MG MY 1st FF(Re-incarnation)(Note on Pg 140) - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!!
Brilliant imagination and properly put in place.
Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


Thanks guys for all your support . I am sorry for updating late .








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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan & Geet were sitting in the Restaurant . Geet thought on Maan's suggestion . Geet was little confused . She was not able to make up her mind . She in the first place was thinking whether she should get engaged to Maan or no .

Geet : Maan mujhe sochana hai koi decision lene ke pehele .

Maan : Geet haan meri taraf se koi problem nahi hai ,

Par tum uncle se kya bologi .

Geet : Haan woh to hai .

Papa toh mujhse poochenge hi ki meine abhi tak decide kyuon nahi kiya .

Maan : Toh phir tum kya bologi uncle se .

Geet : Maan mein sochti hoon iske baare mein .

Maan was little tensed about Geet's decision . He kept on thinking what will she decide .

Geet : Maan ab hum chale mujhe aur kuch nahi khana .

Ab humari baat bhi ho chuki hai . Late bhi hogaya hai ab .

Maan : Ok Geet hum chalte hain .

Both of them sat in the car . In car Maan switched on old indian music . Geet was not liking it .

Geet : Maan aapke paas naye ganne nahi hai .

Maan : Haan Geet hain tum sunogi .

Geet : Haan Maan mujhe naye ganne bohot pasand hai .

English songs bhi bohot pasand hai .

Maan happily played new Hindi songs .

Geet : Haan ab mazza aaraha hai .

Maan : Geet kya hum dost bann sakte hain .

Geet : Hum toh pehele se hi dost hain na .

Maan : Nahi hum toh ek dusere ko jante bhi nahi puri tarah se .

Geet : Ok Maan hum aaj se friends hue pakke wale .

Both of them shake their hands .

Geet : Maan dekho ab toh tumhe mujhse saari baatein share karni padegi .

As friends koi baat nahi chupate .

Maan : Aacha baba . Aaj toh friendship ka pehela din hai .

Age se dhyan rakhoonga mein .

Geet started talking with Maan & went on talking about her friends , her college , her Dreams . Maan was quitely listening to her . He was admiring her talks . He was wondering how this girl can talk non-stop . Finally Maan & Geet reached to Sikand House . Whole family was waiting for them . As soon as door bell rang Priya rushed to open the door . She was very excited to hear their decision .

Priya : Aagyee aap dono . Hum toh aapka hi wait kar rahe the .

Maan smiled

Geet : Kyuon Bhabhi

Maan was about to go but Priya stopped him .

Priya : Maanji aap kahan jaa rahe hain .

Maan : Bhabhiji mein (confused but then went in ) . Haan aata hoon .

Mr Sikand : Aaaooo Maan Yahn baitho .

Pammy : Geet aaj tu yahan par baith .

Mr Sikand : Geet beta aapki date kaisi rahi ?


Geet : (Shocked) Papa yeh aap kya kehe rahe hain .

Mein toh sirf baatein karne gayee thi .

Mr.Sikand : Haan haan Beta mein sirf pooch raha hoon .

Mein mazak kar raha tha .

Geet : Ok .

Mr.Sikand : Maan beta aapki meeting kaisi rahi ?

Maan was in dilemma , As Geet has not yet decided . He glanced towards Geet .

Geet : Papa humne decide kar liya hai .

But there is something i want to tell you all .

Next : Part - 15

Precap : Geet's Decision & everyone's reaction .

Edited by manesha76 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
waiting to see geet's decision
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
waiting for geet decision

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome... now waiting for geet's decision and everyone's reaction... looks like maan is falling badly for geet and in one yr of being her frnd and her fiance he will make sure she falls for him... lolz

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