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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 55

today is a long part hope you all like it 😃

dillip kripa angad and anon are siting on the sofa talking and dillip ask normal father type questions like kripas my only person thats like a daugher and things like that while dillip ask anon questions angad just looked at anon then at kripa then at anon again and kripa noticed this and was getting pissed off but didnt say any thing becuase of anon being in the room.

d-angad how about we leave kripa and anon alone

dillip gets up

a-sure dad

angad also gets up and waits for dillip to leave then angad also leave but when angad leaves the room he also leave a small mrico. camra so he can see whats happening.while out side of the room angad was leaning at the door to hear what they were saying and looked at his watch to see what they were doing

a-(thinking)god kripa, from all guys in the world you had to choice a crimal and that to anon a person that already hates my gut

as angad looked at what anon and kripa were doing angad got more and more jelouse because once in a while anon whould hold kripas hands or sit next to her realy closely and angad could hear him say things like i love you and i realy care about you more than any one in the world and angad would get more and more jelouse then angry

a-(thinking)i got to break the marrage from kripa and anon. anon could kill kripa alive and i cant let that happen. there has to be a way to get kripa out of that room.

angad then sees a glass vase and smiles realy big

a-perfect

angad grabs the glass vase and hits him self realy hard on the head then at the corner of the side of the table he hit himself on the arm then quickly opens the door to the liveing room and faints

k-ANGAD!!!!!

kripa runs to angad but angad has already fainted

k-ANGAD!!!!!wake up please wake up....angad!!!!!

an-kripa we have to get him to the hospital fast

k-i will go get the gard wait here

as kripa ran out of the room we see anon with a evil grin

an-(thinking)angad you care for kripa so much that you will do anything to keep her away from me. smart....but come on how long do you thing you can keep hurting your self just to keep kripa safe it just a matter of time till you die just hurting your self

right then kripa comes back with dillip and some gards and they take angad to the hospital

at the hospital shaun and prithiv came karan couldnt come because he had some very important work to do

s-hows angad

k-i dont know the doctor didnt say anything

p-god angad has been makeing ways to many trips to the hospital. when will this guy learn to be careful

right after prithiv says that anon comes from around the corner and shaun and prithiv see him

an-dont worrie angad will be fine

k-thanks anon(hugs anon)

prithiv and shaun just looked at anon shocked while anon gave a evil grin at prithiv and shaun

p-(whispering to shaun)if angad finds out about this he is going to kill us

s-(whispering to prithiv)you think!!! better if we dont tell angad

k-prithiv, shaun, meet my future husband anon

s-i think iam going to be sick(faints on the floor)

k-SHAUN!!!!doctor!!!doctor!!!

the doctor comes a checks shaun

doctor-dont worrie shaun just fainted because of shock

k-whats so shocking about saying iam geting married

p-trust me it is very shocking

a little while after shaun regains conshions the doctor from angads room comes out

doctor-no need to be scared angad will be fine looks like that there was a peice of glass at stuck to his head but we got it out and he will be fine its a good thing you got him here in the time you did other wise he could have died but he is fine now and you can take him home now

at the prime ministers house dillip went to his room and anon went home prithiv and shaun went home with a scared expression but angad said not to say anything to kripa. now kripa was helping angad to his room angad had a bandage around his head because of the glass and he had a bandage round his arm becuase of the table

in angads room

in angad room kripa closed angads room and locked it then made angad sit in his bed while kripa just stayed standing

k-(in a angry voice) angad cant you take care of your self and how did you get hit with a vase anyway huh tell me angad it just flew in the air and hit you didnt it. angad i know you well enough to know you hit your self on perpous to break me and anon up arent you angad huh tell me iam i right or wrong

the hole time kripa was talking angad just smiled at kripa

k-and why the hell are you smileing huh tell me didnt you hurt your self or not. you know what for get you iam out of here

as kripa was about to leave angad grabed kripas wrist from the side of bed which made kripas heart melt

