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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

WOW Nazzz..ur ff...n fiza's...m so excited to read this...sorry for late comment...

thanks fr the pm...🤗,,the concept is very catchy!!!😃 do start off soon..:D

thnks aloot dear
sure will cont very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: 18anila1

🥳Congratulations APIs...🥳

as 2 API hain...😆😆
wah wah iss ff i hope ff hi hoon...inshALLAH...😉
i mean isse parhke toh mujhe whts ur rashi ki yaad a gayi...😆🤣😉
bt thank god yeha sirf ek hi Nupur hain...🤣🤣🤣
ohh btw AWESOME CONCEPT...👏😳👏
i loved it lodsss😊😃😊
waise mere khayal se kahin Nupur hi toh Mayank ke liye Dulhan nhi dhundne wali na!!!!!!😉
ofcourse wahi toh hogi woh...😆😆
okkk plzzz plzzz i want an update now woh bhi asap...😊
ALL D BEST VALLIYAH ji👍🏼...as its ur 1st time ok...
love u 2 lodsss🤗🤗



ps: Valliyah api plzzz excuse han!!!😉
FIZA Api ap meri ""WWU"" kab update karogi!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡
areyy tension n wait kar kar ke mere muh mein agar pimples ho gaye toh????????? nehiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲😒😲
BY GOD... so piiillliiizzz i want an update asap...😉😆😉
waise ap chaho to ap woh nw wali ff bhi update kar sakti hoon ok!!!!!!!!! i wont mind...😛😍
love u API...🤗🤗🤗

thnks dear.
im nt sure yeah ff hai k nhi wasy lag tu raha hai
lol...ohh i havent watch tht film
lets see kiya pata ridi ho woh bhi line mein hai
thnsk from valiyah too
sabra keroo..will update bth of them soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

THANKU ALL

For ur lovly comments, and appreciation, glad u welcomed valiyah with same warmth, she is too very much thankful to u.

Rplyd to u all

This chapter by me

Lov ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

I KNOW ITS SHORT, BUT AJ KAM CHALA LO PLISH 😳

Chapter : 1

Leaning back to the seat, he gave his fingers a bit rest from working on laptop, looking outside from planes window, he was enjoying beautiful clouds, clam n gorgeous, white n pure. Taking a deep breath he moved back to his work.

Sir we are about to land , pls close ur laptop

Ok..

As he check out from the airport, moving out standing on the road side , he stretch his arms..

Home sweet home'..

'.

Rashing from the stairs a girl stop in her track near kitchen

Nupur: God morning maaa'..

Dress in fromals, hair tied in a high pony, with classy glases protecting her eyes, she sat on the dining table, to have her breakfast with her mom..

NM: uth gain ap' tu lunch kero gi ya breakfast

Nupur: kiya yaar mom, apko pata hai kal shadi thi, ek tu loog pata nhi mjhy kyun boltay hain, I mean khud shadi kertay hain tu kero na, dosro ko kyun tang kertay ho, woh tu clients kafi mil jatay hain, aur mufat ki publicity tu mein cahli jati hoon warna nevr'.

NM: kal raat shilpa k phne aya tha'

Nupur: hmm..kasi hain anty, kafi dino se aai nhi'..

NM: han mein ny bhi yahi kaha tha usko, phir us ny batay k Mayank waps arah hai aj'..

Nupur: woh langur wapas kyun araha hai, kiya keray gay yaha hum insanoo k beech..

NM: nupur'.batmezi mat kero acha..

Nupur: batmezzi kya mom ap ko yaad nhi hai woh kasa dekhta hai, poll ki tarha lamba, teeli ki tarha skiny, aur bahloo jasay bhalo'.she laughed n her mom to giggle, aur kiya thaw oh us k favorite jumla'

' oh mine ths so tacky"

They both laughed..

Wapas kyun araha hai, angrazony bhar nikal diya kiya'.

NM: nupur ab woh asa nhi hai'..aur wasy bhi tumahry liyan good news hai

Looking at her mothers expression she knitted her eyebrows..

Nupur: kiya mtlab

NM: aray bhi shilpa kah rahi thi k usko shadi kerni hai

Nupur: tu mien kiya kero'

NM: tu tum kerao na'..us ki help kero

Nupur: mom mein mufaat mein tu tmahri shadi n kero us se kaho fees lagy gi samjhy

NM: nupurrr'.tu bhi na

Nupur: aur wasy bhi us per extra lagy gi, asay larkay ko larki hi mil jay buhat bari baat hai'shakl asi , akal tu jab khuda baat raha that u woh chahana( sieve) liya khara tha.

NM: nupurrr'.buhat hogaya'.shilpa ka rahi thi us k tum us se baat krlo , woh aay ga tu us ko tumhary pass bhaj day gi'

Nupur: thik per office aaay woh meray'..no discount'

NM: ya khuda larki , tum tu na'..

'

SA: hello mera beta'..

Mayank: hello mama'

SA: kya baat hai 'tum tu acha khasa gabaro jawan hogay hai

Mayank: matlab ab bhi han

SA: dekh baat tu sahi thi'that u tu teeeli hi

Mayank: maaa'.pls ab us nupur k jasay baat maat kero'.

