WAR & PYAR..........SK STORY BY COOL_SK - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
saara dear
this story have to end.........what can i doo
don't be disappiont
may be i will start another
but right now it is............may be
i hope if i will write another, u will encourge me in the same way
lots of love
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42
guys
here is a link where there is a contest of valentines day
plz give ur vote to whom which u think is the most deserving of that vote
ur one vote will encourge that writter

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/210967/valentines-day-contest-voting

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
ana tum bohat achcha likhthi ho......
plz jaldi se continue karo.................... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
part 10
AN OMAM FAS PRODUCTION
WAR AND PYAR

shija nay apnay papers main apni sari tawaja papers ki taraf rakhni chahi.......likin bar bar shahzeb ka khayal usay atta........woh shahzeb ko bhula nahin pa rahi thi..............likin phir bhi us nay poori koshish ki k apnay papers per concentrate karay........jiss ka nateeja yeh nikla k us kay paprs acchay tau ho gaye likin itnay bhi acchay na thay jiss tarhan k woh pehlay deti thi
din raat jagnay kar us nay parhai ki...........or apni sehat ka bhi khayal na kia.....................2nd last paper main us ki tabiyat theek na thi...........or last paper day kar jo ghar aye tau chehra surkh ho gaya..............haath paoon uskay itnay garam thay kay dhoowain choot rahay thay..................jaisay hi woh ghar main dakhil howi ........darwazay per hi behoosh ho gaye..........
thori deer bad jab ankh khuli tau khud ko bistar main leta paya or pooray ghar walay idher udher kharay thay...............sab kay chehroon pay dar sawar tha.........visaal or sharim bhi apni poopho ko aisay dekh kar roo rahay thay.........sab ki jaan nikli howi thi.............likin shija kay ankh khooltay hi sab ki jaan main jaan aye..............shija kay pass doctor bethay thay jo us ka acchay say check-up kar rahay thay
shija jab hoosh main aye tau thori deer bad phir soo gaye
doctor:abh ghabranay wali koi baat nahin hai.....................likin yeh kafi weak ho gaye hain or inh ka fever kafi haigh hai..............yeh apnay khanay peenay ka dehan nahin rakh rahin..................agay say in kay khanay peenay par tawaja dein...............inh ki neend bhi poori nahin hoo rahi.................abhi filhaal main nay neend ka injection day diya hai.....................4-5 ghantoon bad hosh aa jaye ga...........yeh main nay kuch dawain likh din hain.........mungwa lain.......or khayal rakhain kay yeh doze time per lain................abh main calta hoon
shams leave the doctor to the door or wapis shija kay pass aa kar beth jata hai
sharim:to nazish........still crying......................dadi maa............poopho ko kia howa hai
nazish:us ko godh main letay howay..............kuch nahin beta...............poopho ko halka sa bukhar hai
sharim:phir poopho ankhain kyoun nahin khol rahain
nazish:poopho so rahi hain na.......................doctor nay kaha hai kay poopho ko aram karnay do...........shoor na ho..............app chahtay hoo na poopho theek ho jain
visal jo kay pass khari batain sun rahi thi...........us nay or sharim dono nay haan main sar hilaya
nazish:tau phir abh zaida shoor na machana.....................warna poopho ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.............theek hai meray bachoo
visal or sharim:jee dadi maa
nazish:chaloo abh app bhi ja kar thora khel lo.
sharim:hum khelin gai tau shoor ho ga................or phir poopho ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye gi.................iss liye jab tak poopho theek nahin ho jati hum dono nahin khelain gain..................hai na visal
visal:haan
woh dono bed par chahtay hain or shija ko us kay dono cheeks per kiss kartay hain aur chalay jatay hain
shams or nazish yeh dekh kar khush hotay hain
shams:itna parhnay ka kia faida kay banda apnay app ko hi bhool jaye
nazish:tab tau bari himayat kar rahay thay k agay parho...............meray par gaye hai..............abh kia howa
shams:tum bhi na har chooti chooti bataoon par jhagarti hoo
visal jo kamray kay bahir say guzar rahi thi............andar aye .......or kaha:app shoor macha rahay ho.........poopho uth jain gi
shams or nazish zara sa hansay or shija ko mathay(fore-head) per aik kiss kar kay chalay gaye
nazish any phone kar kay eman ko bata diya tha kay shija kuch dinoon kay liye esha ko parhanay nahin aa sakti............eman nay shahzeb say kehna chaha kay woh esha ko parha diya karay
shahzeb:woh kyoun bhabhi
eman:woh shija ki tabiyat kharab hai .............iss liye woh nahin aa sakti...............or waisay bhi kal esha ka last test hai.....plz usay karwa doo
shahzeb:bhabhi.............main karwa doon ga............iss main plz kehnay wali kia baat hai.................main nay kabhi na kahi hai
eman:mischeively...............tau uss nay kia kaha
shahzeb:woh samjh gaya tha likin anjan bana raha...................kaun bhabhi?...............kiss nay
eman:hit him lightly on his head.....................abh kaun bhabhi kiss nay na kar.............patah hai tujhay sab..........main kiss ki baat kar rahi hoon................chal bata us nay haan kaha yaan na
shahzeb:bhabhi.............uss nay koi jawab nahin diya..............main nay usay sochnay ka time diya hai............actually us k papers ho rahay thay.............main nay bhi saaf saaf keh diya kay papers khatam honay kay aglay haftay tak agar jawab na milla tau main app ko bhej doon ga rishta lay kar
eman:aur kab aye ga woh hafta
shahzeb:aa gaya bhabhi.........................kal us ka last paper tha..........................app tayar rahiye ga rishta lay kar janay k liye
eman:bhai main tau tayar hoon..........................apni devarani lanay k liye...................waisay bhi ghar main bohut bore hoti hoon..............abh woh aye gi tau thora dil laga rahay ga
shahzeb:tau app usay apna dil laganay kay liye lana chahti hain............hmmmmmmmmmmm
eman:pagal.............mujh say ziada dil tau tera lagay ga...................phir shayad hi tu hamain yad karay
zeb:aye bhabhi................aisa kabhi nahin ho sakta.....................main app ko kabhi nahin bhool sakta..................app hi nay tau mujhay zindagi di hai....................abh itnay acchay mahool ko sanjida na karain ok
eman:arey........main tau waisay hi keh rahi thi........................main janti hoon kay teri pasand kabhi galat nahin ho gi........or woh hamaray ghar ko toornay ki bajye hamaray rishtoon ko or mazboot karay gi
shahzeb:very quickly...............insha-allah
eman:hanstay howay...................insha-allah