a-(smileing)kripa if you knew that i hurt myself then why did you ask

kripa was trying to be angry but because angad was holding kripas wrist so hard it was hard for kripa to think of any thing but angad

k-(angry voice)angad LET GO OF MY HAND!!!!(yelling)

a-(in a calm voice)come on kripa answer my question if you knew i hurt myself then why did you ask

k-i dont find it important to tell you!!!(yelling)

angad gets angry and pulls kripa's wrist so hard towrds him that kripa falls on top of him on the bed then angad puts both his arms around kripas back realy hard so she cant get away

k-(angry and yelling)LET ME GO!!!!

a-(in a deadly dangerouse voice)kripa if you can be stubborn then so can i

the dangerouse voice got kripa so scared that she almost lost her self but then she remembered that it was angad. angad pushed kripa realy hard that now kripa was lieing on the bed and angad was on top.

k-LET ME GO!!!!(yelling)

a-no, we need to talk(danger voice)

kripa uses her legs to kick angad so angad puts all his body pressure on kripa so she can move her legs. so now kripa trys and use her hands to push off angad but she couldnt becuase he was to strong then angad grabed both of kripas wrist and pushed it down on the bed so she couldnt do any thing at all

a-we need to talk(danger voice)

k-we have nothing to talk about!!!!NOW LET ME GO!!!

kripa moved her head to the side so see dosnt have to look at angad

a-look at me(now in a killer voice)

k-no if you can be stubborn then so can i(angry)

angad knew kripa so well that he knew that if he let gose of one of kripas hands then she would slap him across the face

a-kripa i will give you one more chance look at me you little ****** ***** LOOK AT ME!!!!!!

k-no no (right on angads face)NO!!!

a-oh you asked for it(yelling)

angad slaped kripa across the face

a-that was for eating my ice cream in 1st grade(yelling)

kripas face was all red from angads slap but kripa didnt care of the pain now that one of kripa hands were free kripa slaped angad so hard that he fell off the bed

k-that was for slaping me and throughing my home work in the lake when i we were in 2nd grade

angad got realy angry and took out a long hand and grabed kripas hair and pulled her on the floor with him as soon as kripa hit the floor angad punched kripa in the stomach

a-(yelling)that was for not come to my 13th birthday party

kripa lifted up a leg and kick angad in the knee while lieing on the floor then went on top of angad and dug her finger nails in to angad shoulder and bit him on the side of angads neck untill kripa could feel angad blood in her mouth

k-(screams her lungs out) that was for not visting me when i was sick on the DAY OF YOUR 13th BIRTHDAY PARTY!!!

angad pushs kripa off on him and grabs one of kripa wrist and twist it all the way to her back

k-aaahhhh!!!!

a-thats for not leting me kiss that hot frence girl in 9th grade(trying to get his voice throught kripas screms)

kripa some how gets her hand undone from angads grab and swings her leg over angads waist and put a arm around angads neck and then with her other hand pulls angads hair as hard as she could

k-thats for copying my homework every day from the first day of high school

angad stands up picks kripa up and pushs her to a wall realy hard that we hear a realy loud noise from kripa hiting the wall angad quickly gose up to kripa before she can run off and kiss kripa right there and then and keep kissing kripa untill he cant push kripa toward the wall any more

a-(yelling right in kripas face)thats for falling in love with me in high school

kripa slaps angad across the face and kicks him in the in the stomch which cause angad to fall on the ground grabing his stomch

k-thats for kiss a girl that is about to GET MARRIED TO SOME ONE ELSE!!!

