SS:-Kadva Karelas and Jhakkas Jalebis(Pg 25 Note) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Lily2011

nice update. pm me plzzz

Originally posted by: Zbegum

you've dealt with this topic really delicately. this is a really nice part. arnav helping khushi out slowly and the connection building is really endearing. i am really liking this SS.

thank you for sharing and hope to see more soon :)

p.s can you PM me for the next part please i would really appreciate it.

xxx

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

@ meeps

LOOOL! Now I think about it, it sounds so UNBELIEVABLY retarded! Mrs. Dodo! Oh no. XD To think that was only two years ago cos I kinda stopped watching MJHT after Mayur got married!

OMG, I couldn't believe it...what heinous crime. I awas like no no no this can't happen. Hope that shyamua dies as a leper. Poor Khushi, atleast Arnav is caring for her.

Initially after part 2, I thought you were going to keep Khushi locked at Arnav's office as Arnav might have given hera lot of assignments to be completed by the deadline of the next day...but I was aghastly taken aback..

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

OMG, I couldn't believe it...what heinous crime. I awas like no no no this can't happen. Hope that shyamua dies as a leper. Poor Khushi, atleast Arnav is caring for her.

Initially after part 2, I thought you were going to keep Khushi locked at Arnav's office as Arnav might have given hera lot of assignments to be completed by the deadline of the next day...but I was aghastly taken aback..

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

LOOOL! Lets go torture him 😉

OMG everybody had such different ideas. I thought I'd made the whole rape thing a bit obvious but it seems not!

Well Shyamua's intentions were clear, but I had that perhaps Devi Maiyya with her kripa would make Khushi stay at Raizada Industries thus spoiling Shyamua's plan all together.

I'm too much of a optimist at times I guess.If Khushi had red chilly powder in her bag like Geet, then maybe right now things would have been diff with Shyamua getting treated for blindness.

Originally posted by: StarryEyedGyal

Ai yai yai thank you 🤣 you remind me of my spanish teacher from GCSE. Everytime I said something wrong it'd be Ai yai yai vandani. I'm just like 'Mate...Vandini.'😆

Wooto woot don't worry he'll be sorted out PRETTY soon. Not in the next chapter but the following one. I'm just thinking to myself, this is NOT going to be an SS XD and yeh I will update soon enough :D

wowww.yara tooo goddd.sad for khuhsi..but he really took good care of her.very concerned.loved it..u r a good writer...

Omg i read your SS at a stretch and i must tell you its amazing !! Just amazing!