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Awesome Update

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wah wah... amazing update!

ommggg cant wait until next update

That was a sweet update

here, we go on a long update ending with a cliff as high as Everest🤪 ... what do you expect now ???
rotten eggs or tomatoes or slippers ????😡😆

the update was long & awesome👍🏼
first of all the main thing to mention😛 ... my mind blowing part👏

We spend most of our lives making choices; picking one thing and leaving the other and sometimes regretting the choice we made. Choices can be very intimidating and the pressure to pick one over another quite nerve wrecking so we should always welcome with open arms any opportunity where life decides to make a choice for us; sparing us the hard work. Geet's life had suddenly over the course of the past week or so made a series of choices for her, none of which she was regretting at the moment.

Maan had always prided himself in his stringent control over all aspects of his life. Whether it be personal or professional; everything was done his way. What happened and what didn't happen, who came into his life and who didn't were all decisions which only he had the right to make. It wasn't that he didn't believe in God; he did but he also believed that everything in life could fit into a simple cause and effect table. At the moment though, God seemed to have taken to it to explain to Maan just how wrong he was; Geet was not something he had planned in life. Yet she was here and to his utter disbelief he was glad she was here; for the first time he was glad that life wasn't as planned for him for reasons which he had yet to discover.

why you always left in middle of "lala" land ???🥺 ... they were almost THERE but than😳😕 ... love to see them opening towards each other and trusting each other😃 ... their thoughts about each other is so pure😊 ... the bike ride, her innocence, his self control, her enjoyment to her new freedom, his concern, her childness, his calmness, their drooling over each other, their staring competition, his large world in small space, her fake concern on phone, their protective nature, their comfort to each other, their silly fight for just a piece of sleeping bag, their stupid most fight of excuses so that they can make other sleep in comfort, their closeness, their awkwardness, her final decision to sleep together, his shocking reaction😆😉🥳😍☺️😎🤗 ... everything well written❤️
precap too was awesome😉

do cont soon & do PM me😃

LOVED IT
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thanks for the pm

Loved the update!! Can't wait to read about "Hum Tum ek sleeping bag mein bandh ho..." lol

lovey part

awesome update marvee, i missed this FF. gosh i cant wait for the next update, sleeping together ☺️