then angad from the ground pulls kripa down to the ground and he gets up and carries kripa in his arms and throughs kripa on to the bed with full force like slam dunking a basketball in a basketball net. then angad gose on top of kripa and kiss kripa on the neck and shoulder and cheeks. kripa tryied to go away from angad but it was no use he was to strong and angad kept kiss kripa all over her body angad would kiss kripas lips the most and he would kiss places were he hurt her the most

a-(in a calm voice)that was for ever comeing in to my life

finily kripa was able to push angad off the bed as angad was falling off the bed angad was able to push kripa off to the other side of the bed. finily after a long time angad and kripa felt relax as if nothing was wrong every thing in the world was ok and every thing seemed perfect.here they were angad and kripa one the floor angad on the right of the bed and kripa on the left side.neither of them said a word they just lied there no thoughts went through there heads they seemed calm. blood driped down angads neck from when kripa bit him and blood came down kripas fore head from when kripa fell on the ground just a few seconds ago, but nothing was said it was as if the world had ended there was nothing to say nothing left of angad and kripa they just didnt know what to say or do. after a few mins of quiteness angad and kripa got up at the same time and head of the door angad and kripa had to hold on to each other because they could barly move because of all the kicking and screaming and punching and kissing. angad cawled to kripa then angad put a arm around kripas neck and kripa put a hand on angad shoulder both helped each other up and started limping toward the door and few times angad and kripa fell down but both help each other to get to the door finily after about 10 mins later angad and kripa managed to get the door opend and as soon as angad and kripa opened the door they saw dillip who was passing angad room. dillip was shocked to see angad bleeding from the side of his neck and kripa bleeding from her fore head both looking as if they are just about to fall over and faint/die.



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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
part 56



it was late at night and we see angad and kripa siting at the kitchin table. dillip had to agian go to some confrence because of the unknown but dillip was very up set when he saw that angad and kripa almost killed each other fighting

in the kitchen we see kripa had a bandage on her head just like angad. kripa was puting some cream on angads neck and angad just couldnt stay still

k-angad stay still

a-aaahhhh it burn

kripa was now feeling bad for biting him

k-sorry angad

a-for what

k- for you know what happend to your neck...i mean its going to be a scare for ever and the nail marks on the side of your arms

a-you shouldnt say sorry....i did start the fight....can i tell you some thing like dont take it the wrong way or any thing but after like punching you and slaping you and (looks down and smiles a little)kissing you....i felt so calm after that was all over

k-to tell you the truth i also felt the same way

a-even when i kissed you

for the first time in a long time kripa looked in to angads eyes like realy looked in his eyes and truly said what she felt

k-ya even when you kissed me

angad and kripa smiled to them it flet as if they were starting over like meeting for the first time but they them self knew that no matter how much they loved each other there was always going to be a wall between them to kripa it is something angad is hiding, to angad it is the unknowns but one way or another there is a wall between them.

k-uummm angad do you want some ice cream or something

angad smiled

a-ya i would love some

kripa got up and took out some ice cream. while kripa was geting ice cream angad kept looking at kripa he looked at kripas face and every part of her body. kripa then came to the table with two ice cream blows

k-here you go your ice cream and here some for me

angad smiles again

a-kripa if i asked you for 2 things would you give it to me

k-(looking at her ice cream)angad till the day i get married i am all your what ever you ask me for i will do

a-then one thing i want you to is get married to any one but anon

k-angad i told you that i will do any thing you asked me to do till the day i get married and i can get married to him because the day i get married i do nothing you say so in a way i wont break up with him and still iam doing what your asking me to do

a-fine if you wont get married to some one else then anon then will you be mines when iam not drunk this time

k-thats a funny joke. for a second i thought you were telling the truth

a-i wasnt jokeing.iam telling the truth i want you to be mine before you go away for good

k-angad how will i face uncle again i will never be able to show my face in frount of uncle

a-dont think of dad just think of me dont worrie about dad i will take care of him but just look at me and try and understand me just once and if once you understand i promise to tell you the bigest secrect of my life

k-so your say that if i answer one question right while iam in bed with you. you will tell me the great secret you have been hiding sence we were in high school

a-thats what iam saying but then your with me i want you blind folded because we going to do it in my house the one i own not my dad

k-you own a house

a-ya i bought it when we were in high school.

