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awesome part...loved the preparations of the wedding...update soon
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Originally posted by: sukklover

Ji...😉..

most 1stly...me 4 PM.😛..
4 ur new thread...🥳...
u done a
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4 this ..👍🏼..
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so much ..dear..😛..
4 this update..👏👏.
tons of 4 u dear..🤗...
again said ..😊.
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part 66

rajji rolled her eyes...
rajji waking every1 - coffee aa gayi dekho..utho sab...
nupur - dis is d 6th time..nothing new...
karan rolled his eyes - ok..agar abhi sab uth gaye...to sham ko meri taraf se dinner treat...
...
hearing so every1 jumped gettinmg up..running back to deir works...
while karan n shweta looked at each other n rolled deir eyes...
rajji giggled...

...

aftr completeing how much work dey could possibly complete..every1 made deir ways back to home for getting freshened...

geet at home...

rano - puttar..kitne der bachha..subah ki gayi...abhi apni shakal dikha rahi hai...
geet - kya huva mumma...shadi ki hi preperations me busy thi...
rajji rolled her eyes...
rajji - wohi mumma puchh rahi hai idiot...
geet waked her...
rajji shouting - mumma..see di mujhe maar rahi hai...
rano - tum dono ab bas karo ge plz..me pehle se hi cafi thak gayi hu...
rano was angry now...
geet n rajji made baby faces at each other...
just den brij entered...
brij - geet..leher kab se tumhara cell try kar rahi thi..par not reachable aa raha tha...
geet - kyu bhai..bhabhi ko mujse kuchh kaam tha...
brij - haan..actually uttara london se aaj hu aayi hai...
geet got excited - wattt...wen did she cum..usne mujhe call tak nahi kiya...goddd its gonna b great fun ya...
brij - ha ha..wo tere liye nahi meri shadi ke liye aayi hai..meri chhoti sali...
geet teasingly - owo..sali haan..adhi gharwali types...
brij - r u kidding...gharwali ko pata chala to aur adha kya..jo puri hai wo bhi nahi milegi...
saying so he started to laughed along wid rajji and geet...
rajji - bhai..bhabhi ko apke irade batane padenge...
geet gave a high-5 to rajji for dis..while brij made angry face...
brij - vil u both b serious now...
geet - ok bhai...
brij - wo tere bare me puchh rahi thi...par tu thi nahi...to mene teri taraf se bil diya ke wo bhi tumhare group ke sath shopping ke liye aa sakti hai...
geet smiled...
brij - tujhe koi prob to nahi hogi na..
geet giggled - kya bhai aap bhi...mujhe kya prob hogi..jitna ladkiyan..utni more choices...
geet n rajji giggled...
while brij rolled his eyes...
geet - me usse raat me baat kar lungi..abhi me dinner pe ja rahi hu...
rajji - di me bhi...
geet - bilkul nahi...
rajji made baby face at brij...
brij made baby face at geet...
geet - i said NO...school ka homework complete kar le...din bhar me kitab ko hath tak nahi lagaya...
rajji - di aap kehti to me karan bhaiyya ke office kitaben lekar chalti...
geet rolled her eyes...
while brij waked her playfully...
brij - rajji..di thik keh rahi hai...bachha tu thak gayi hogi...
rajji - hmm..thik hai..but den i wnt chocolate ice-cream aftr dinner...
geet - me aate wqt le aaungi...ab ja...
rajji made her way to her room...
brij - bachha...jyada der mat karna..maa kafi thaki lag rahi hai...aane ke baad maa ki thodi der hair massage kar dena...
geet - bhai..khana aaj aap bahar se order kar do...mujhe jane me abhi waqt hai..me maa ki hair massage kar deti hu tab tak..taki wo jaldi so sake...
brij smiled - mujhe lagta hai yahi thik hoga...
...
with dat...
both made deir ways at respective places...

