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update??????????? kaha hai di...😭
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no no
i dont want brij
i jus hate him yaar
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Dreams
part 71


Abhi utna tha tumhe..she cradled him.
He made a cute innocent face
nahi..mera matlab hain.. 2-3.. kisses ke baad bhi tho utt sakta tha na
she laughed at her own imagination.. though she knew it was not meant for her. He was probably dreaming & it was juat a weak moment for him.. & a dream come true for her. She could live her hole life to this one kiss.

She couldn't stop blushing. She bit her lips.. her eyes where glued at the washroom door waiting for him to come out. She was so anxious to see him.. like its been ages.

Maan washed his face.. he looked at his reflection.. & decided tp confront as things were getting out of control, especially for him.


Geet lay a sheet on the floor & made baby lay on that. She took out all his toys & began playing with him. But her eyes every now & then.. awaited for the door to open. The moment he came out she rushed to him with towel. .. almost crashing into him. She blushed.. furiously & gave the towel to him.. looking down.. he took the towel & went to the living room. She lifted the baby & followed him to the hall.

He tried his best to ignore her proximity.
Aap kuch kahne chaten the
his heart almost stopped.
She came around & sat next to him holding the baby in her arms. He gulped & inched away. She made a silent note & cutely moved herself close to him in the pretext adjusting the baby.
Maan baby kitna days ka hain
80days
he said trying to inch away..
phir yeh turn kyun nahi karta
he looked down
...premature hain na.. dr said everything will be little delayed
thats why he looks smaller than Nt's baby
Nt?
he looked at her
aap ussen nahi janthen she is my best frd
he wondered looking into those beautiful eyes, he barely knew anything abt her.
His paused gaze all that needed to make her blush & smile.. she shied looking down slowly coming still close to him.


He didn't even have room to move further away.
Maan she said softly
it was mesmerizing.
Aap ..she could barely think straight after feeling him so close, her mouth dried as her eyes fell on his lips. she held baby closer
wo
she said gulping her saliva.
Forgot wat she was asking.. all she could now think of was their kiss
her vulnerability only made him succumb to her plea. His hands raised to move the locks that teased her cheek. She chuckled... he instantly caressed the baby. trying to avoid looking at her eyes.

Garv immediately leaned towards him. Maan smiled & took him in his lap. Geet got really pissed off & moved away to the further end away from both of them. Turning her face to the otherside.
Dono bap beta ko meri zarorat nahi hain
waisen tho puri time mera pech gumatha rahtha hain
aab dehko kaisen daddy ke pass chalen gaya
dalbadlu
Maan knew she was pissed off big time..
Geet
she snapped ..
mujhe nahi baat karni
na aap se.. na..aapke dalbadlu beta se
lekin hume tho baat karni hain..
Maan shook the baby
.. hain na
baby giggled as Maan traced his fingers around his waist.
She almost smiled.. but still made a angry face & looked other side.
Maan cutely brought garv close to me..
Geet mumbled koi mama se pyar nahi kartha looking away
karten hian na.. bahut pyar karten hain.. he said in a tone that oozed out love craving to say it all in that one sentence.. . she instantly turned to meet his eyes.. he fluttered his eye..& looked at the baby...hum mama se bahut pyar karthen hain.. he said it again.. like it he was playingly saying it on behalf of baby.
For a moment she felt he said it to her.. ironical it was so...


she took the baby from him & hugged him.. sirf aaphi pyar karten ho mama se
her eyes traced from baby to him looking for an answer.
He pretended not to have heard it.
She twisted her lips & took baby to the room.
Chado.,..
tumhare papa tho kahne se rahen.
Without his will he followed her to the room.
her anger is something he could never bear. Her complaining eyes cutely cribbing lips. How cute she looks when she frowns...but the wrinkles that forms on her forehead scars his heart.
Geet he called wanting to say it all..pour it all..unleash the emotions he has been holding down.
She could feel the yarn in the voice, depth in them..she eagerly looked at him.. scanning his eye. Searching for those words he would never say. But why she still could hear them.

