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So much Guys for all your likes and comments...

That has inspired me to write more...

I hope you all are enjoying the flow of story...

Updating Part 15 Soon...
Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago
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PART XV

Maan sees Geet doing all sorts of things in the party'..

Maan: Pari, Arav''.. Geet''..

Pari: Maan, I have made Geet sit on the chair outside''..

Maan: Pari no she is no more outside she is here'' we need to stop her

Pari (shocked): where?????

Maan: see there'''.

On the other side

Geet is dancing all alone, laughing and then she goes to stranger

Geet: Hello''myself Geet''.. how are you

Stranger: Hello''..

Geet: what are you having''.. (showing a glass) this is very tasty'.. I want more

Pari: Maan, Arav we need to stop her''' If Malhotra uncle sees her she would be in trouble'..

Maan: means????

Pari: I will explain you later'' lets first stop Geet

They come near Geet

Pari: Geet I will give you more'''..come lets go from here''

Geet: I told you I want more and you made me sit outside and went away''''.

Pari: Ya Geet I will give'' pehle yaha se chale''

Geet: No I want now'' otherwise I want go from here''

Pari looks at Arav and Maan'''

Arav: Geet here it is come we will all go and have fun outside'..

Pari: Ya Geet Arav is right''..

Maan: Geet take this'''. Now we shall go'''

Geet takes the glass and becomes happy and says: yes

Pari: Ab kya kare''' She is going crazy

Maan: We can do one thing'.. we should make her sleep''..

Arav: Ya Maan you are right''' any ways we have some room booked in the hotel''..

Pari: Ya we can make her sleep in my room'''

Maan: ok lets take her'..

Geet (throwing away the glass which was given to her): This is not the one what I want''.. that was so tasty'''..

Pari: Geet what are you doing????

Geet: I want that'''.

Arav: Pari your screaming wont help'' she wont understand any thing'..

Maan: Geet we will give you what you want''.. come lets go''

They all start walking'''.. Pari is holding Geet, so that she does not run away''

Geet is trying all possible ways to run as she wants to enjoy''.. She is running in the lobby and Maan, Arav and Pari are catching her'..

Maan: I never knew yeh aisi harquat karegi''..

Pari: Even I never knew''

Pari receives a call from her mother''

Pari's Mom: Pari where are you and Arav'. And even Geet is not to be seen''..

Pari: Mom we are'' (confused as what to say)

Pari's Mom: Pari we are what??? I don't know''.. I want you all in the hall now'''. Understood and cuts the phone

Pari: Arav now should we do????

Maan: Pari, Arav you both go I will be with her''..

Pari: Maan am sorry

Maan: Don't be'' Arav, Pari go'''

Pari: This is my room's key''..

Maan: ok''..

Pari and Arav leave''..

While Maan, Pari and Arav were talking Geet again started running'.

Maan runs behind Geet'.

Maan: Geet wait'..

Geet: why???? You all are not giving me what I want''..

Maan: I will give you and hold's Geet''..

Geet was making noises'.

Maan: Geet Shhh





Geet also doing: Shhh

Maan: Ha Geet chup ek dum chup''..

Geet: Shhh

And continuously keeps on doing Shhh'' and was again about to run''..

But this time Maan carries Geet in his arms

They reach the room''..

Maan makes Geet sit on the bed''..

Maan: Geet, you sit here''..

Geet nods her head'''

Maan goes to get water and Geet start dancing'.

While Geet is dancing Maan just gets lost in the beauty of Geet'.. He just forgets everything'''.. And Geet is busy dancing''.. and Geet was about to fall as she is not at all in her senses'. Maan runs and holds Geet and make her sit again on bed'..





Maan: Geet chup chap baito yaha par''.. samji tum

Geet puts fingers on her lips''

Maan: Geet have this''.

Geet: This is that tasty wala drink'''

Maan: Geet no this is water'''

Geet: I want that tasty wala

Maan (with a angry tone): Geet chup chap have this''..

Geet takes a glass and start having water''..

Maan: Geet now you go to sleep''

Geet: Nooo, I want to dance'''

Maan: No more dance'.. go to sleep''

Geet: No'.. I will dance'.. who are you to stop me'.. I will and gets up from the bed'..

Maan( self talk): Yeh ladki kitni ziddi hai'' normal circumstance mai to theek aisi situation mai bhi zidd par aadi hai''..

Geet is moving round and round and takes Maan's hand in hers and makes him also go round and round'..

Maan: Geet enough now'.. go to sleep'..

Geet: No I want more'''.

And again starts'..

Maan is trying all possible ways to convince Geet to make her sleep but Geet is not ready to listen to anything'''.

Maan finally holds Geet very tightly and tells Geet enough and if you don't listen now then''

Geet stops and losses her balance''

They both fall on the bed''..

They both in each others arm''

No Precap''' Keep guessing what ever comes in your mind'''😉😉



I Hope you all like this update...



Will be waiting for your response...



Edited by ana1411 - 13 years ago

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