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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#801

OMG!!! What has happened???

all the truth is out? And this Geet... she is trying to kill herself.???

Now what will happen??

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aprajitamadra

@aprajitamadra

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#802

what options a women had in front of a man like dis...shhhshshhshhshhhshh hate dis

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Shopau

@Shopau

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Hey

Thanx for the pm :) I am absolutely madly deeply and truely in love with ur FF Devil in Love and Irresistable Kidnapper. U r brilliant :) Keep up the good work.

lots of love

Edited by Shopau - 13 years ago

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HiddenTruths

@HiddenTruths

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#804

I feel addicted to your stories and u rock 👏

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#805

i love u r both novels but "Devil In Love" is awsome what next kya ya see this video.plz update soon

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i7gtTabBZiA&feature=results_video&playnext=1&list=PLE0B97C7418B86386

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#806

Shocking update.
Geet was really brave to speak out everything.
She need to do this. She need to say it. She cant move like an pupet to Maan's will.
Maan needs to know Geet is not weak.
Loved the whole face to face btwn Maan and Geet.
Maan is burning hell. He is still not getting it.
He cant force her to love him.
He destroyed everything in anger but it this not going to change the situation.
OMG!!! Geet slit her wrist!!!!
I really hope this will at least give Maan a thought that he cant force Geet till the end.
Maybe his absence will give some time to Geet.
I hope Maan will save Geet and leave without meeting her.
Can you please update soon dear... I cant wait to read the next..
Am biting my nails here.. Plz update before my nails go missing😭

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Originally posted by: PJAKAHAANI
YES YAAR!!
YE ANNI NA DONO KO AATMHATYA KARNE KE LIYE MAJBOOR KAR RHI H..KILLER ANNI
KILLER ANNI
KILLER ANNI..
BUT agar hmne kisi ek ff ke hero msk ko bhi iss baar me btaaya diya na to sure anni GAI KAAM SE

ohh no yaar yeh kya kherahi ho app!!!!

thab tho annie zara bach kay rehna MSK aur @pjakahaani(sorry idont know ur name)say bhi

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jyothi111

@jyothi111

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Owesome update yaar...akhir Geet ne kar hi dhikhaya...POOR Geet...no options left for her that time...continue soon ...if Possible ...Great update...

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#809

PART : 19

now coming to detailed comments;

i typed comments for 3 times and could not post.

Poor geet forgot about files ok its not her fault.. maan is making her go crazy with his unexpected doings.

Don't you remember I like your hair open..?

Oh my god he did not get angry on geet for forgetting file but he is angry for the hair thing?? He is really crazy (crazy in love)

I said I want to love you I never said that I would break that limit..

But how is it possible..? she looked at him confused..

Yaa dear me too confused.

The video is awesome just perfect for the situation.

Beautiful pic of maneet dear….

Oh my god she ran just like that? with out dupatta that too in the office? Maan to entered in the lift what is going to happen???

for the update and pm

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#810

again i m here to comment on part 20 i cant believe i m so late but u know why dont u?

PART : 20

Geet..!

His jerk brought her back to reality.. she looked up to meet his eyes..

Why did you run from there..? he whispered huskily..

Do you have any idea if ten minutes are over or not? He asked her..

She shook her head in denial.. dreading if he is here to ask for more..

Neither do I have.. he accepted

Awesome dialogues dear….

Can you tell me why both of us lost the track of time..?

Why it was only me and you at that moment..?

Why despite of your constant claim that the only feeling you have for me is hatred.. then why did you kissed me back..?

Good questions.

what you want that I should take my cloths off.. she spatted out rudely..

oh my god aniee how do u get these ideas and dialogues dear??

and yes wait a minute if you really want to take off your cloths i won't mind it at all.. he grinning slyly..

oh my god what a counter???

Was the deep dark of the night
But I smuggled my strengths through
Struggling to hide myself,
But it followed me, I knew.

I hid in the silence,
But the echo of my pain was all around
I drowned myself in tears
The sooner they rolled, I was found.

How far could I go,
It followed me everywhere
Through the darkest of the skies
In the silence, it was there.

I hid in my memories
Walled them in with stone
They broke through my conscience
Stole all that was my own.

Now I surrendered,
I made a desperate plea
"It was over," I screamed
Why do you haunt me?

Superb dear u wrote it?//👏👏

Superb poem by (by Natalie)

Tumhari kuch ziada meeting nahi chal rahi aaj kal.. there was suspicion in his eyes too..

God this guy……

you are not going to office from tomorrow..

oh my god hey brij just make her sit at home u will know whats going on… In the way geet also will be free from Burdon of hiding the thing from family.