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..Anita..

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Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Yay!!! second thread!!!
the update was hot!!!

i can't wait to see how khushi handles the situation

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littlemoi

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

CONGRATS!!! and this update was just mindblowing!!! soo good!! you keep on getting better and better each day!!

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Jyo.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Congrats on #2! :) Loving the way the FF is progressing! Sorry for the lack of comments from my side, but will defs start commenting again from November on! Congrats again :)

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Tina

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Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I love all these scenarios u come up with, so creative. Update soon!

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ArshForEver

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Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

in my other comment i forgot to congrats u for the new thread. i wish to reach 10+ threads for this ff.

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nims6

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Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

congrats...u startd 2nd thread.and i lovd this update. a good start...really awesome update...pls update soon.cant wait...

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-Janet-

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Simply_Smart
Congrats on Thread 2!!! Hope you keep writing with many more threads to come 😃 😆

Thank you so much, Smarty! Yeah, let's hope I'm motivated enough to keep writing!

And was your feeling right!! I liked this part!! Arnav noticing the simple traits of Khushi which are making his life easier, happier, and prouder.

Yeah, I'm trying to give it a natural progression. It hasn't been too many days, after all :-)

I LOVED this part: "Don't give her a hard time, Anna. You can give me hell later".

I did a happy dance and read this line like a billion times!! Such a real, but protective line said to a friend.

Haha, I know what you mean. I had a good feeling when I wrote about this too!

I just love where you are going with this (that is if we're going in the same direction lol)!!

I have no idea if I'm going where you are going, but let's hope you like it nevertheless :-)

Best,
Smarty

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-Janet-

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it.

Originally posted by: aadyakali
Hi Janet, you are awesome. I wait for yr update like crazy . I love yr writing and yr style. Keep it up and plzz updt soon

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-Janet-

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Well, I have tried to make the answer to those questions implicit in the story by showing Arnav's and Khushi's thoughts. They do separately think of what's happening between them. What I'm also showing is that somewhere they are coming to an understanding between what's happening between them without really talking about it. I mean, they are having normal conversations where they are fighting and then making up and all that. That is why I tried showing that Khushi was upset with him when he shouted at her, and he made up with her that night. Later too, he told her that he hates it when she avoids him, etc. He is Arnav Singh Raizada - it would be out of character if I make him profess his love. Also, Khushi is figuring out what's happening. But, Khushi being so spontaneous, she is letting things take a natural flow.

Originally posted by: butterfly06
Ok I love your fanfic, but i am having an issue with it now. Why does Khushi let Arnav kiss her all the time? it's one thing if in the heat of the moment they kiss, but now it is just expected that he is just going to kiss her and she never questions it. Wouldn't she be like what is the meaning of this kiss, do you like me, do you want to be with me? How come she is not questioning her feelings or him and why isn't he giving this relationship a name.

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-Janet-

@-Janet-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Awww, love you too, Nargis! I knew you would like this part. Office romance is just for you :-) Yeah, I tried to make it as realistic as possible - just like I imagine them in my head. Glad that you liked it :-D

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Love you Janet...🤗This was exactly what I was talking about...by far this is my favorite update to date...loved it!!! I loved how they separated...and then had to walk away from each other to gain some semblance...too good!!! I Could picture the whole scene...the dressing room, Khusi in a backless Choli lengha, and him shrugging out of his jacket and waist coat...Fabulously written. Can't wait for more...oh...there goes the greed in me!!!😃😆