D3 FanFiction Drabbles pg 19 1/19/12 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
ok just read the 2nd part :) It wasn't really cheesy..I mean It was kinda unexpected that Sharon 'd agree & even more,Kriya 'd say s'thing like that :P but all good..Really looking forward to the next part.

PS-Loved the scene,SK with goons.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was very...??? unexpected? and quick cuz i no most ffs dont get straight to the story... they give bg info and all... anywaya awesome update and thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
hey its nice liked it do pm next time ok😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Hey Lali first of all sorry for such a late reply to ur earlier drabbles😳😃
ok firstly cuming to Karan Counselor pt2...WOW dat was AWSUM👍🏼...LUVD d Kriyansh scene where Kria copies Rey 😆heheeh dat was shooo cutee😍
nd den d second part where Kria helps Vicky well ofcourse dat is never soo possible in d show😆...but u wrote it AWSUM😃...d Kriyansh scene was awww😳
nd den finally 2 d Sisters part...its AMAZING😃...luvd d pt1 nd luv d sis jodi KriSha(Kria&Sharon)😳
plz update sooon cnt wait to read...nd thnx for d pm😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Niiiceee...!!!! all of ur drabbles r cool...!! gud ideas...!!! especially the sister part one...!!! lets see what's it gonna b next ...!!!
update soon...and please PM me whaen u do...!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Hey everyone! So, this next part is a lot like that one episode where Sharon comes over to Rey's house when Swayam is over and Vicky and Nilesh have to hide Swayam. Hope you enjoy :D

Sisters?! part 2
Sharon was sitting on her couch, in her pajamas, watching TV when her dad came into the living room. "Hey, Papa."

"Hi, beta. You know, i'm really happy you and Kriya fixed things between the two of you. I'm really happy she's coming over for a sleepover."

"Thanks, Papa. But speaking which, where is that girl?" And at that exact moment the bell rang. Sharon ran to the door and opened it. "Hey!"

"Hi!" Kriya gave Sharon a hug and came in, a bag over her shoulder. "Hi, Papa!"

"Hi, Kriya," her father said, also giving her a hug.

"What are you still doing here? I thought you were going to my house to be with Ma," Kriya said.

"Yeah, Pap, hurry up and go," Sharon said, nearly pushing her dad out of the door.

Their dad laughed. "All right, all right, I'm going." And he left.

"Finally, alone!" Sharon sighed, plopping back on the couch.

Kriya sat down next to her. "So what's the plan for tonight?"

"Well, I was thinking about watching some movies. There's this new Shahid Kapoor movie I wanted to watch--" But Sharon was interrupted by the doorbell.

"Who's here at this time?" Kriya asked.

Sharon got up an went to the door. "I don't know." She opened the door to see her best friend, Rey standing outside.

"Hey, Sharon!" he said.

Sharon eyes widened. "Rey? REY!" She yelled louder. Kriya heard and quickly jumped up. "Um, hold on." And sharon closed the door, leaving a very confused looking rey outside.

"What is he doing here??" Kriya asked, freaking out.

"I don't know! But you have to hide!" Sharon said, also freaking out.

The two girls ran around the whole place, not really thinking since they were freaking out. "Sharon, what the heck? You have such a big house but no where to hide!!" Kriya yelled.

"Sharon, I'm coming inside. I look lke an idiot standing out here!" Rey said from outside and before Sharon could respond, the door started to open.

"Oh, crap!" Kriya quickly slid under the table and sharon jumped in front of it, blocking Kriya from view.

"Hi, Rey. So, what do you need?"

"Need? Do I need to "need" something to come to your house? I was bored so I thought the two of us could hang out," Rey said, sitting down on the couch.

Sharon, under her breathe said, "Seriously? Now?"

Kriya, under the table, trying to tell her to get Rey out, whacked Sharon's leg, making her jump and yell, "Ow!"

Rey looked at her. "Are you okay?"

"Um, yeah. Yeah, I'm fine," Sharon said, kicking under the table, hitting Kriya's arm. Kriya silently mouthed "Ow!"

"Well, what are you doing there standing? Come sit down," Rey said, patting the spot next to him.

"Um, you know what, Rey? I'm not feeling so good today, so I just want to be alone tonight. So, go home," Sharon said., still not moving from the table because Rey had the perfect view of it from the couch.

"Oh, okay. That's fine," Rey said, getting up and walking to towards the door. When his back was turned Sharon and Kriya let out a sigh of relief.

Sharon led Rey to the door, making sure he didn't turn around and pushed him out. "Okay, well, bye!" She closed the door quickly and Rey just stared dumbstruck at the door and then left.

Kriya got out from under the table and Sharon said, "That was a close one."

"We can't hang out anywhere without someone coming and ruining it!" Kriya said, shaking her head.

"I know, but we'll make it work. No matter how many times we have to hide and run and freak out," Sharon said with a smile.

Kriya smiled at her sister and hugged her. "You're a really good sister, you know that?"

"You are, too. but you have to admit, that was a little fun, huh? The adrenaline felt good."

The two stared at each other and went into a fit of laughter, enjoying the rest of their sleepover together

Hope you guys enjoyed the part! The next one will be up soon :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
WOW Lali dats an AWSUM part👏...it was very sweet 😳nd luv d KriSha bonding😳...nd hehehe d Rey cum part was nice😳😆...plz update soon d next part😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
awww..it was so so cute..enjoyed reading very much :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
This is what I like about this FF, KriSha Bonding ..Great Work..Please continue..and thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
wow go girl power wonderful
pls update soon

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