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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hahaha glad you are liking it Ash! Yeah well, he doesn't want to scare her off, right? And well, hers is more like a curious passion. The excitement about the first time and feelings that she's never experienced. So, it's her naive curiosity that's letting her open up to him like this. Yeah, I'm trying to make the family more normal than the bunch of freaks that we are watching on the bloody show!

Originally posted by: ashvez
@Janet...such an awesome update.👏
Enjoyed every bit of it.How restraint he was on the last update ...just a bit of a nudge and he gave in..yet such a gentelman...din't go beyond a limit on the first date.Aaahhh!!
Lucknowi express is a different package alltogether. eh???Quite a pataka ..😉No plain Jane!!

Loved sooo much how the family was pulling Arnav's leg and later how Akash was teasing KKG & Arnav...AWWW!! Poor Akash ..he has much substance of his role in ur FF than the show.

Kudos!! Kudos!!!

Ash.

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awww glad to hear about the gush of warmth. Yeah all our collective dils go mmm when Arnav and Khushi are together. Yeah, I'm infusing some humor here and there. I cannot do without that, you see. Glad you liked it :-)

Originally posted by: Priya_128
double whammmy...the angels are in full form :) im definitely not complaining...

not to steal ur words and truly speaking i felt a gush of warmth when i read this update...

the comfortable silence, the ease of her settling in and the care and precaution he took as he carried her in...ufff...such stuff just makes my dil go hmmm mmm mmm :P

and im totally loving the goodnature humour and digs being made at them...

great update janet... :D awaiting more...thankyouuu

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Such lavish and warm praises. Really, one of the sweetest comments ever. Thank you so very much. I do think out each scene as I write it and it means a lot to me when I hear that it was read with as much affection and warmth. I'm gonna try and meet expectations of people like you who enjoying reading as much as I enjoy writing these scenes. Thank you for taking the time out to write this lovely comment :-)

Originally posted by: aadyakali
I have been wait'n for days for yr updt. Each time i receive a PM i hoped it was from you. I simly adore reading yr updt. I am a die hard romantic and the way you are picturing the ARhi romance is the dream of every girl. The latent passion, the tenderness, the fun, the experimenting-with-each-other, the simple minute things that a couple share and which makes them a couple-- you have woven all these so beautifully that each line i read of yr FF i want to cry becoz it is one less line left to read. Thank you for this lovely FF. Waiting for more with barely retained impatience.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you so much, Priya! Glad that you liked it. Yeah, I'm trying strike a balance between their clashing personalities and their feelings for each other :-) You must've read about the mystery in the next update. Hardly a mystery!

Originally posted by: Priya_128
janet...loved the updated :) more joy to my weekend...

their fight and the subsequent make up was just brillliant...i like the way she eluded him to give him a taste of his own medicine...

but what is this mystery problem arnav is having...

anxious to read more...super stuff :)

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Nags Nags Nags! Glad to see your comment! You've been so busy and well so have I that it seems like such a long time! I'm glad I finally caught you in the nick of time for your birthday! All this confusion about your birthday, I'm going to blame on Chicky coz I saw it on her update and all her dates were off. Uff.

So, you liked the update? :-) See, you are the only one who catches up on the subtle things that Arnav feels without really saying anything aloud. Yeah that ehsaas is something I've consciously built so that nothing looks forced when later he does feel strongly about her :-)

I had a feeling that you would like that last hug!

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Awww...such a cute update Janet...i love it. I love how you have started to make Arnav realize the permanence of what he wants...Khusi's love...her haq on him...and his ability to stake his haq on her...when he wants. I loved how overwhelmed he was with this feeling that he got a lump in his throat. I think that this ehsaas will go a long way when shit hits the fan questions are raised about the permanence of their relationship!!

I was just as floored as Arnav was in the last scene when she ran back and hugged him goodnight. I love that she can decompose him just as easily as he can her...a perfect Tit for Tat!!!😛😉

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Originally posted by: romantic.chick
abbbe ... mere liye likha and I am reading last 😭

Haan par tera toh pehla HAK hota hai padne kaa.. for once, you didn't get to read it earlier than everyone else!

but it was perfect to wake up too ... they were totally awww ... and he was so trying to manao her ... why can't our asr do that sometimes too yaar

apna ASR nahi karta isiliye toh hum yahaa karva rahe hai.. woh bhi karega in good time!

my favourite favourite part ...

"Tumhe godi mei leke drive karna shaayad mushkil hoga, but I can try" replied Arnav.

I could see him saying that with his lopsided sexy sexy smirk!!!!

Can't wait for that day in the show, no? We'll be watching it a 1000 times a day!

Lethal! Chal, ab aage ????

Shhh chup!

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Originally posted by: ashvez
JAnet...this is the trust & maturity which I was looking for.WOW!!! Just Amazing!!!.how well they communicate & try to sort out the looming problem.This is too good.Arnav's controlled & restrained anger when Khushi was probing to get in was great.

I am glad you liked it. Normally, when Khushi asks Arnav to do or to not do something, he does the opposite assuming that that's what Khushi actually wants, but is afraid to say. Khushi was just doing the reverse of that this time.

Loved teh way Arnav nonchalantly- informs to the family about his relationship with Khushi-crisp & straight.Typical ASRish.LOL!!!

I know, right? A corny explanation or professing love or anything would be so out of character for Arnav!

Ofcourse, my 'fav' part when he pulls her into his lap.He is such a goodie...Tolerant...and sweet when he sez-"I won't do anything. Just stay with me tonight."

I'm so glad you picked that! It's cute and romantic and nice at the same time, no? He realizes that asking her to stay with him for the night isn't very appropriate as far as she is concerned.

Thanks for the treat Janet...🤗Need to think straight before the hug.😊

Always welcome, Ash. I know, we're all thinking way too much about the hug!

Ash.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

i read someone suggesting that u have ur own show...

i think we should all do dharna till either u have ur own show starring ofcourse you know whooo...

or they make u CV in current show :D honestlyyy..

hamaari maange pooori karooo

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-Janet-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

Hahahahaha Priya, Chicky and I were just discussing ki we should have a fund for us to start a show and then hire Barun and Sanaya as leads and then just write the scripts ourselves! Depending on how desperate the CVs make us, you shall see that happening soon enough! :P

Originally posted by: Priya_128
i read someone suggesting that u have ur own show...
i think we should all do dharna till either u have ur own show starring ofcourse you know whooo...

or they make u CV in current show :D honestlyyy..

hamaari maange pooori karooo

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Roopa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#540

Awesome updates Janet..🤗

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