Maaneet - WE WANT DIVORCE #1 | Part 1 - 25 - Page 82

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oh gosh yeh kya hogaya 😭😭
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hope nothing has happened to geet


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Hi buddies,

Thank you so much for the lovely, beautiful and detailed comments. Loved them very much.

Part 25

In Amritsar...


Maan stops his car in front of Geet's house. he gets down from the car and looks at the house. the name board, "Geet's Little Hut" assures him that he has come to the correct address. he opens the small entrance gate and steps inside. As he paces towards the door, his heart beats keep increasing. He stops infront of the door and rings the door bell. There is no reply from inside. The silence scares him. For him every second is passing like an era. He again knocks at the door. a lady voice comes from inside, "aarahi hu". As it was not Geet's voice, he is disappointed. After few seconds Geet's bhabhi (Geet's mausi's daughter-in-law) Pammi opens the door and looks at Maan questioningly. As Maan didn't expect anyone other than Geet to open the door, he hesitates for few seconds.

Pammi: aap kaun hai?

Though Maan's heart wants to say that he is Geet's husband, his brain stops him.

Pammi: aap sun rahe hai na? kaun hai aap?

Maan: woh...main...Geet..

Pammi: Geet ka dost hai kya?

Maan nodes hesitantly.

Pammi smiles at Maan and asks him to come in. Maan follows her

Pammi: main Pammi hu...Geet ki bhabhi

Maan eyes are scanning the house while his heart is searching for Geet.

Pammi: baitiye! waise... are you studying in Geet's college?

Maan's heart is still beating restlessly. he ignores Pammi's question. As Maan didn't reply, Pammi again asks

Pammi: are you a professor in Geet's college?

Maan couldn't hold himself anymore. He asks Pammi impatiently

Maan: Geet...

Pammi notices that Maan is looking very tired. So she cuts him short and says..

Pammi: main aap ke liye chai lekar aathi hu

Paami turns to leave for kitchen

Maan: ek minute

Paami stops and looks at him questioningly

Maan: is Geet home?

Paami: ji

Maan is relieved like anything. he feels as if his soul has reentered his body. He takes a deep breath

Maan: i want to see her

Pammi: she is sleeping in her room. sorry i can't disturb her now. bechari...she returned from Delhi this morning only...moreover the unbearable pain caused by the head injury..

Maan's almost stops breathing

Maan: head injury?

Paami: haan!...she went to Delhi to attend Pinky's wedding na...there she accidently got her head hit against a wall

Maan recalls how Geet was toppled by her sarree and got her head injured at the terrace of the mansion. he closes his eyes in pain.

Pammi: since morning she had been screaming in pain...we took her to the doctor...he gave her a shot and prescribed some painkillers and sleeping pills. Only after taking the pills she dossed off.

He recalls the blood choked plaster on her head and feels guilty for not taking Geet to the hospital by last night itself.

Maan: (st) how can i be so careless about Geet?

Pammi is silently staring at Maan

Maan: where is she?

Pammi points to a room

Pammi: in that room

Maan: i want to see her

Pammi : (hesitates) woh...

Maan: let me see her...i won't disturb her

Pammi: teek hai

Maan turns to walk toward Geet's room

Pammi: ek minute..

Maan looks at Pammi questioningly

Pammi: woh...my mother-in-law is coming from Hoshiarpur to see Geet. i have to go to the bus stand and get her home. I can't leave Geet alone either. Can you do me a favour?

Maan thinks that Pammi will ask him to take care of Geet until she comes back from the bus-stand. He is happy that he can spend sometime alone with Geet. so he agrees to help

Maan: hmmm

Pammi: can you go to the bus stand and pick up my mother-in-law?

Maan is super duper annoyed. He is already irritated as Pammi is not letting him go to Geet. on top of that she is asking him to pick up her mother-in-law. He feels like killing Pammi with his bare hands.

Paami: will you please help me?

Maan wonders what to reply.

Maan: woh...

Suddenly a thought comes to Pammi...

Pammi: arey! Yeh main kya kar rahi hu?

Maan looks at Pammi questioningly

Pammi: instead of myself, if i send some one else my mother-in-law will kill me for sure. Woh bohat gussawali hai. So let us change the plan. i will go to the bus-stand and you take care of Geet. teek hai?

Maan is relieved

Pammi: i will come back in half-an-hour. It may take little longer too. please don't leave the house until i comeback

Maan feels that this half-an-hour is the most precious time of his life. he agrees immediately

Maan: hmmm

Pammi: thanks for helping me. it is so kind of you

Maan wonders who is helping who...is he helping Pammi or is it the other way around.

Pammi takes her purse and walks to the door. Maan turns to rush to Geet's room.

Pammi: ek aur baath

Maan is annoyed but he controls his anger. After all Pammi has done a great favour to him.

Pammi points to the main door

Pammi: after i leave, please lock the door. Otherwise puppy may run outside

Maan is not in a condition to wonder which puppy Pammi is talking about. he walks to the door and shuts it as soon as Pammi steps out of the house and he runs to Geet's room.

Maan carefully walks into Geet room without making any noise so as not to disturb her. Geet is sleeping like a cute kid. he comes close to her bed and keeps looking at her face. An unknown calmness fills his heart. his pains,restlessness, anxiety, fear and everything vanish at a single sight of her.

Maan sits on the bed next to Geet. He notices the plaster on her head and the tear trails on her cheeks. He could imagine how much she would have cried.

He keeps looking at her face

Maan: (speculates) which one gave her more pain...is it her hurt heart or the injured head?

Right now Geet is under the spell of sleeping tablet and hence she is in deep sleep.

He stretches his arm to caress her head. But instantly he recalls Geet's words, "meri paas math aayiye...main bardasht nahi karpaungi" .

Instantly, he withdraws his hand without touching her. he keeps staring at her for few more minutes.

On one hand he is dying to take her in his arms and keep her close to his heart. on the other hand her words are stopping him from touching her. finally his love wins over her words.

He grabs her shoulders and brings her into a semi sitting position. Then he carefully sneaks his arm around her back for support and rests her head against his heart and brings her into a hug.

He closes his eyes and loses himself in the feel of her breath against his heart.

Maan didn't know for how long he would have sit like that. after sometime he comes out of the trance and again makes Geet lay back on the bed.

But he couldn't get enough of her. he bends down and plants a kiss on her forehead..of course a looonnnggg kiss. He caresses her head and whispers in her ear

Maan: Geet! you are the worst wife in this world...you are not even picking your husband's phonecalls. ...ek aur compliment to you...you are the cruellest wife also...you have scared your husband to death without using any weapons.

He cups her face, again plants a kiss on her forehead and whispers in her ear

Maan: kya kaha tum ne? "meri paas math aayiye...main bardasht nahi karpaungi". Hai na? Ab mere baath sun lo, kyunki main tumara pathi hu. Mere paas rehne ki aadat dal lo Geet.

Hi buddies,

Hope you loved the update.

Take care and Have a nice week end.

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Tonya

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh God it was just awesome! mind blowing
Thank God Geet ko kuch nahi hua
Loved what Maan said to Geet
I hope he stick to it...other wise i will kill him
Cont soon
Luv
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG maan realized his feelings yipeee
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n sooo sweet part!!!!!!!

but i wonder will maan stick to his last words r will b back to his usual mode n again starts distancing her!!!!
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank god!! she is safe!!!
Loved Maan's cute talk to Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww sooo cute update...
lovely.. n sweet
thank god, geet is saved from the accident
good luck maan... keep going😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update dear
love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg I loved it!!!
Loved the ending the most!!!

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