kripa went slient for a long time kripa wanted to know the truth of angad and now she was geting the perfect chance kripa knew that she knew every thing about angad but the way angad was asking her to find out was just wrong

a-so what do you say

k-(paused for a min)ok

a-ok so this is the rules you get 3 nights with me so you choice which night you want to play the quiz game in the quiz night i ask you nonstop questions about my self all night and in any of thous 3 nights you answer one of my questions correct then i will tell you my big secret

k-and what if i dont get any of the answers right in any of the 3 nights

a-then you have to break up with anon and i DONT have to tell you why i want you to break up with anon

k-ok then fine

angad stands up from the chair

a-go get ready and we will go to my house

angad then comes realy close to kripa and whispers in her ears

a-(whispering)i suggest you wear a very short short short dress(normal voice)i will be waiting in the car

angad starts walking off when kripa talks

k-angad what your doing is wrong

a-well you could have refused

k-angad you knew that i would never refuse to find out what your secret realy is and your just takeing advantage of this moment

a-kripa your right iam takeing advantage of this moment but the thing is i know you will never know a right answer to any of my questions but i am going to be happy that you arent going to marry anon

k-thats were your wrong iam gong to find a right answer to one of you questions and iam going to know your big secret

a-you will never find out

k-well find out once we go to your house

a-go get ready

by saying that angad gose to his car and kripa gose to get dressed




i know this part was like diffrent and wierd but in the next part it wont be angad and kripa makeing out the whole time theres other stuff that is going to happen also

hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
part 60



kripa saw the most shocking thing of her life

under angad matress kripa saw about 50 diffrent guns 100s of diffrent bullest labled either sliver bullet,knock out bullet, ect. ect. kripa picked up a gun and fliped it over to see words engraved on it. it said "THE UNKNOWN #1". tears spilled out of kripas eyes

k-no it cant be i lived with angad for so long how can i not know...no it just cant be

kripa picked up another gun hopeing it would say something else but it said the samething all of the guns said the samething "THE UNKWNON #1"

k-(thinking)angad is the unkwnon

kripa quickly grabed her backpack stuffed the guns and bullets in her backpack then grabed her car keys and tried to remember were the unknown house was the last time she went there was when she was in high school. kripa found her way to the unknown house were she saw a unknown in a helmet so she couldnt tell who the person was

k-weres angad

#4-i dont know what your talking about....who is angad

kripa takes out her backpack flips it over and lets all the guns and bullets fall to the ground.

k-i figured it out. angad is the unknown now tell me were is he

prithiv takes off his helmet so kripa could see him

p-he's in the backyard fighting with shaun with guns you might want to stop them before they kill each other

k-y dont you stop them

p-its aginst the unknwon rule we dont stop fights with each other unless it gets out of hand

k-and you thing shooting bullets with each other is not a bad thing

p-no if you got shot by a bullet its not a big deal but if bombs start going on then its a big deal

kripa througs the backpack in her hand on prithiv and runs out the back door were she sees 2 guys in hilmets shooting at each other

k-STOP!!!!!

kripa yelled louder then the bullet sound so angad and shaun could here he. angad and shaun stoped fighting not because they lost there angar they were just suprised to see kripa there at the unknown house the last time she visted was when she was in high school

k-which one of you is angad

shaun takes off his helmet so kripa knows that the other person has to be angad. kripa runs to angad and hugs him crying

k-why didnt you tell me. angad takes off his helmet and his hair is all wet from sweating

a-kripa how did you find out

k-never leave guns under your matress

a-kripa you need to go back home

k-no angad fist you have to tell me why you dont want me to marry anon

a-well sence you know about me i guess there nothing left to hide anon is one of the unknwons bigest enemys

k-WHAT!!!!i cant get engaged to anon what if he hurts me

a-kripa i will let nothing happen to you but sence you know my secret you have to help the unknowns bet anon

k-how

a-get engaged with anon and lead him to the fround of the house and then lave the rest to us

k-no what if you get hurt i cant let you get hurt because of me

a-kripa this is the reason i didnt tell you i was the unknown you faint or through-up when we go on rollercosters you get scrared in scary movies you can bare to lose some one you love. i dont want to worrie you all the time over me i need you to be brave and have faith in me returning safely. can you be brave for me?

