MG FF: For the Love of a Child (ch. 29 on p. 136)

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

hey

awesome part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Mirela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Oh,my heart just broke when riya said geet hates her!!its just wonderful how you succeed to make us feel the scene!!Reading this makes me feel good,relax and enjoy...cause i know its a great job and worths reading...thank u...

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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

You made me emotional dear...

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hindu4lyf

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Lovely update! :) My heart goes out to Riya! The poor girl is trapped between her parents even though it's not their fault either.

Let's hope Maan decides quickly and calls Geet back!

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ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

oh dear so heart wrenching...i just hope Maan makes a right decision and does some custody kind of setting. She doesn't have to live there but she can atlease mmet her

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

that was simply superb!
mind blow actually
and i really really loved it!

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

part 18 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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hopehot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

hai!! 😲..what a cliffhanger ending

as usual loved it ..can't wait for next part 😉

thanks for the pm

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Shalini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

very emotional ending. maan loves riya more than anything in the wrld, he would never let riya grow up without her mother, i am sure of that. and im glad geet gave it back to maan because he has to see that not all women are the same. very nice upday. thanks alot for the PM 🤗