MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136) - Page 54

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!...wonderful update..aw...loved to see geet telling her story, and maan's reactions...yippee..hes feeling something ...did i ever tell you i love this riya ..she's so cute yet smart 😆...loved it cont soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. loving the cutie pies Riya and Thomas.. and the way he had said future son-in-law.. ROFL.. now waiting for Geet to become Maan's finance..
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Posted: 13 years ago
I 'am really shocked to hear geet's past and want to see maan punishing her uncle. Riya and thomas have done a fabulous update, hope they both are safe and sound in the woods.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Now I have become real lazy now. So giving my comments on the previous 2 chapters.
Chapter 24
Maan is changing, thats obvious. Geet has sympathy for his past but when will she recognize she is changing too. Finally Maan managed to tell her that he has told Sameera that Geet is his wife. Great. And Geet played along perfectly well. I dont know what these two little ones are upto. Hope they dont invite trouble. Mr. D'souza has indeed become the bane of Maan's existence. And I loved the way Maan gave back to Sameera.
Chapter 25
Oh!! Geet's past was very painful. How beautiful is her heart that she still has something good to say about her Uncle who has done nothing but damage to her life. I was wondering how old would Geet have been when she agreed for the surrogacy. Sorry if I had missed it, in case you have already mentioned it. I have observed that what we are deprived of in childhood will reflect on our personality in adulthood. But the exception is parent's love I believe. The more one has been deprived of it, the more they give back to their children. I have seen that in my father. His mother died when he was barely 2 years old and barely any love from a very strict father. But he turned out to be a very loving, caring and protective parent. And I believe Maan and Get are no less. Riya is blessed to have them as parents. They did not go through the process of becoming parents naturally, but yet parents are parents. I am sorry, I got carried away. Signing off for now not before mentioning about the cute little would-be son-in-law of Maan and his daughter's "finance". Just imagine my plight, I was at work when I read the update and was grinning like a fool while reading Thomas' note. What will my staff think about me? I am sure this whole incident of "rescue Riya from the woods" is going to bring Maaneet closer.
I was feeling a bit low upon GHSP ending and your update came as a breeze to cool my messed up mind.
Edited by Viji79 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love this kid she is to much and so sweet
felt sorry for geet her uncle is a bas###d
like how they are moving on to first name bases awesome update please pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ooo so this is riya's plan ...
I think maneet r getting closer due to geet telling her past :)
Can't wait to see them fall in love !!!
Awesome update!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
RIYA IS SO CUTE
TO WHAT EXTENT SHE HAS GONE TO GET HER PARENTS TOGETHER

GEET HAS A SAD HISTORY
SHE NEEDS LOVE IN HER LIFE TO MAKE HER FORGET THE PAST
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
i really fond of riya...sooo sweet...
update quickly plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 21
The update was awesome!
Both maan and geet can sleep!
And thinking about a way out of the trip!
I love geet and riya's bonding...!
Riya asking geet to make a french braid...
And then saying that maan cant do it was cute lolz
I wonder what bad word did he say in front of riya and teddy 😆
Aww asking why her parents arent married...
And telling the teddy that she will think of something 😉
She is one cute and smart kid 😆

Chapter 22
Hmm maan doesnt like geet taking a bus home!
And wants to go and pick her up himself 😳
Aww and he care about if she ate or not...
Maan called her geet...nice move professor lol
Ah sameera is also here 🤢

Chapter 23
L'il riya is up to something and need a partner!
"You are my finance" LMAO thomas is so sweet!
What the hell? Sameera is such a despo 😡
Oh wow maan said geet is his wife...
Now they will have to pretend like a couple...
Plus, riya is also up to something 😛
By the end of this field trip they will be a real couple *fingers crossed*

Chapter 24
Maan told geet about his past!
Glad geet was ready to play along with maan!
Haha i love thomas and his dialogue about women 😆
Argh I really hate this sameera...
But her presence is bringing maaneet closer!
So we can deal with her 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for late comments but was busy with college. Now I'm on my winter vactions so will be commenting regularly 😃

Chapter 25
Maan got her dinner plate ready!
But geet thought that he is just pretending!
Aww Geet also shared her past with maan!
Her uncle was such a jerk 😡
Felt really bad for geet...had tears in my eyes!
How can her uncle be so heartless!
The letter from thomas cracked me up😆
"Dear Future mama and daddy" LMAO
And the finance part was hilarious 😆
OMG! Riya is totally awesome...!
Aww but she is alone in the woods, that too at night!
Loved the update...cant wait for the next!
Please continue soon...!

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