maaneet ss:Shringaar - Page 7

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Part 5-

Geet-maa'''''papa vo vo

Rano-beta kuch nahi hoga

Btw. Hiccups

Geet-aap log chale jao yaha se

Papaji-geeettt

Geet-ill be happy with them maa aap log chale jao'''''..yeh log dil ke bure nahi hai

Rano-geet I know he is forcing you but he cant do so''''..we will call the police

Geet-maa please aap samajhne ki koshish karo

Papa-maaannn how can you do this with her I suppose you loved her

Maan-papaji I still love her and will love her all my life and im saying that to you with assurance but calling a police will be a mockery''''''..and then what will you complain about any serious charges

Rano-you kidnapped her and then smeared some red powder on her forehead and made her wear a so called mangalsutra'''''''''.maan isnt that enough

Geet-maan please there is no use

Maan-oh really about the kidnapping charge''''''..i can dodge it in a second

And about marriage though that was forcefull but that was true ''''''..and she is 18 too by her birth certificate,though actually she is seventeen''''''.challenges mummyji'''''.i do everything with a point

Geet wept and everybody remained silent

Papaji-maan what is it you love her or you are doing all these for her physical self''''''playing with a girls life like this tumhe sharam nahi ati

Maan-sharam'.hayan sab kuch mugh me hai magar agar ye sab mughe mere manzil ko pane se rokte hai to'''''.mai yeh sab bhulane ko raazi hoon

Dev-aaj geet mil gayi bro aisa bhi to ho sakta hai na ki kal koi aur par dil aa jaeye aapka'''''yeh kya kar rahe hai aap

Maan-mai sirf geet ka hoon aur agar uska na ho paya to kisika hone layak nahi rahunga

Naintara-veerji yeh koi mazak nahi hai

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that was so amazing
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oh my god so many parts together👏i just love it

Part7-

In the last ten years of her life a lot had changed

She was a free independent women with no bounds but proper values intact

She was brought up well……………good manners were inculcated in her

Her looks were such that fairies would be left behind

Yes she now had a choice to leave all this and find her man……………her life

But she was living a life of blisss

She knew that he loved her

But did she ever understand the depth

Maan-geet shona in todays party I want to give you a gift but what im going to give you has to be taken care of and………I have and will continue to be your support

Unknown to her she had loved him…………adored him……….

He then saw a little boy pulling his pants

Rishikesh-chachu

Maan-yes mera beta

Rishi-im papas beta………………I want to play with you

Maan-chalo ill teach you how to play football then

Naintara-veerji use padhne baithna hai Monday exam hai and he wants to play from morning

Maan-science hai na naintara……………….dont worry ill teach him

Rishi-but rishi wants to play

Maan-baby we will play but lets revise first

Geet giggled and the three of them later played football

As she decended down the stairs in a beautifull seagreen gown he lost his breath

She greeted her bhaiya-bhabhi and rishi(dev-tara)and as soon as she saw her parents entering the venue she jumped on them

Maan had always encouraged her parents to come and stay,meet talk and do anything with her other than taking her away

Geet was a private persona so the party was only for the family members

As soon as mr and mrs handa arrived maan felt deserted as all rushed towards them

Again another year with him wishing mishti the first and being reciprocated the last

Again another year where he wouldn't have the cake from her hand

Again another year where she wouldn't open his gift like others

Years after years the same thing happenned but he was happy that his shona used to talk to him atleast used to hug him when he used to say that he luved her

She had loved him he knew that and waited for the day when she would know that

And finally his prayers were answered but………………..

Part 8-

Rano-arre what did mr.khurana gift you(taunt)

Geet-must be something I don't know ill see later

Rano-are open na lets see what has he ever given you other than sadness

And what can he ever give you he has always taken everything from you

Cheap person……………..woman user…………….he has caged you and simply used you

I know very well he has only physical urges

Geet-maa please

Maan-mummyji………….

Rano-don't…………………don't you call me that

You have played with my daughters life

Spoilt it

Used her……………….your thirsty body

You never loved her only loathed her

Papaji-rano bas

Geet head was bowed down but it suddenly lifted up when she heard dev shout

Dev-brooo

Maan stumbled back and tried to hold the chair for support but failed

Geet went and both dev and geet helped him on his feet

Maan separated himself from her hands

Maan-mummyji………………..i promise you geet ki khushi me hi meri khushi hai aur agar vo kisi aur ko……………mai use nahi rokunga

He took loose steps back

Geet felt a sudden void

Dev-aunty uncle aap log please guest room me aaj rat ke liye ruk jaiye

As every body retired for te bed at night-------------------

Geet went to maans room with food

Geet-maan I noticed you didn't have food

As he looked towards her she looked away

She couldn't bear the sight in front of her

He was weeping badly holding the bed for support

Maan-ggeett iii ……..

She rushed towards him

Geet-maan get up…………….yeh apna kya haal bana ke rakha hai tumne

He hugged him and he cried in her embrace

Maan-geet tum meri jaan ho

Geet-haan

Maan smiled

She saw the angelic smile

After years she had seen him smile

Geet-maa was wron………..

Maan-mummyji can never be wrong ,I am your gunhehaar……………saza do mughe geet magar mughse door mat jao nawear I loved you

I didn't use you

I promise love I will always be with you……….

He was shivering and shaking howling and crying telling his only love the only words he knew

She was feeling helpless for not being able to stop him and she then found the only option

Part 9-

She slowly captured his lips and allowed his sobs to melt in her mouth

She felt him slowly mellowing down and soon it turned passionate

For him his love was answering and for her she was experiencing her love

He carried her to the bed and both were lost in their kiss

He kissed her in each and every part where her skin was visible

She was lost in him and his love

Love whos bond was strong

He knew that he can never find himself again

He knew he was loosing it

He knew that he was taken

His love had won

And he planted his last kiss on her forehead and whispered

Maan-geet zindagi ki is safar me

Maine jab tumhe hai paya

Meri zindagi ko ek naya anjaam mila

Aaj shayad tumne hai mujhe ye jataya

Ki tumhe bhi hai ik kadar mera naam yaad aya

Jaan I don't expect anything else…………………just remmember me

Ek baar bas mera naam kehna

She hugged him and slept the most peacefull sleep but he laid wide awake holding his life in his arms

Dev was worried about maans condition and senced that something was amiss

Dev-Naintara its morning now get up

Naintara-dev whats wrong abhi to …………….its 5 in morning

Dev whats the matter

Dev-maan bro was………………..yesterday……………..i mean a person like him stumbling back like that

Naintara-I think we shoulod go and meet him once……………he is in need of emotional support

Dev-hmmm…….chalo