next day
shija ko kahin subah ja kar hoosh aya...............uthi tau jism main bohut thakan mehsoos ki...............side table say pani ka glass pakarnay lagi likin kamzoori ki wajha say na pakar paye or glass nechay gir gaya.........................awaz sun kar nazish jaldi say kamray main aye or shija ko dobara leta diya
nazish:kuch chaye tha tau mujhay bata deti.....................tumhain uthnay ki kia zaroorat thi haan......................nazish jaldi say doosra glass laye or shija ko pani pilaya.
shija:mama..............mujhay kia howa tha
nazish:khud ka khayal rakhti nahin or mujh say pooch rahi ho kia howa..................behoosh ho gaye thi tum.............itna teez bukar tha.................beecharay visal or sharim ki tau roo roo k buri khalat thi..................do do min baad tumhain dekhnay attay thay............or seema or shuja.................itnay pareshan thay k woh aj kahain nahin gaye..............office say chuti lay li...........................or tumharay papa nay bhi
shija:mama.........
nazish:hug her.......having tears in her eyes..........janti ho hamari tau jaan hi nikal gaye thi tumhari khalat dekh kar...................kal say kissi nay kuch nahin khaya.............yahan tak kay sharim nay bhi..............seema nay itna kaha kay kha loo likin nahin poopho kay saath khaoon ga poopho kay saath khaoon ga ki raat lagaiye howi hai
shija:innocently.................mama...............boohut bhook lag rahi hai
nazish:wipe her tears...............abhi lati hoon
abhi nazish uth kar janay hi lagi thi kay wahan saray aa gaye...............shams....shuja..........seema...........s harim or visal bhi jo k seema or shuja kay peechay chup rahay thay
shams:abh kaisii ho
shija:abh theek hoon
shuja:tumhain apna khayal rakhna chaye.........janti ho hum kitna dar gaye thay
shija:hold her ears...........sorry bhai
seema:abh koi bahana nahin haa..................abh parhai khatam..............abh apnay app per concentrate karoo
shija:ok bb
shija:jo kay visal or sharim ko dekh chuki thi................quite sweetly...................yahan aoo
but they were not comming out..........
seema:jao na abh..............kal say poopho poopho ki raat lagi howi thi................abh jaoo na
shija:aoo na..............main kuch nahin kahoon gi
both came out and go to shija...............still scared
shija:dono ko apni baghoon main letay howay........................app nay kal say kyoun kuch nahin khaya
sharim:app nay bhi tau kuch nahin khaya
shija:oye mera sweet baby...........................she kissed both of them on there cheeks and they also kissed her
all were very uch surprised by her attitude
nazish came with the breakfast all all enjoyed the breakfast with small gupshup

lol
ana

this part is dedicated to genious......sara..........sun.....komal..........adi....... ....and last but not the least my sweetest shurti di

love u all
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ANA bahut aachey 👏 bahut aachi story hai and thanx for the deication 😊 😊 😊 so sweet of u
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
ana very nice part 👏 & emotional too.... 😭
vaise really gr8 gng 😛 cont soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
wow thanx
ab jaldi se likho aur age
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi ana

wowwww yaar Its mind blowing marvelous awesome excellent part I m very much excited 4 next part plzzzz plzzzz send as soon as possible all the best for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY ANA WHT HAPPENED WITH THE NEXT PART PLZZZ SEND IT SOON 😊 I M SOOO MUCH EXCITED FOR THE NEXT PART
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
hey saara, shurti di, kulbin and genious
app ka bohut bohut sukariya itnay acchay comments denay ka
main aj tau nahin kal zaroor cont karoon gi
so wait till tommorrow

lots of love
ana

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