MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

that samera is one b###h love the update love the kids i think they found there soul mate now to get mummy and daddy to fall in love glad geet is helping maan out awesome update

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

wow awesome update...
loved it...
atlast geet acepted... happy for that...
loved riya n thomas..
continue soon...
thanks 4 the pm...

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So I was saying

@SoIWasSaying

Sparkler

+ 12

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

wow update

smart kid riya... plannin her parents marriage

hopefully that wont come up in front of sameera

an wat abt geet's past... as in y she chose 2 b a surrogate??

when will that come up??

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Raman

@palsweety51

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Awsome update as usuel loved thomas and riya they are so cute aww riya trying hard to get her parents married lage raho bacha love u but no worries riya u don;t have to work hard your daddy is already falling for geet. Loved how geet completed the sentance for mann when she said to his wife that was awsome slap on sam face...

Raman

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Kumari 🤗... loved the update...it was

Maaneet convo was awesome...glad they talked about Sameera and about what they felt...this part was Wow ...

"Stop," said Maan forcefully. Unflattering words about Geet, even from her own mouth, were unacceptable. "Without you, I wouldn't have the joy of my life. And your arrival has brought my daughter immeasurable happiness." Maan sat quietly for a moment, allowing his surprisingly venerative words to reverberate in his own ears...made me all 😃 and 😍

Wonder what Riya has planned with Thomas...that boy is the limit...wonder when he will get the fiancee part right 😆

Thomas patted Riya on the shoulder. "Don't cry. I'll feel real bad if my finance is crying. I'll do it." He sighed. *Women,* he thought. *Can't live with them, can't live without them.* 😡😆

Riya and Maaneet hugs scene was so sweet...

Riya is such a cutieee...loved this part...

"Okay, Daddy," said Riya. She waved as she skipped away, growing more confident in her plan. Oh, how she truly loved her parents. More than cake, ice cream, and candy combined. How could they *not* love each other? She had to get them married, and fast...i was like yes Riya yes

Plzzz do it fast 😃

The best part was the last scene...made my day...

Maan threw an incensed glance at Sameera. 😡 "Not another word from you against, or even about, my wife. Got it?" He then led Geet away, leaving a woman scorned in their wake.....yeahhh...go Maan go ...

Thank u for the lovely reply to my comment. 😳...really appreciate it sooo much ...love u...this is for u 😊

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@-memorable-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

in this whole update one line that cracked me up was of Thomas"don't cry i wouldn't like if my fiancee cry", "woman can't live with them,can't live without them" 🤣

i love Thomas more than Riya actually ❤️ 😳

it will be interesting to watch Riya's plan to get married her parents

ohh maan can't digest irrespective words about geet even from her mouth 👏 is it only coz she is mother of his child or something started to cooking 😕 lets wait and watch

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

superb
that sameera urhhhggg
do continue soon

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#468

I am loving this combination between the cuteness of the two kids ,revealing bit by bit their past,for example geet also grew up without mom...now we know smth abt her past,so thanks ...and ofcourse maneet interaction is getting better...loved their convo and how u described their reaction...amazingly ...so geet belives in marriage and maan cherishes her bcoz she gave him the biggest gift 😊 Well thats a good motive to get to know eachother,and the closseness created by their lie will be the element that will speed up the process 😉 Simply love this game they play now,knt wait 4 more! 😃