude hain . pata nahi log use kaise bardasht karte hain. thank God mujhe yahan par sirf 1 mahine ke liye rukna hain .
sujal is in his room repenting for what he told kashish in the car . he thinks that he will apoligize to kashish later . now he thinks that ye kaisi ladki hain ,is se dekhkar koi nahi kehyaga ki ya U.S.A se aayi hain . sujal starts thinking about kashish even though he wants to divert his attention .
the same case is with kashish in her room she is unable to fogert sujal's rude behaviour . then she goes to get fresh .
veena calls kashish down , all the brothers and sneha are sitting in the hall and doing masti .
kashish comes down .
she sees sujal playing with rishi & teasing sneha . she is deep in thoughts that is he they same person who talked to her so rudely . she is deep in her thoughts when veena comes
veena:- aao kashish beta . hamare saath baito .
kashish:- ji aunty .
now everybody introduces themselves to kashish . kashish is happy to see a family which has a very good bond .
swayam:- kashish tum yahan kis deal ke silsilay mein ayi ho
kashish:- mein vo mr.gupta ke deal ke liye aayi hoon . pata nahi kya hoga .
rishi:- jab hum sab hain tumhare saath , tho tumhe kya fhikar .
all smile
veena:- ab office ka kaam chodo , chalo saab khana ko lo.
all go to the dining table . all finish their dinner and it is time for desert .
veena serves gajar ka halwa . kashish's face glows when she sees the desert .
veena sees this and tells kashish , kashish tumhe gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain.
kashish smiles & nods her head .
now rishi tells
rishi:-aap aur BIG B kitna milthe ho ek doosre se . kyunki BIG B ko bho gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain .
sujal & kashish look at each other and then the thoda sa music is played in the background .
all leave for their rooms .
sujal goes to kashish's room
kashish:- app yahaan
sujal:-{ sujal hesitates and then says } hain mein wo actually , appse sorry kehne aaya tha meri behaviour ke liye .
kashish:- it's ok .
sujal:- nahi actually maine kisi aur ka furstration app par nikal diya .
sujal:- it's ok mr. garewal , mein samaj sakthi hoon .itna bada business empire chalana koi aasan baat nahi .
sujal:- thanku
sujal is abt to leave when he suddenly turns back and says :- friends { in typical sujal style }
both shake hands . & then sujal says ajj se app mujhe sujal bulana
mr.garewal nahi ,bohat ajeeb lagtha hain.
kashish:- theek hain lakin ek shart par app mujhe tum , aur kashish kehayge.
sujal:- ok done and then both smile .
sujal tells kashish that if she wants she can join him in the office 2mmorrow , he also tells that he would leave at 9 .
sujal:- gud night , sweet dreams
kashish:- gud night . same to u
sujal leaves
sujal is on his bed is thinking abt kashish and here kashish is on her bed thinking abt sujal .
the song in the babkgroung :-
" ye achchanak kya hua hain
dil ko ye kya hone laga ......
yaad kisiki aane lagi hain
jaan jaane lagi hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
thoda hain baki...................... "
both sujal and kashish go to sleep thinking about each other .

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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
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