kripa nodes her head

k-yes i can

and angad and kripa hug each other crying knowing that the wall between there love has ended they are finily one togather


hope u like this part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 61

ok every one all of you guys realy want to read my new fan fic my new fan fic will be posted at the bottom of the last part of the unknown

the engement night

angad was in his room geting ready for the engagment. angad put a gun on the sids of his waist belt then straped a gun on the side of his leg angad put a gun in his pocket and then straped a gun on the in side of his sleeves angad took out a picture of kripa kissed it and left the room

out side of angads room there were all ready guest around the place so he could get in to kripas room so he when back to his room opended his closet and pushed all his cloths to the side then his pushed the wall and it opened a passage way angad went in the passage way and closed the passage way door with a grin on his face

in kripas room kripa is wearinga pink dress trying to tie a lace on the back of her dress when angad comes out of kripas closet and kripa get scared

k-aawww

a-relax it just me

k-god angad how long have you been in my closet

a-just came form the passage way

k-theres a passage way from my room to yours

a-ya

k-you drilled a hole through the house

a-no i had found it when i will little

k-oh, angad can you help me tie the lace on my back

a-can you trust me enough

k-angad(warning tone)

a-come on kripa iam the unknown do you think realy think that you can take me in a fight. and you your self know realy well that i held back on you when we fought in my room a few days back

k-just tie the lace

angad kiss kripas back and ties the lace angad turns kripa around and looks right in to kripa eyes

a-kripa you might need this

angad takes the gun out of his pocket and gives it to kripa

k-how will i keep with with me iam wearing a dress

angad takes out a gun strap and ties the gun right above kripas knees and the dress coves the gun

a-r u ready

kripa smiles

k-ya, oh angad be careful

a-will do

engagment hall we see all the unknowns on each corner of the hall looking around finily anon comes through the door and it was engagment time. anon and kripa excanged rings and every one congadulated them

k-anon do you want to go for a walk out side

an-sure

as soon as kripa and anon when out side all the unknowns left the hall also

out side

k-anon iam sorry

an-for what

k-this

kripa takes out a hand and punchs him across the face kripa gets him be such a suprise that he falls on the ground. as soon as anon falls on the ground he has about 10 diffrent guns pointing at him

#1-stay put

kripa picks up a peice of glass from the ground and drags it down her arm and legs makeing herself bleed then she screams realy loud and then the unknwons run from there leaveing anon on the ground and the guest that heard kripa ran out to see kripa bleeding like crazy

d-kripa what happend

k-uncle, anon did this to me

dillip takes kripa inside and anon was arrested right then. as soon as dillip take kripa to her room and gose out side kripa smiles. angad comes in the room with a towal and cleans kripas blood

a-are you ok

k-ya iam fine

angad and kripa hug each other and dillip who was looking from the door also smiled

19 years later

k-adi dont you want any breakfast

adi-cant mom if i make tina late once more she is going to kill me

k-your just like your father...oh dont forget your dads comeing from europ today so make sure you finish all your homework and i will let you get some tips from your dad on how to be a good unknown

adi-come on mom iam already a good unknown probly even better then dad

adi run out the door and gose in a black sports car

adi-sorry sorry sorry

tina-JUST SHUT UP!!!!befor you make me last for class lets just GO!!!!


