THE UNKNOWN/last part page 278 - Page 48

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey!!!!!!!! I just finished reading ur fanfic and my god! it's is mindblowing!!!!!!!!keep up the good work and continue soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey ur story is gr8 and ur new fanfaction sound intresting pls continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

iam just bad at spelling because just last year i found out how to spell house and horse right 😆

lol if u werent in the US i would definatly think u were sum 1 i knew cus u TOTTALLY sond like her!!!!

lots of luv and sugar

HIna

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Posted: 19 years ago
part 19

kripa was in her room lie on her bed listing to love songs and thinking about all the times she spend with angad and when she first met angad in KG and how angad and kripa became friends for the first time. kripa had flash backs of when kripa and angad first starting high school and how nervous they were so many flash backs came in kripas head of her and angad over and over and while diffrent flash backs of diffrent times of her and angad came in kripas mind the song

(agar tum mil jao)from the movie zeher was playing in kripas room

kripa smiled to her self more and more as she tought about angad more and more. then a thought crossed her mind that angad dosnt love her as she loves him and soon a tear came down kripas eyes

k-(thinking to her self)angad y dont u love me....i loved u for so long y dont u give us a chance u know that i love u just give me one chance please

as kripa thought more and more about angad the more and more kripa felt depressed

kripa thoughts were soon broken by a knock on kripas bed room door

k-come in(kripa yelled)

angad came in to the room with a big grin on his face

a-sup kripa

k-angad dont u have to get back to your girl friend sheena

a-no i broke up with her

k-but she just became your girl friend this moring

a-i know. she was geting boring

k-angad y do u like playing with girls hearts

a-because its fun

k-u r sick

a-what ever. so what u doing

k-nothing just lieing on my bed listing to songs thinking about stuff

a-so what r u thinking about

k-u know just about my life and all

a-did u think about me

k-no(kripa lied)

kripa was still lie on her bed when angad came right on top of kripa. kripa was taken back by angads action

a-thats to bad because i was thinking about u when i was in my room

k-u were

a-ya i was

angad grins his famouse grin. and gets off from on top of kripa and leaves the room leaveing kripa a bit shock at angads action and words

k-(thinking to herself)was angad realy thinking about me

kripa turns a little red thinking about angad and then kripa sits up on her bed smileing to herself

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it was late at night and we see kripa sleeping with a great smile on her face

we see a shadow of a man come up kripas window and come near kripas bed the man puts one of his hand on kripas cheek and then the man takes his hand up to kripas hair and brushs some of the hair off of kripas face. the shadow of the mans face comes realy close to kripas face but we still can see the mans face because of the darkness we see the shadow of the mans lips meet with kripa then the man bends down to kripa and say "i love u" the man turns around wears a helmet and jumps out of kripas window with out any troble

5 mins later kripa wakes up hearing a motercycle sound kripa quickly runs to her window and sees unknown #1 rideing his motercycle out of the prime ministers house

kripa smiles to herself and gose back to bed haveing a peaceful sleep

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sorry for the short part but iam realy busy right now promise next part will be realy long

hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nabz8888

Hey!!!!!!!! I just finished reading ur fanfic and my god! it's is mindblowing!!!!!!!!keep up the good work and continue soon!!!!!!!!!

glad u like my fan fic😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

hey ur story is gr8 and ur new fanfaction sound intresting pls continue soon

thanks😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol if u werent in the US i would definatly think u were sum 1 i knew cus u TOTTALLY sond like her!!!!

lots of luv and sugar

HIna

hehe the usa is filled with bad spellers😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
fabbbb partttt as alwaysssss 😊
love the storyy
plz cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey!!! So far ur fanfic is so gud..as for ur new fanfic ur going to start..well da story sounds familliar to "First Daughter" or sumthin like tat. I'm not sure if u watched it buh yea. It's where a presidents daughter goes to a public skool and her father hires a undercover and then she kind of has a crush on him or falls in love wit him and then later she finds out tat he's her body guard

I'm sorry if its already been posted..Ne ways can't wait till ur next part 😊

Nida 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a great part and i cant wait for the next!
hey wat new fan fic are u talking abt? wats the story line?

luv mira

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