Aur yeah bato khany mein kiya banaya hai'.buhat bhoog lagi hai

SA: acha sun , tu rest kerlay us k bad sham mein nupur se mil layna

Mayank: mera deemgh karab nhi hai jo us se milny jao ga, anty se milna hai woh mein chala jao ga, jab woh ghar per na hoon

SA: mayankkk'.milna tu bacho parhy ga us se

Mayank: kyun 'mera naseeb kyun phota

SA: mayank 'beta ji nupur soul mate ki owner hai, city ki sab se well non match maker

Mayank: kiyaa..no way nupur aur match maker'.bechary woh log jin ki woh sahdi kerati ho gi

SA: mayank'.ab teri shadi bhi wohi keray gi samhjy

Mayank: mein us ki pasand ki larki se shadi kero ga, no way, nevr, not at all, ek nagcuri, batmeez, aur bekar se larki pasand keray gi

SA: mayank pagal maat ban'us k pass buhat achi achi larkiyoon k rishtay hai, tum kal ja ker us k office us se mil lo, akelay islyan k tum us se ashani se baat ker k apni pasand bata sako samjhy'aur koi batmeezi nhi

Mayank: mein koi batmeezi nhi kerta'.woh shooro kerti hai'

'''.

Standing outside a posh bulding he was thinking she has grown really big in 5 years, yes it has been five years mayank has went abroad for his studies, n found a well establish job so stayed there for sumtime, finding a transfer here he came back, to live his life with his mother, and his perfect soul mate'

Girl : yes sir can I help u

Mayank: I have an appointment with nupur bhushan

Girl: ur good name pls'

Mayank

Sir pls tht way

Mayank: thnk'.kiya baat hai, yeah matrimony office hai ya koi business holder, watt tu dekho zara'.

Knocking on door he heard a familiar voice , sweet n smiple

Come in

He went inside and found her engrossed in her screen, a frown appears on his face

Mayank: tu akhir chasmah lag hi gaya tum ko

Nupur: she looked up n checked him from down to top

Mayank: aha Ms nupur Bhushan checking out me

Nupur: mr mayank Sharma ur my client haina, tu check out tu kerna paray ga'.

Mayank: yaar tumhary yaha clients ko bhaitny ko bhi nhi kahtay'he took a seat himself

Nupur: kyun mjhy pata hai kay tum itna tameezdar nhi hoo'khir come to point..samny form rekha hai fill kerooo

Mayank: kiya'.yaar tum dhari rishta kerny wali anty, itny style kyun dekha rahi hoo,

Nupur: kiya kaha tum ny, yeah matrimony office hai , koi rishta kerny wali anty(imphesning on it) nhi hoon smjhy tum ..teeli

Mayank: dekho yeah teeli maat bolo mjhy samhji tum

Nupur: kyun kiya kerlo gay tum, jo ho wohi kaho gi na

Mayank: kis angle se mein tumhain teeli lagta han

Nupur: agar 4 -5 shirts pehan ker agay hoo tu teeli se salman khan nhi ban jata

Mayank: nupur 'mjhy tu tum se milna hi nhi tha , kaha tha mein ny maa se per nhi un ko tum per buhat bahroosa hai na'..apna kam kero..samjhi'im paying for this

Nupur: oh hello'koi ehassan nhi ker rahy hoo samjhy'..mjhy bhi koi shok nhi hai..agar anty ny itni request ki thi warna'.

Mayank: warna '..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
I wanna Thanks ALL of u guys for showering me with ur love...thanks for being soo encouraging...your comments means alot to me...thanks for ur trust guys hope i can live upto ur expectations...Thanks soo much...!

Thankyou Fizu for replying on behalf of me too...love u 😳...!

Edited by valliyah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
hehehehehehehehehe...🤣🤣🤣
gosh m loving dis ff...😆🤣😆
its d most Hillarious ff...By God😆😆😆
i loved it..😳
i loved it lodsss...😳😃😳
u know API...i was lil disturbed bt ur ff make me laugh like anything...🤣
thank U 2 sooo veryyy much for writing dis ff...🤗
goddd...😆
so dey know each other han...😳😉😳
der thinking abt each other n talking to each other was mind blowingly hillarious...🤣🤣🤣
i jst love it to d core...👏👏👏
thank u sooo much for making me laugh like dis...⭐️😳⭐️
Teeli...🤣
n den Rishta karne wali aunty...🤣
By God...
m gonna wait for d next update like hell...🤣😉🤣
plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon APIs...
piiillliiissshhh😒
love u BOTH lodsss...🤗🤗🤗
will b waiting for d update...😉
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
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first of all congrats Valliyah ...congrats Fiza for such a beautiful and funny FF.👏
love u guys🤗

now come to this update.
wow wow wow
it was just beautiful ...n very very funny
i cant stop laughing🤣
this is the most hilarious start i ever read ...tumlogo ne to Maha ki Promise yaad dila dia.
loved it
i was laughing so hard ... by God ...🤣
so they knew each other form long time.
good ...but their thinking about each other was just hilarious.🤣
loved it.
d way nupur described mayank's appreance ...just just mindblowing...i couldnt stop laughing🤣

poll ki tarha lamba, teeli ki tarha skiny, aur bahloo jasay bhalo'.she laughed n her mom to giggle, aur kiya thaw oh us k favorite jumla'

' oh mine ths so tacky"


i was laughing like maniac🤣
n i love his jumla too😛
it was hilarious🤣
loved their first meeting.😃
it was too much profession...but their convo was too much unprofessional.🤣
nupur ne mayank se bhi fees lia hai...by god🤣
waise shadi k baad wo fees wapas to karegi na😉

waiting for next update.
continue soon

love u🤗


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

It was absuletly Amazing updte

loved how nups described mayu

Nupur: batmezzi kya mom ap ko yaad nhi hai woh kasa dekhta hai, poll ki tarha lamba, teeli ki tarha skiny, aur bahloo jasay bhalo'.she laughed n her mom to giggle, aur kiya thaw oh us k favorite jumla'

i wish u didn't stoped there thanks hun 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
so cute. mayur fight adorable
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Superb update
Loved nupur n her mother convo.
MayUr part was sooo sweet and nupur called mayank ""teeli was sooo funny.Loving it
Cont soon n tnx fr pm

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