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Posted: 19 years ago
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next part comeing in a few mins
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part5

it was 3 in the moring in india every one was still asleep.......we see kripa also sleeping, but soon kripa wakes up hearing a thunder kind of sound from out side of her window.....kripas window faces the streets. as kripa looked outside of her window, kripa was shocked to see that the unknown were right out side her house. kripa opens her window to hear what the unknowns are saying.

#1-darn, #2 didnt u fix my bike like i told u to yesterday

#2-hello iam only 18 i need time to study for school

#1-well can u fix my bike right now as fast as you can....if any one sees us and calls the police my family is going to kill me

kripa who was listining to the unknowns smiled to know that the unknows were just like normal guys who care about there family and worried about passing school

as kripa was about to close her window and go back to sleep thinking that the unknown only ment to do good but as kripa started to close her window her hand sliped and broke a vase that was beside her window....the sound of the breaking vase could be heard from down the street were the unknowns were standing all the 5 unknowns looked up and saw a girl looking out the window at them

2345-oh dang

the unknown 2345 started working on fixing unknown #1s bike and fast in 2mins flat the unknowns fixed unknonw#1 bike

#3-#1 we finised fixing your bike

as #3 said this he relised that #1 was stareing at the girl from the window and the girl was stareing back

as kripa stared and unknown #1 kripa couldnt figure out y she was stareing at unknown#1 kripa couldnt figure out y she didnt call the police kripa couldnt figure out y she didnt call dillip uncle and tell him that the unknown are right out side her house

as unknown #1 stared at the girl at the window he couldnt figure out y he was stareing at that girl he couldnt figure out y he didnt run off with his bubbys and run off before the police came alonge but all that the unknown #1 did was stare at a girl on the 2nd floor looking through a window

#3-come on #1 lets go before the police show up

#3 draged #1 to his moter cycle and the unknown gang zoomed away to the streets of india

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the next day at school angad karan and prithiv laughed at kripa

a-oh look karan the unknown is right out side my window

k-will u shut it.......belive me or not i know what i saw.....the unknown was right out side my house right there and i know it

ka-ya kripa what are the chances that the unknown bikers bike would get messed up right in frount off your house

p-kripa just think of it as a dream and let the thought go other wise ppl will start to think u have gone crazy

k-(angry)will u quit bugging me !!!!!!!!!!!!!

a-sorry kripa we realy didnt mean it that seriously

angad puts his arms around kripas shoulders

a-come on kripa we were just jokeing around, by the way dont forget to come to my party tonight

k-ok

angad walk with kripa to her black sports car and after kripa drives off angad gose to his red sports car and also drives off......karan drives off in a dark green color sports car and prithiv drives off in a navy blue color sports car

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at kripas house as kripa entered her house she takes off her shoes and the first thing she yells is

k-MOM DONT MAKE DINNER FOR ME IAM STAYING OVER AT ANGADS HOUSE TONIGHT

kripa enters the kitchen were we see gyatri cooking

g-so how was your day

k-great mom

kripa still hadnt told her mom about the unknown

k-weres dad

g-he has to work he said that he will come home late

k-oh....ok i will just call dad and tell him i am staying over at angads house

g-how about i tell him when he comes home

k-mom remembered the last time when dad came late home and i was at karans house and u had went to sleep and when dad came home he went to my room to check on me and remember i wasnt in my bed and dad called the police thinking someone kiddnaped me

g-ya

k-well i dont want to have that happen again

kripa then went to her room and called her dad saying she was going to stay over at angads house

inside kripas room

kripa is laying on the bed with her eye wide open thinking about last night and how the unknown was looking back at her

kripa realy didnt know if the unknown was looking at her or not because of the helmet but she was sure the unknown was looking at her

kripa then gets up from her bed and gets up to get ready to go to angads party as kripa opens her closet door she sees the same #1 unknown in her closet standing in frount of her with his helmet on....kripa was about the scream when the unknown put his hand over kripas mouth pulled her in the closet and locked the closet shut




hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG I'll die here RUHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONITNUE ASAP šŸ˜‰ Me gone crazy here 😳 šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab part
cont soon
cant wait to see wat will he do or wat will happen šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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right now iam at school i will continue once i get home

kripa will see the unknowns house in the next part
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OMG OMG PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE ITS SOOOOO GOOD PLZZZ COUNTINUE
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzz continue fast. i luv ur fanfic
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