in the past 19 years the unknown became very famous adi who is now 18 has been a unknown for 2 years adi's habts are just like angads wake up late and always be playboys but adi looks like kripa more then angad. angad on the other hand became the prime minister of india just like his father. dillip had past away just 3years back one year before adi became the unknwon

adi is now unknown #1

tina is the daughter of prithiv and aliaya. she for one is realy a lot like aliaya always be on time and try to be the best possible. tina and adi have been friends sence childhood just like angad and kripa except tina already know adi's secreat of him being the unknown because she her self is an unknown

tina is unknown #2

karan and sheen had 2 boys twins arjun grew up to be kind of strait foward he would always say what was on his mind instead of hideing it just like sheena raj was like karan and was a super computer nerd but still was good looking the 2 twins would some time wear the same thing to confuse the teacher and the teacher would always get mad at them doing that

raj is unknown #3
arjun is unknown #4

shuan had gotten married to a girl named pooja from the usa and they had a girl named kajol who also became the unkown she was a nice and sweet girl but when some one messed with her she could punch them so hard that the person would die of internal bleeding. arjun alway flurts with kajol and arjun is the only person kajol will let to flurt with her because kajol always like arjun for a long time and arjun alway like kajol in a way to but never tell each other

kajol is unknown #5

as time when by new unknowns came but the first unknwons will always be known from each new unknown. no one realy knows how you can become an unknown no one knows if the person you sit next to every day in school is an unknown but if you keep strong and brave maybe one day you might be asked to become an unknown

rules of the unknown

1-there can only be 5 unknown
2-you must be relited to the 1st 5 unknowns except if one of the unknowns dies then you can be asked to join the unknowns
3-when a unknow gets married they have to tell there wife or husband one day before marrige that they are the unknowns and if the wife or husband refuse to marry an unknonw after finding out there secret they must die
4-never kill a person unless defending yourself
5-if people find out you are an unknown you can never rat out the other unknowns but instead you must kill yourself before any police can reach you


hope u all liked this fan fic i realy enjoied writeing this fan fic and had a lot of fun and made a lot of firends writeing this fan fic but i am going to end this fan fic and start a new one here is the link to the new fan fic


http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=308937&P N=1&TPN=1
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
THE UNKNOWN GANG

THE UNKNOWN IS A BIKER GANG THAT HELPS PEOPLE THERE ARE 5 PEOPLE IN THE UNKNOWN GANG. THE UNKNOWN GANG ARE THE MOST WANTED GANG IN INDIA BECAUSE NO ONE HAS SEEN THE UNKNOWNS FACE BEFORE THE WOLE GANG ALWAYS WEARS A MOTERCYCLE HLEMET AND THE WHOLE GANG RIDES ON MOTERCYCLES(THINK OF THE MOTERCYCLES FROM DHOOM) EVERY TIME ANY OF THE UNKNOWN HELP SOME ONE THEY ALWAYS END UP BURING A SHOP DOWN OR BREAKING AN EXPENCIVE GLASS WINDOW OF A SHOP. BESIDES BEING THE MOST WANTED GANG IN INDIA THE UNKNOWN GANG IS ALSO THE #1 HEROS OF INDIA BECAUSE OTHER THEN HELPING PEOPLE THE UNKNOWN GANG HAVE STOPED MANY UNDERWORLD DON AND STOPED A LOT OF UNDERWORLD GANGS ALSO.



IF U HAVE ANY QUESTIONS ABOUT THE UNKNOWN GANG PLEASE TELL ME SO I CAN HELP U UNDERSTAND MORE ABOUT THE UNKNOWN GANG

HOPE U LIKE MY INTRO ON THE UNKNOWN GANG
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Prom 1

we see the unknown biker gang that are rideing on the streets of india. all of the bikers have black color bikes except the middle biker the middle biker has a red and a black color motercycle then all of the bickers stop at once the camra zooms up to the unknown with the red and black mothercycle "Iam the leader of the unknown gang(still has his helmet on)no one has seen my 18 year old handsom face,but that is about to change by a girl by the name of kripa sharma."Then the unknown gang rides away in the streets of india

hope you like this prom
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Prom 3

We see a guy at the disco "Hi Iam Angad Khanna every girl loves me every girl wants to be my friend, but I only have one friend that is a girl, a girl that i can trust that girl is Kripa Sharma, I know Kripa loves me but I can never give her what she wants and that is become the same Angad that i was six years ago."


