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Posted: 13 years ago
plz plz plz plz update the next party.we are dying to see geet in unconditional love with maan.he is trying to change.awww baby...feeling bad for him.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 22

You will never know true happiness until you have truly loved.. and you will never understand what pain really is until you have lost it. yes very very true wordings
Some unknown piercing pain stabbed his heart as he saw her lifeless body lying unconscious on the floor..

Geet...! wt u have done

he rushed towards her and scooped her in his arms..

Blood was dripping from her wrist.. he rushed towards the car..

Geet..! open your eyes ..! plz geet open ur eyes poongs also shouting here

he yelled as he placed her on the car seat.. He rushed towards the other side and started driving the car maniacally... uh i am very tensed drive fast devil He was dreading each moment.. Maan Singh Khurana and fear.. he had mocked at her a day before.. and now he was afraid.. he was afraid of loosing her.. wt devil is afraid unbelivable
He carried her inside the hospital.. his fear was driving him insane

I cant loose her ..I cant..!

his mind screamed..
He called the doctor
Save her.. ! he shouted on top of his lungs plz save plzz

Yes Mr Khurana .. we are trying our best.. but there so so much blood loss.. just pray..

I don't believe in god.. I don't believe in prayers.. And you also don't fear your god.. fear me.. because even I don't know what I am going to do with your hospital and you.. if anything happened to her.. hey he is a devil yaar how he'll belive in God and prayer uh?? if any thing happen to geet u all ppl are deadin his hand
Doctor flinched at his threat knowing well whom he was talking to and left..
One hour.. it has been one hour since he has brought her here.. but this one hour made him ponder and consider about his life..his love.. hmmm now devil is understanding sum thing lets see
Love is indeed miracle.. it can make anything possible.. ANYTHING.. yes anythin :)
It posses the capability to make fool out of wise person.. on the other hand it can also make wise man a fool.. This miracle can strengthen the weak one.. But it can also weaken the strong ones.. YES IT CAN..! YES IT DOES..! i second it !!
It can defy every rationality ..it can destroy every reason..
But can it turn a devil into an angel..? hmmm let me think abt this
Oh yes it can..! it's the most powerful thing..
He fell on his knees.. thinking what his life would be without her..
A warm drop of water rolled down from the corner of his eyes.. OMG devil is crying i cant belive this wait ill pinch myself an see whtr i am dreaming or is it trueits true yaar devil is crying
He rubbed his thumb on his face to make sure if it was really his tear.. His love defeated him, forcing them to shed those tears that were always meaningless for him.. yes ur crying devil ur crying even urself u cant belive na??
I hated these tears ..they make men weak.. what the hell is happening to me..? Am I weak? Has love made me vulnerable..? love can make any one upside down don to knw that devil ?? alteast nw u knw abt this
he thought..
All I know is I can't live without my life.. I can't live without my soul.. I can't live without you.. My life.. Already a burning hell.. it would be nothing without her.. nothing but a void.. u r missing her so much soo sad i can feel ur pain

I don't care about winning or loosing.. I am ready to loose .. as long as she Is there..

