New FF (Maneet) Mere Humsafar thd4 Upd pt47 pg135 - Page 52

Awesme update.and sng selectns was gud

superb!

omg hell kick the traitor out of kc yaar soon
and make maaneet one soon
but geet shld not forgive maan so soon
awesome update continue soon

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

Res...pehla dabba mera!! yippe!! ab aage train banao baaki readers!!!

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now...finally me editing this post...sorry for being late Piya!! okies...pehle... main first!! maine yeh new smileys abhi download kiye hai... cute hai na!! main to inhe dekh ke pagal ho gayi hoon...!! abhi aur dikhenge mere comment mein...
Maan ka daadima ko aisa reply... ki shaatir ladki thi Geet... woh aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai... Geet ne apne Maan pur aankh mund ke bharosa kiya aur usne yeh sila diya... feel like singing...
achcha sila diya tune mere pyaar ka
lekin haan yeh kaun bhul sakta hai ki aaj tak MSK ne apne aage kisi ki suni hai? jo aaj sunega! badi aasani se chala gaya sone
aur woh mera favourite song hai...painful...sensous and romantic... and the pain during that song was so visible... could picturise everything... the ice-cream date to the gol-gappe...
and finally the last portion when Maan-Geet talk was beautiful... what words and what emotions I must say...
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The way both Maan and Geet's characters are shown in this Update depicts that both of them are really self-dependent people and have a strong heart and mind. Though Geet is really hurt...yet she has controlled herself and her emotions really well... not to forget that in past even many times Maan had insulted Geet and that too in front of the crowd. but then slowly and gradually the beautiful change is MSK as he changes from angry young man to a young romantic chap was beautiful and suddenly again we get this MSK back...who is to rude and insolent...
and the best part was that during his talk to Geet... he is hinting that he did the thing purposely...what could that mean(shivy rubbing her head... thinking ) and that he doesn't want anyone to question their relation... and Geet still trusts him... This shows how beautiful Geet's persona and character is... really amazing plan... and execution is perfect...
aap bor to nahi hue na?
Maan's dilemma is quite confusing at this stage...because he is something else when he's around people...I mean his opinion about Geet and then something else when he's alone... what could be the reason I wonder😕 well that might be a surprise for us by you... waiting for it to come... and then another thing that surprises me is that why does he expect Geet to believe him after he has done so much... and woah...look at my sweet Geet... she still has the love left to say Maan najaane kyun aaj bhi mera dil aapke khilaf gawahi dene ko raazi nahi hai..aaj bhi yahi lagta hai k aap dur hokar bhi mere paas ho
Hats off to my Geet... he is regretting this... so why did he do it... but that's all what life is made up of... hai na!
Conclusion:
I am falling in love with this FF... actually to be correct...already fallen... and I just adore the way you present each one's dilemma and pain and feelings... The last portion has left us all in a dilemma that what is Maan upto and who is the traitor in KC... Geet knows the name... waiting to know the name of that moron...
waiting for your reply on my FF...you have 2 unres dabbas now...
luv, shivu

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

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loved the update piya dear
well as expected waise ho raha hai
well muje pata hai who the traitor is so i will keep shut
the dream sequence superbly portrayed
awesome update on the whole

continue soon