hope u liked my prom
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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part 3

lunch ended and the next class angad and kripa had togather. kripa was still angry at angad for kiss a girl when he knew kripa liked him

k-(think to herself)i wish the old 12 year old angad was with me at least he wouldnt have kissed a girl in frount of me....i dont know why angad acts the way he dose its not his fauly that his mother was murdered

as kripa reached her class her saw that there was one seat left and that was beside angad. kripa was still angry at angad but knew she couldnt be angry at angad for to long so with out wanting to kripa say beside angad

as the teacher started talking to the class angad passed a note to krip

a-(note)sorry for what i did

k-(note)forget it iam not going to forgive u

a-(note)please for give me

k-(note)no

a-(note)do u want me to kiss u in frount of every one

k-(note)NO...NO....NO...AND NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

a-(note)i thought you were going to say yes because you said you liked me and all

k-(note)angad your the most stupidest guy i have ever meet....when you like some one you take the person you like in a dark cormer were theres no one around and then you make love

a-(note)kripa u are starting to sound like are teacher, boreing, by the way i am haveing a party tommrow at my house karan and prithiv are comeing too....are you going to come?

k-(note)ya i will come

****************************************

after school karipa had to droup angad to his house

out side of angads house there were many reporters trying to meet with the prime minister

k-angad whats going on at your house

a-i dont know........kripa com you come with me to my house i dont want to face all those press people by me self

k-no way angad the last time i came to your house with the press people around i wasnt able to leave your house till one in the moring

a-please kripa come with me

k-no......angad i will see you tommrow at your party

angad was about to step out of the car when angad remembered someting

a-kripa bring extra clothes with u for tommrows party

k-y

a-bacause i want my best friend to sleep over at my house pluse karan and prithiv are also sleeping over

k-no angad i dont want to stay over at your house....think about it 3 guys one girl not a good idea

a-to bad your going to have to

before kripa could protest angad already left the car....as angad ran in to his house all the reporters started questioning angad......angad didnt listen to the reporters and ran inside his house

inside the prime ministers house

a-dad.....dad

dillip came down stairs from one of the rooms upstairs

d-angad y r u yelling

a-dad y are there newreportes out side are house

d-angad when you were in school the unknowns saved about 30 people form a buring building

(for all the people that think angad karan and prithiv are the unknown think about it if angad was in school when the unknown saved the people then how can angad karan and prithiv be part of the unknown gang)

a-so

d-well the newreporters want to know if we should put the unknowns in jail or if we should let the unknowns rome free

a-well of corse dad you should let them be free at least they save people with on cost

d-but u dont understand the unknowns saved the people form the buring fire but the unknowns started the fire in the process of capturing underworld gang

a-oh, well in that case your tost.....even i wouldnt know what i would do if i were you

d-god if only i knew who the unknown were i could....i could fixs all this mess up


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
gussing game

ok every one i was thinking....a lot of u guys have been wondering about who the 5 unknown people are in the fan fic....well i thought that it would be fun if u all played a game were u put down who u think unknown 12345 are who ever guess all the name right will win the game

excample

if u think angad is the leader of the unknown gang u would put down

#1 angad

then if u think kripa was in the unknown gang as #3 u would put

#3 kripa

who every guess all the unknowns in the order as
1
2
3
4
5
first will win

the game will be continued to be played untill we have a winner or untill i reach a point in my fan fic were the unknonws are relived in my fan fic

note----i stil havent introdused or giveing clues as to who are part of the unknown gang but if u think u know who unknown 1234and 5 is post the peoples name and i will pm u to tell u if u r right or wrong

p.s. if u get a pm that say that u have figured out who the unknown gang is please dont tell any one else other wise that will ruin the game and the fan fic

thanks
*****night girl*****
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
omg u need 2 become a writer when u grow up i would soo buy ur books 😃

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