how areu
and how are u kids...
omg i never thought that maan the devil can feel so helpless that he cud even beg his ladylove to reciprocate ...
it was heartwrenching..
maan's pain,anguish, fear, insecurities and his irrevocable and unconditional love has been well captured by u sweetie...
i really felt so sorry for him and was pained to see his heartwrenching state...
hope geet gives him a chance to redeem himself and discovers his love for her soon...
i love the way u gradually portrayed maan from arrogant devil to a person who is as human as we are...it was very much authentic and realistic...
hope geet gives a positive reply...waiting for the next update
keep writing
love u and ur ffs
reva
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