...

in rano's room...

geet was giving hair-massage to rano...n rano was feeling relaxed...

rano - geet tujhe der ho jayegi...
geet - maa abhi waqt hai...
geet was giving very slow n gentle massage to rano's hairs...
rano - thnq beta..
geet - mumma..mujhe lagta hai...apko har roz ek baar massage karwa leni chahiye...
rano - kyu re...
geet - papa ko aap se kam dar lagega...
wid dat geet started laughing like idiot while rano made angry face...

just den her cell started ringing...
geet noticed who it was...
d expression of geet's face told rano who it was...
b4 geet could react...as her hands were filled wid oil...

rano took d mob..n received d call...
geet eyes widened wid sudden act of rano...
while rano barely could stop her giggled n put d call on ear...

maan - jaan..mene tumhe doctor ke paas jane ko kaha tha...tum gayi ya nahi...agar gayi..to tum ne mujhe call karke bataya kyu nahi ke doctor ne kya kaha...aur agar nahi gayi to mujse bura koi na hoga geet...subah se tumhara cell try kar raha hu..par not reachable...tum thik to hona..ab ungli me dard to nahi ho raha na...

rano was mesmerized noticing his concern towrds geet...
while maan made confused face thinking why is she not speaking anything...
maan - abhi bhi dard ho raha hai kya..tum kuchh bol kyu nahi rahi...tum doctor ke paas nahi gayi..i knew..tumne meri baat nahi mani...dadi ne mujh strictly warn kiya tha ke tumhe doctor ke paas jane ko kahu...

rano's stupid act had tunred into a special n serious issue...
all doubt dat she had for maan was cleared now...
she was amused d way he cares for geet...
she was happy to hav such a guy in her daughter's life...
she was in tears filled wid emotions experiencing d worryfull voice of maan...

maan was totally confused...y is she not saying anything...

he slowly uttered - geet...
rano - geet bilkul thik hai beta...

maan mob sliped out of his hand...😆
but he hurriedly caught b4 it fall on floar...
his eyes widened in shock...
did he jsut say jaan..even for once...
roflll...😉 😉
he was in shock of his life..for blabbering so much...

rano - me geet ki mumma hu...
maan relucatnly - mumma...m sorry...wo geet...
rano smiled...
she loved d way he called her mumma...
rano - pareshan mat ho..me khud geet ko doctor ke paas le gayi thi..she is fine...

geet was getting excited n nervous at d same time she was very scared thinking maan vil scold her now...for being so ignorant...

maan - ok...thnq mumma..umm..me pko mumma...i mean...
rano - bilkul beta..me sirf geet ki hi nahi tumhari bhi mumma hu...
maan was touched wid dat...
only he knew wat went through him wen he lost his parents...
n now calling sum1 mumma..was giving dat feeling back to him...
he was very immotional...
rano - tumhe darne ke..luchh sochne ki...ya kuchh bhi kehne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...
maan was litle confused...
rano smiled - mujhe yakin hai..ki meri geet ke liye tum duniya me sabse perfect ladke ho...
maan was amused how rano believes her daughter...
rano - yahi soch rahe ho na ke mene tumhe dekha tak nahi..fir kaise...
maan - nahi woh me..
rano - tumhari awaz me jo sachhayi hai na..hi sabse bada sabut hai..ab aur jaachne ki kya jarurat hai...
maan smiled n mesmerised to hav a mumma like rano...
rano - meri geet thodisi pagal hai...
geet twisted her lips...
while maan smiled to himself nodding his head in yess...
rano - par bahot masoom hai beta...
geet smiled at her mother's corncern...
maan smiled loving d way rano was talking about his geet...
maan - mummaa...
rano - me babaji se yahi maungungi ke mere dono bachhe humesha khush rahe...sukhi rahe..kisi bi prob se door rahe hai...
maan - aap bahot achhee hai maa...
rano smiled - mujhe mumma se jyada maa hi pasand hai..mpar ye 3 shaitan mujhe mumma h kehte hai...
maan smiled - me hu na...maa kehne ke liye...
geet was geeting impatient now...
she wanted to talk to man...
n here mumma talking to him...
not fare...
geet - mumma mujhe baat karni hai...do na...
maan smiled hearing her childish voice...
rano rolled her eyes...
rano - dekha beta..ab is pagal ko tumhe hi thik karana hai...
geet's mouth fell right open..
while maan nodded in yes...
geet - mumma me pagal nahi hu..aur mujhe phone do..
saying so she snatched cell from rano's hand n ran towrds her room...
rano shouted - beta dhire...pagal ladki...
saying so she shook her head n continued wid her things...