She hated her heart to be so madly vulnerable to him.
Geet he stepped closer.
She couldn't even response hearing him call her name..geet.. it was simple
Geet..
but it sounded so much filled in love or was she again delirious.

He didn't want to look at those eyes ..that looked at him so hopefully. He feared to see hatred in him. Perplexed she moved closer & looked directly into his eyes he said her name...but this time only his lips moved..she could barely hear a whisper. He stared intensely feeling his heart sinking every passing minute as she stared at him, her eyes begging. Pleading him for something that was just hers. His words came out rambling making no sense, this was the the first time he had tried to talk ..& he simply couldn't. His voice came out in a croak, breaking. He let out a tortures cry before taking her in his arms. The sound hitting her directly in the heart. She wrapped her one arm tightly around him, pulling him against her. In response he curled his arm around her & baby. Squeezing her tightly. Tears streamed down his cheeks. She held him closer, kissing his chest, trying to keep her own tears at bay. Only breaking him further, his chest heaving with unspent emotions.

She hugged him desperately wanting to alleviate his pain. He wrapped his arms around her snaking its way to her hair burying his face in her shoulder on the opposite side to the baby. He coudln't be close to her & not lose his sanity.

Can I take u out for a coffee he begged struggling to pull away from her.
She fluttered her eyes in acceptance.
Tum baby ko feed kar lo then we will go
she silently accepted. She could understand there was more to his pain than her mere crazy love @ first sight. She didn't want to be the reason for his agony. She feared it shouldn't be her that caused those deep eyes in pain. She fed the little one praying all the while.. wat he was going to say. Was he going to tell her to stay away from him.. or not to behave so odd infront of him. She had all the dreadful horrors coming in her mind.


they drew down to cafe silently. Maan spent the last 45mins just formulating right words to narrate their past.

She dearly hugged garv & stepped out of the car when they pulled up infront of the cafe. Maan came around her helped her. She blushed walking close to him.

He pulled the seat for her. She elegantly sat holding garv in her arms. She made sure her cuty litle bundle of joy was comfortable. Maan came around & sat opposite to her.

She sweetly pulled her pallu out of baby's mouth. He was again & again nibbling at it. After they settled.. Maan slowly rested his hand on hers..
tumhare bina main baby ko sambal nahi pavonga.
her heart jumped with million hopes. Her happiness couldn't be hid. It was all over her face.
She tried to look calm looking down she couldn't. ..she shied looking here & there.

Suddenly she pulled her hand away. Her face turned pale in fear as her eyes met the pair of eyes from opposite corner table. Veerji her lips murmured. Maan instantly closed his eyes in misery.

-PREV PART 70 NEXT THREAD 11-
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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Oh no!! Aab Kya hoga?? Can't wait to read
more! Thanks for the update!

I'm first!??? I'm so happy :D
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ab ayega maza😈

lovely update as usual🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
was feeling little sad but now i'm ok... i guess i was waiting 4 update to make me feel better...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arre ye Veerji!!! Uff bad timing bro
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the update dear...
me the stalker...looked for ur update now and then and here got one..😃 it was lovely but painful...
poor Maan is going through the phase of self guilt and he needs to come out of it...
loved to see how the unsaid words r understood and communicated between Maneet ..👏
oooh Brij😡 hope now the issue of who is who will be solved once and for all ...
continue soon ...
Edited by Dilsay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i m still not getting why maan is not telling her the past he has once again became selfish only thinking about himself i know that after knowing the truth it would cause cause more pain to my maan 😭 but still he is not doing justice by not telling geet the truth if she comes to know the past from brij then what would happen

plz make him say their past t geet in couple of updates

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I so badly want for their misery to end💔.. the way they are longing for each other ! God ! I so badly want them to hug and express their love to each other.. they are so crazy for one another!

Feeling Maan's desperation and pain and fear so deeply🥺... wonder how things will turn with Brij knowing of them now..

Great part.. Continue soon !

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