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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#951

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

superb update...👏

SR to nahin hui but u gave us goosebumps without SR...

until I read he was dreaming about Cheri...

then thud...aasmaan se jameen par patak diya...

abhi aur kitna thadapna baaki hai...kab tak saare raaz khologi...

Cheri kaun hai and Geet ke bagal mein lete hue he is dreaming about her...yeh to bahut naainsaafi hai mere dost...

precap...whose bags are packed...Daadi is throwing them out of the house...

thanx for pm

superb update...👏
Thanks dear
SR to nahin hui but u gave us goosebumps without SR...
😊
well it was difficult for me to write this part as i didnot want to make is sexual but sensual...which is a bit difficult to put down in words for me😆

until I read he was dreaming about Cheri...
then thud...aasmaan se jameen par patak diya...
😆this comment of urs was so hilarious...had fun reading it

abhi aur kitna thadapna baaki hai...kab tak saare raaz khologi...
raaz ko raaz hi rahene do aur kuch samay.😉

Cheri kaun hai and Geet ke bagal mein lete hue he is dreaming about her...yeh to bahut naainsaafi hai mere dost...
Cheri ka raaz khulne me abhi samay hai...

precap...whose bags are packed...Daadi is throwing them out of the house...
no dear...but read on u will come to know

thanx for pm

u r most welcome

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Posted: 13 years ago

#952

i guess maan's cheri loved or querida is geet only..he's just dreaming about her and wished that it would be true

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alfiya7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#953

Originally posted by: crystal-rose
Thanks alfiya for the comment dear.

Yes i understand that the above sentences confuse not only u but many others aswell.

but thats the beauty of this story is...if i clear ur confusions now the whole suspense and mystery element would be lost dear...so i will ask u to plz have some more patience and read on...it will clear at the end most probabaly.

yes dear as i wrote b4 wil eagerly wait for d mystery to unfold...i dnt wnt u 2 gve away anything b4 d time...

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: honeygrape

thankyou 😊 thanx a lot for making my bday special... i am not going to forget this day ever...

u r most welcome😊

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#955

Originally posted by: -divya-
i guess maan's cheri loved or querida is geet only..he's just dreaming about her and wished that it would be true

The hope what u think comes out to be true😉 i will keep my fingers crossed for that

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gbhat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#956

awesome update the suspense is too much who is cheri

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#957

Originally posted by: ksasi
interesting part.

Thank u dear

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#958

Originally posted by: gbhat
awesome update the suspense is too much who is cheri

Thanks dear...cheri will be revealed later...i dont thin it will be soon...it will take some time dear to reveal cheri

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#959

hi friends

i am writing this post bcoz i am very sad with the no tof comments on my updates.

Though the no of likes is increasing every day but the no of comments is decressing day by day.

i had thought i wll post the new update in the new thread but alas...my friends r not co-opreating with my. They r not commenting

lastly...with so few comments ...i am feeling quite discouraged to write further.😭🤢 i am not wanting to write further updates as i dont come to know what everyone is thinking about the update...and the thought itself that the readers are not liking my story is quite discouraging and it is not bringing anything(idea) in my mind to write for the next update.

i am not able to concentrate on the next update😭

so plz if u have like the story...plz comment...esp the silent readers and the newbies.

i had thought that i will be posting the next update in the new thread...but it does not look like it...me feeling very sad😭