in geet's room...
geet - mumma bhi na..humesha mujhe pagal bulati hai..
she made baby face...
maan - bilkul sahi bulati hai...
geet - no...say no...
maan - achha baba..no...geet is not mad...
geet smiled - dats better...
maan - par tum ho kahan par..me subah se try kar raha hu..par tumhara cell not reachable aa raha tha...
geet - maan mene bataya tha na...ke hum sab karan aur shweta ke office ja rahe hai...
maan - wo mujhe pata hai..par tumhara cell...
geet - range nahi hogi...
maan - hmm..khana kha liya...
geet - nahi abhi tak...
maan - jaan..u r being too careless now-a-days..no way im gonna tolerate dat...
he was angry..
geet rolled her eyes...
geet - mr-i-m-so-angry..meri baat suniye pehle..hum sab dinner pe ja rahe hai...abhi treat hai...cool na...
she said childishly..
while maan smiled...
maan - jaan...
he was too romantic n emotional now...
geet sweetly - hmm...
maan - tumhari bahot yaad aa rahi hai...
geet smiled - mujhe bhi..
maan - jhooti...
geet made face - sachhi baba...
maan - jhooti...
geet - sachhi...
maan - to fir etni door kyu ho...kitne din ho gaye tumhe ekhe huye...
geet - kitne din..maan aap bhi na...
maan - tumhe majak lag raha hai...yahan me mar raha hu...
geet angrily - maan...
maan - kya huva..
geet - agar dobara aisi stupid baat ki na..to mujhse bura koi na hoga...
maan smiled - sorry baba..
geet - hmm...aap ne khana khaya..
maan - nahi..bahot ajeeb lag raha hai..mujhe tumhe dekhna hai..tumse milna hai..jaan..i need u now...
geet - maan..aap etne pareshan kyu lag rahe hai..
maan - i need u now...
geet - pareshan hai aap kisi baat ko lekar..boliyena...
maan - i want u jaan..now..
she could feel d possessiveness n passion in his voice...
geet - umm..me XYZ hotel ja rahi hu...aap wahan pe aa jana..
maan - thik hai..tum kiske sath ja rahi ho...
geet - umm..ranbir aur nisha ke sath..aap jaruru aana ok..
maan - thik se jana...
geet - hmm...

saying so both hanged...
geet was left thinking wid maan's different behaviour...
she understood sumthing is wrong wid him..
he is tensed about sumthing..worried about sumthing...
he needs her n she vil b dere for him being his soul...
wish she could just fly n reach to him in a sec...
take him into her arms..vanishing all his probs..n keep him secured into her arms..hiding from world...

just den she heard d sound of horn..
she rolled her eyes n immediately left for changing...

...

DINNER...

shweta - waise maan na padega...aaj hum logo ne kafi kaam khatam kar diya...
nupur - nupur bhushan ek baar kuchh than leti hai..to fir pura karke hi dum leti hai...
mayank - bas nupur..dum lag jayega...
every1 laughed...
nupur twisted her lips...
nisha - seriously..ek saans me etna bada dialog kaise bol leti hai...
nupur - made in morella...
mayank rolled his eyes...
geet - btw..shopping ke liye meri bhabhi ki chhoti behen aur meri frnd uttara bhi aa rahi hai...
annie - uttara..nice name...
geet - yaah..she is psychitrist
ranbir - really...mera chance banega kya...
nisha waked him...
nisha - ladki dekhi nahi ke eske muh me pani aa jata hai...
mayank - actually nisha ko chhodke kisi aur ko koi kaise dekh sakta hai...
nisha made funny blushy face while nupur made angry face...
ranbir - r u serious..is bandriya ka me kya karu...
karan waked him - not fair...every beautifull girl loves complement..right annie...
annie rolled her eyes...

kara immediately stood up from chair...
bowing towrds annie...
singing dramatically..total filmy style...