But she don't want a devil..!
But can I change..? would I be able to change myself..? is there any hope? Is there any possibility..?
he questioned himself.. oh so ur think now to change urself tats really suprising yaar yeah yeah u can chng urself i am tellin na love can change even a devil
I am not sure.. I don't know.
You stirred some emotions in me..
Yes strong emotions.. I named it love.
But its not merely love.. its something more than that
My obsession.. my love.. not divine may be evil
But my evil love..
I love you geet I can't survive without you..
may be she desire something else..
But can I change myself? Is it even possible,.
I always thought that part never existed in me or it is already dead..
Can my love make it alive
Or can my love create it .. yes def def u can make it go ahead
Mr Khurana..she is fine.. you can meet her.. but she is weak due to blood loss.. you can take her home within few hours.. but don't stress her.. doctor informed him.. shhh happa thank god geet is fine now i am happy
He ran towards her room.. She was sitting there totally blank.. He moved towards her.. but there was no response from her side..
Why did you do this..? he asked.. pain was evident from his voice..
You left me with no other option.. she replied curtly yes yes geet how rude he was na??
Don't do this again.. he pleaded
Or what? You can't force me on this one.. can you ? hurt came out with surge of sarcasm ...
I won't force you on anything now.. just don't do this again..
Oh why do you even care? Why are not not running after my fiance to kill him..? You are wasting your time here instead of satisfying your ego.. a tight slap to him now by her words
He closed his eyes in pain..
I won't force you.. I did nothing to him.. I won't do anything to him..
I am sorry.. but I love you.. I love you so much,.. I am dying each moment without you.. He paused not sure what he should tell her..
I was already burning in my own hell.. I don't care as long as you are there for me..I am selfish.. I know I am .. I wanted you to be part of that hell.. But its now my fault..I can only give you what I have.. and I only have that hell..
I am sorry.. it was not in my control to love you.. I love you.. though I never desired this.. I never wanted to fall in love.. but I was never given a choice.. OMG devil is asking so many time sorry to geet unbelivable man
He clenched his fists to control his pain..
You asked me if I feared anything.. I never did.. because there was nothing to loose..
But I feared each and every second when I realized I might loose you for ever.. yes geet he is sayin all this words wit sincerity
She looked at him.. she was unable to believe what he just told her..
Maan Singh Khurana and fear..?she thought shocking na even i also equally got shocked like u
Yes I was helpless and I feared..
This doomed heart of mine.. its only yours.. I am sorry.. but please don't repeat it again.. NEVER.. he closed his eyes for few seconds in attempt to stop his tears..
Doctor said you can go home now..
She shook her head unable to believe what she just heard..
Is it another trick..? she thought.. no no geet this is not trick now u belive him
Hmm.. actually its too late now.. and no one have any idea that I am here.. they must be sleeping.. if I go alone with you.. there would be lot of problems.. please let me call Meera and yash..
But.. he paused.. ok but I will only go after leaving you at your place safely..
Oh Meera darling.. why are you after my Geet..? what's her fault..? haan?
It is just because of that Devil Don... he is the one to be blamed.. yash blabbered to make her laugh hey yash shhh!!! devil is here oly
But shock course through her body. She immediately looked at maan who was listening to yash..
Or nahi tu kya.. eik dafa mil jaye mujhe woh devil don Maan Singh Khurana.. I will show him.. he will regret messing up with my geet.. hey yash again i am saying na devil here oly don talk like this pls see ur room fully man
Yash...! geet tried to stop him and pointed at Maan's direction indicating him to be quiet..
He froze as his eyes fell on Maan.. he could still feel the pain in his eyes due to brutal punch by Maan last time... U dumbo i told u na now wt ur gonna do man hehehe
Oh why it always happens to me.. he looked helplessly at Meera who was fuming to see his reaction.. no one can help u nw
Oh Mr Maan ..are you happy now..? look what you have done to her.. Meera fumed ignoring Yash..
Maan paced towards her..
Look..! I am not in habit of explaining myself to anyone.. so don't bother.. he answered in firm tone and moved towards geet.. yes now he proved he is a devil
He stopped car in front of her house.. and yash opened her door.. she tried to stand but fell back due to her weakness and sedatives.. yash bend farword to pick her.. but before he could do so he felt strong hand on his shoulders pulling him back.. See again u r trying to do a mistk yash so sad of u man
Brij opened the door but he was shocked to see geet in arms of a stranger.. wt briji rolling ur eyes shocking uh???
UFFF wt an update didi i throughly enjoyed it u all give me surprise with ur update again u tel me wt reaction i have to give u wit this update so many emotions was der in this update
Now eagerly waiting for next update didi get ready soon wit ur update hehehe
Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
my devil msk changing!😔 nehiii😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was just mind blowing...
Especially monologues of Maan Singh Khurana... the way he was fighting with his own feelings... it is totally true that love brings in changes in one's personality...
I just started loving this MSK character when he questions self if he can change for his love... Though he is a devil, he very deeply loves her...
Loved the part when he fears of losing her...

MSK confession to Geet was just awesome...

Yash phir se bach gaya!!!!😆
MSK trying to control the devlish instincts in order to win her love... Interesting!!!

Continue soon ... and ek aur twist... oops... i need to sing "we twist" song now...😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
wats brijs reaction gonna be now
angili thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok lets see well I know he loves her so him afraid of losing her didnt chok me but him thinking if he can change that did chock me
Now her brother and maan confrentation is what I am worried about anshra update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi guys sorry if i missed anyone in reply
bcs i wrote long ones n got deleted..
will be replying to this update now

@deeps

hi deeps

wow.. getting comments from my deeps

and that too in bulk is treat in itself..

yaar i loved that flower pic..

oh it was sooo cuteee

yeah i know i why u r late

i am already eating ur time for the blog

yeah poems by simi

i love them too

she gives new direction to my FF..

luv ya deeps

@Dreamy_Mystique

Oh my God

reve having such comments from u

means a lottt

to me..

oh but dont chase me with broom

bcs reading ur thread i immediately updated it

yeah actually now once again another turning point

of the story is coming up

that will decide the fate of devil

hmm another small twist

plz hide ur broom

bcs i will be updating soon

luv ya

@

ajenn

thanks a lot for ur comments

i updates so soon today

@PJAKAHAAN

ishu me not killer

see i saved geet today

@thabs

oh my century buddy here for my rescue

luv ya

oh yaar such nice comments from u
agar mujeh pata hota mere naraz hone se thabs gonna give such comments
to mai pehle hi naraz ho jati
😆
dekho me not that bad geet is save na😆

@angili

now u have to keep promise of ur long comments

@ranjeeta1410

heheh ranjeeta i loved that cat

but i dont leave u guys like that

itna bara ilzam baba jee

before u guys can hang

i am again there with my update

@sneha.j

for u for ur comments

loved ur comments yaar

thanks for being there

and always commenting

now i sort of wait for ur comments

luv ya

yeah so many bechara

n above all our devil bechra

@jas

hi jas how r u?

how is ekam luv ya

@reni

miss u yaar

whats up on ur side?

@

poongs123

c i didnt made u wait long.. i updated ..

@juhu29
u know i love ur comments
bcs they are strieght from heart
and when u talk about friends
i feel so nice that u guys find this FF
worth discussing
and u comment so regularly now
i am thankful for that
luv ya
🤗
@vidushi

u know i was thinking keh i would love to write

a siutation where geet is J of maan with some other girl
somewhere in this FF
😆
@DilMaaneet

wow u r so very full of good ideas

yeah there can be a post marriege story of maneet

in this FF

and a very strong one

i was also thinking about it

@$ara_$hachi

heheh...

but dont be angry now

bcs no cliff hanger this time

c how much i am improving😆

but i am about too give a shocking cliff hanger soon😆yeah now both standing against each otherlets c what happens next😉
Edited by anshra - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! It was awesome...Devil changing! That is awesome. I wanted to see Maan change, and u added that twist. loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
WoW Loved It Yaar...Continue Soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update dear...

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