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its my view on how things would turn out after kria puts up the no boys-and-girls-together notice...!!!!

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Rey was feeling very confused and self conscious as he walked towards the notice board. Everyone was giving him weird and irritated looks. Some were even angry. He ignored them all and continued walking. He hadn't seen the notices in the morning so he decided to do it now... As he reached the notice board he forced himself to ignore all the eyes he could feel on himself and read the notices. There was just 1 new notice. As he read the notice, his eyes widened. The notice said that boys and girls could not be friends, were not to be together and interact with each other the minimum. He was even more shacked when he saw his signature at the end. It took him seconds to know who did this- Kria.
So yeh hai tumhara acha idea, he thought.
Though he very badly wanted to shout at someone for this, he couldn't get himself to blame his baat-cutter. He knew she was doingit all for a revenge, yet he never thought that SHE would do something like this. He was sure this ideas wasn't hers. He didn't know what to do, so he just stood there, dumb-struck. He knew he might be looking very stupid standing there, staring at the notice board, but he couldn't care less.

He was brought back to reality when the peon told him that the principal wanted to see him. He knew he was in trouble. He dragged himself to the principal's office and knocked. "Come in" the voice came. He took a deep breath and entered. The expression on principal's face did not help him calm himself. Princi opened his mouth and Rey brace himself for what lay ahead.

"Reyaansh, what is this? What kind of a rule have you passed?" asked princi.

Rey didn't know what to say. He had to think of something, fast. He definitely could not get Kria busted. But his mind seemed to have been frozen. Soch Rey, kuch soch, he thought to himself. Princi was getting restless and said a little loudly, "Answer me rey,is this some kind of a joke?"

"Yes, sir." Rey answered without thinking.

"WHAT???" principal's expression changed from anger to confusion to double anger.

When Rey realized what he has said, he decied he wouldn't get any other excuse, so he played along. "Uh-um, sir', it-it was a prank."

Upon hearing this principal's expression became even more fierce and angry, if that was possible. He said, "Reyaansh, this is very disappointing. You are the GS of the collage, you shouldn't be using your powers in such a way." His anger was clearly visible on his face as well as in his voice. "Sorry, sir." Rey didn't know what else to say.

"Whether you are sorry or not, this is unforgiveable! You will be punished for it. Get it..?"

"Yes, sir" Rey said. He couldn't believe what he heard next. "You will be getting a detention today and a day's suspension!!!" He is going to be suspended. This is perfect, Just Perfect!!!!

"Come with me now. We have to let everyone know what you did." Saying this princi moved out of the office and rey followed without another word.


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please comment and let me know what u think...!!!! 😊


INDEX

Part 1-page 1

Part 2-page 4

Part 3-page 7

Part 4-page 10

Part 5-page 11

Part 6-page 15

Part 7-page 18

Part 8-page 23

Part 9-page 27

Part 10-page 35

part 11-page 35

part 12-page 42

part 13-page 52

part 14-page61 (last part)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vry nice.. May be it will happen...
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this should happen!!! plzzz write moreee!!!! plzzz
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bechara rey!
kriya...😡
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😛thank you for the likes and comments guys...!!! i never thought anyone would even read it if i dont send the PMs...!! thanks for reading...!!! i'll try to get the next chapter up ASAP...!!!😊

PS- if you guys want to tell me something...like want me to add something or didnt like something...!!! please do tell me...!!!!😊
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really nice
psl continue
n pm me also
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awesome hai Somya.. :P LOVED it.. i so wish k aisa hota.. plz cont. n thanks fr the PM.. :) :)
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Arrrgh gandeee Kriya ! 😡 Pooor Rey 😭

Frankly I like ur version better than the Cinevistaas LOL ..cuz I am prettty sure they will screw things up even further .. ur fanfic is our saviour LOL .. Great job ! :)
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u knw what? i'm gonna go crazy saying this on IF but u r n 'mazing writer!!
why the hell didn't u write before?😲👏
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Originally posted by: SwaRon911

Arrrgh gandeee Kriya ! 😡 Pooor Rey 😭


Frankly I like ur version better than the Cinevistaas LOL ..cuz I am prettty sure they will screw things up even further .. ur fanfic is our saviour LOL .. Great job ! :)

gandee kria
so cutee😆😆
mai bhi khungi
GANDEEE kriya😆😆

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