SS Spirits of the nights(arni IPKKND last pg 34

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: FLORAGRACE
I loved your ff .
I am sorry if you felt bad seeing my comment.
You are a awesome writer dear

dear i didnot felt bad at all trust me . i wanted to say next time someone not say you are using movie story as it was totally my imagination it some how already written . my friend challenge me you can't right on my music and i come up with this story

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Mmm I read this for the 1st time

pretty spooky isn't it?

but liked it as ever

waiting for the mystery to reveal

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628497

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

thankx a lot for updating dis ff

spirits of the nights

i love ur story

d way khushi falls for arnie baby,,,,,,i no any1 would

bt still

hehhehe

pl do continue soon

i will be waiing next week

n do extent it n dont end it too soon

i have been waiting for its continuation for long bt wen u didnt i was planning for msg to u for updating.

thankx again

bye

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

superb update luvd it

plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

hey really interesting yaar...
i loved it...looking fwd...

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Nice one Naddiya!

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Prologue is interesting.Curious 2 read more

Part 1

Khushi finds Arnav handsome.Wow!Very interesting start

Part 2
I feel Khushi is attracted towards Arnav.Cool

Part 3

Now Arnav can see & hear khushi.So nice.Shyam only tried 2 kill her.Shocking.But she is only in coma.Right?I'm happy that even tho Khushi is a spirit Arnav cares 4 her.
Khushi: just hear this heart beat as the most melodious music she ever heard in her life...
Beautiful sentence.

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Part 4

Khushi kissed Arnav.he cud feel it.Loved d hug scene also.Khushi took him 2 a place which s green even during autumn.Feel like going there.Shyam...he needs 2 b punished.Arnav says that he wud've married her if she was a human being.In d beginning it was written that she is in coma.So hopefullyher spirit wil go back 2 her body and she comes out of coma & they'll unite.

It is such a nice story.Its ur best ff.Still u wil update it only once a week?That's really disappointing

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Meera

@lostlove

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

finally you update naddyia

i thought you you forgot it

thanks so so so so much for the update really is superb

please never mind what other said this just envy because you are a great writer ... your imagination is so creative to make fabulous stories even if it seems like others movies or novel ... those thing are never be awesome such your ss

please keep on don't be late because the story goes nicer and nicer

waiting eagerly