FF: New York times Thread 5 Completed 10/03 - Page 28

Originally posted by: crazydream

awesome... Fabulous...

luved it

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

awesome..wonderful update..loved it to the core...just mind blowing..👏

Thank you for liking it...

All those smilies side by side, for a minute looks like birds flapping their wings. Seriously stare at it...

Originally posted by: only4mails

What a beautifulll update...and What a piece of writing!!!!!

I know mere words can never do justice what I felt after reading this update...so i will say it in ur owns words-

"Hot Chocolate Hansini...Just that and nothing else"...

Hats off to you dear...Hats off to your writing!!!!

I feel sad that NYT is coming to an end :(

Anyways, keep up the good work...God BlessU

Love

Meenu

Aw! Meenu...Thanks so much and we will meet in the next thread once this is done.

PS I still can't believe Hot Chocolate is such a hit.

Originally posted by: Escapist

That was an amazing piece of writing...the words and gestures said it all!

I know I've not been commenting since a long time..but then what could I do..you said so much that I fumbled with my words..but today I somehow found it all coming rushing back to me!
Loved the way the truly accepted each other...when you wrote about the attacks my heart sank and I've known how much it worries...and aches!

And after reading this last update...I've a smile on my face..its all Hot Choco...I've always loved it and somehow I do know those 3 words are magical but they need not always be spoken yet I choose to speak them... :)

It was wonderful all in all...and btw you gave the perfect closer to Abhi and Naini !!

Take Care,
Fatima

Glad you are back. Yes the muse is a terrifying whirl wind. You don't know when its passing you and have to whisk it by the tail and drag it back to paper.

Hot Chocolate again...I guess it was only expected that everyone will mention it.
Oh! Thanks you like what I wrote for R&N.

Hasini

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

finally he expressed himself thro words...well not much but the msg reached geet...

Yes...and he accepts that he is not good at it, in his own words. Well the update was about acceptance.
Thanks for reading it.

Originally posted by: night13

It is said that a complete man has two sides, one internal and other external and both need to be set free... Maan, is a complete man today! He explored his inner self, and give way for emotions, knowing that he will still make mistakes; but isn't that what life is all about! To me they both complete each other. A perfect couple in a perfect world with a perfect closure H; to the Eternal and Unchanging Love of Maan and Geet! :)

~Sonnet 116 by Shakespeare

Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove:
O no! it is an ever-fixed mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come:
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

Aarya,
Can I take it that you are finally taking to NY times Maan?

You know I remember our discourses about 'perfect' and now you have lined up perfect in the same line for three times. So coming from you it really does mean a lot.

And then we also talked about eternity...Lord! I'm feeling all nostalgic now.
Love the sonnet.

The foundation of my next OS comes from this quote and I think it very much applies to our M&G as well. What do you say to that?

"Anyone can be passionate, but it takes real lovers to be silly." ' Rose Franken

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Maan's confession was the best... brilliant. Sach mein, they are both complex people, but they also complete each other. And they have known it all along too...The acknowledgement was wonderful. loved it.

Yay! Preeti...You are so unfair...You always like Maan better than Geet. 😆

Finally I think I wrote something to your liking. Keep reading.

Hasini

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

Superb update. This is where frustration sets in as a reader and someone who fumbles so much in expressing themselves. After reading and re-reading and re-reading, I am still not sure how to tell you, no I am not able to express how this story and this characters have melted within me. I absolutely love this story and each update adds a new layer of completeness to these characters. I am drawn to them more and more. You have a great talent of observation of true human emotions and a gift when it comes to making others feel it also. I loved the first line a lot, that sort of is your Maan, in the middle of a terror attack, badly hurt and bruised with destruction raining all around him, the thought is of when he will meet her again. The hospital scene when he sees her, I felt a shiver run with the description. I could go on and on about the whole update but suffice to say I loved it.

Thanks Hasini for the update.

We talked about this too and I'm touched by your words. I understand how involved you are with the story and I really hope you are ready to part with it.

Keep it coming and would love to hear more of your analysis.

Hasini

PS...you brought the song back to my memory in the PM...So here it is.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5awZ9sOTA54&feature=related=player_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: pushpi

Woah baby that was a long update

Thank you! :-)

That's it? 😲

(As you sow so shall you reap! Ever heard of it ? 😆)

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Not sure how to explain what I felt while reading the last update.. Too emotional.. Tears came out by the end of it.. I loved how you penned down their lines exactly the way it was needed..

Loved it and will miss this FF..

Aw! Bharti...Thank you so much. So you think it was a perfect fit for Maan? It means a lot to me as its difficult to write for him. And hence the unsureness as I mentioned in note.

Thanks for reading.