"...dreamgril..dreamgirl..kissi shayar ki gajal..dreamgirl...kissi zil ka kamal..dreamgirl..kabhi to milegi..kahin to milegi...aaj nahi to kal..."

annie blushed a bit...
while every1 clapped for karan..
karan made totally filmy face n took his chair back...

nupur - kya tum free time me mayank ko classes de sakte ho...
mayank - classes for me...?
karan - par kaunse topic par..
nupur - gf ko happy rakhne ki...
every1 started to laugh...
while mayank banged his head on table...
ranbir - owo..kya baat...ab mayank sir ji ke bhi guru aa gaye hai..karan sirji...
karan - nupur..tum hamesha aisi bate karti ho...
mayank - dnt take her seriously...
nupur - ye achha hai..ek to me tumhari bhalai ki baat kar rahi hu..aur...hatto..mujhe kya karna hai...hoyyyeee...

geet was looking here n dere...searching for maan...
n was checking her mob in between..as she hav kept it on silent mode...
just den..

her eyes fell on maan...
who was standing at one corner..staring at her from dnt know how long...

her heart skipped a beat...
her lips cripped into a shily smile...
her eyes twinkled in happiness watching him aftr long...
he was staring at her without blinking...

she immediately excused herself n went to him...
as she reached him...
unaware to her..
he pulled her in a jerk..towrds him...
hiding her also from every...
n both moves away into a lonesum area...

...
...

geet was wearing a blue dress...
while he was in white shirt n geans...
...
geet slowly took him 1 hand n snaked it over her waist...
maan let her do watever she want...
he was just staring at her beautifull n innocent face endlessly...

she took his other hand n too snaked it over her waist from other side...
now she was completely locked into him embrace...
she snaked her 1 hand over his neck..
n carrased his cheek gently wid d fingers of free hand...
he smiled loving watever she doing...
she lovingly smiled n kissed his forehead gently...
he closed his eyes loving d feeling of her warm lips over his forehead...
loving her care for him...

geet gently - aap pareshan kyu hote hai..me hu na...
maan smiled...
without saying a word..she understood dat y he needed her so urgently..
how easily she understood dat sumthing is bothering him...

he tighetened his snaked over her waist..pulling her tightly towrds him..
deir faces were mere inches away from each other...

both were into each other's embrace...
maan walked forwrds while she walked back...
both stopped as d wall hit geet's back slowly...
maan still walked a bit..putting his weight on her body..resting on her...
she stared at him wid love n care...

she knew..how much he needs her at dis moment
she still carrased her finegrs gently on his cheek...
n slowly slowly moved her fingers towrds his lips...
his looked at her eyes as her fingers touched his lips...
he kissed her fingers gently..she blushed a bit..
she kept carrasing his lips for a min or so...

geet - jaan...aap mere sath apni koi bhi mushkil baat sakte hai...
maan - tum meri ho...

she smiled...
she hav understood few things about him...
like expressing himself..his probs..is nt dat easy for him..
opening up to any1 is quite difficult for him...
she accpted dat too...
she dnt need words to understand him..
his rapid heartbeats tells her everything...

geet smiled - me sirf aapki hu maan..sirf aap ki..

listening dose words...
maan heart pounded in happiness...

n wid dat he slammed his lips on her neck...
his sudden act made her close her eyes in acceptance...
his face got hidden completely inside d hollow of his neck...
his heart was beating faster n faster...
while her heart beat started to match up wid his...

as his lips touched d wrm n white milky skin of her neck...
a shiver ran through deir spines...
he hugged her more tightly...
while she pulled his head more into her neck giving in to his needs...
she felt his lips making patterns on her skin...
he rubbed his lips on each n every inch of her skin...1st getnly n deeply...forcefully..making her insane...
...
his passion was not easy to handle for her...
but she loved it completely...

his lips reached from her neck to her scalp..rubbing sensuously..n den beack to neck...
his fingers were dugged inside her skin of waist..
while she was tightly holding his head in anticipation...
...
dey didn't know anything...
all dey knew is nothing vil go wrong wen it cums to deir love..deir bond...deir emotions for each other...

he hispered in her hollow..."..tum sirf meri ho..."
n his words carrased her skin making her moan his name..."...maan.."

...

SPOILERS : hameer - MAAN...amana...samana...😲😲

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved da update
i want maan to beat up hameer
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good
waiting for aamna samna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesomee
waiting for d amna samna
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part 66
nice part...
Rano has accepted Maan...
cont soon...
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superb one mishty continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Today Geet was different, I could see a matured understanding girl in her. Love the way she stayed with Maan

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