~Mayur FF Love and Hate#2~epilogue 2 on pg 33

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Hello friends🤗🤗
i am back here with second thread of my FF*Love and Hate*😃seriously i did not expect such a beautiful responce from you for this FF🤗🤗It is surely my one of Favourite FF.😳
Thank u so much for loving me and giving me ur love and support🤗🤗friends ur love and support really a means alot me 🤗
love y all🤗
Please keep reading my work and keep showering ur love on me😳🤗
Maria
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Index

index

character sketch...pg 1
part 1...pg6
part 2...pg10
pART 3...PG15
Part 4...PG 19
Part 5...pg 23
Part 6...pg 28
Part 7...pg 33
Part 8...pg 38
Part 9...pg 45
Part 10..pg 51
Part 11..pg 57
Part..12..pg 65
Part 13..pg 73
Part 14...pg 81
Part 15...pg 89
Part 16...pg 96
Part 17...pg 104
Part 18...pg 112
Part 19...pg 120
Part 20...pg 127
Part 21...pg 136
Part 22...pg 144
Index
Part 23...pg 1
Part 24...pg 11
Last Part...pg 18
epilogue 1...pg 26
epilogue 2...pg 33
Edited by Maria. - 14 years ago
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Character Sketch

Mayank Sharma..
Mayank 24 years old person,a handsom,cute.a son of Ravi Sharma,a well known industrial...he dont respect his elders...he loves to flirt with girls,he has many girlfriends...he loves his parents..his father wants him to join his business..
the thing which he likes...he snatches it or get it at any cost..
Nupur Bhushan...
Nupur,24 years old girl,a sweet,bubbly,beautiful,sensible girl who knows her resposibilities..she loves her father and her sister..she respects,loves everyone.
but a person will come in her life who will change her life..
Gunjan Bhushan..
Gunjan 22 yeard old girl,a sweet bubbly and cute,younger sister of Nupur..she loves her sister and her father..she is studing in excel college..
Samrat shergil..
Samrat..23 years old..a cute handsom boy..he is Mayank's best friend
Ravi Sharma and Shilpa Sharma
Mayank's parents..they wants their son;s happiness..they gives him everything which he wants,or desires..
Bajaj Bhushan...
Nupur,Gunjan's father..who loves her daughters a lot.



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Thank u sooo much friends for ur beautiful comments n responce🤗🤗🤗
😊i am going to update next part..i hope u ll liked it
@mayu-nups richa,asma ,Nisha,kheya and everyone who requested to update this FF here is update😳🤗
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Love and Hate

Hatred ever kills, love never dies. Such is the vast difference between the two. What is obtained by love is retained for all time. What is obtained by hatred proves a burden in reality for it increases hatred.


How much true it is'..

Nupur opened her eyes slowly she still feeling some heavy weight on her head,slowly flipping them she opened her eyes and looked around her surrounding,Samrat Shilpa was sitting near her bed

"what was happened to me" Nupur said holding her head trying to sit on bed when Shilpa held her shoulder and gave her signed to stay lay down

"you got unconcious"Samrat told her and Nupur remembered her fight with Mayank and then His words

"I did not do anything Nupur"

Her eyes became teary

"Where is Mayank?"she said impatiently getting her senses back and looked at them worriedly in hope to listen something about him and Samrat and Shilpa gave eachother worried look while Nupur was too quick to noticed their worried faces

"I asked something where is Mayank?"this time she said in a bit loud tone as they were not telling her about him and it seemed her heart would stop at any moment

"Nupur beta relax"Shilpa came closer to her and putting her hand on her shoulder she said her to stayed calm down as it was not good for her

"Where is Mayank?"she again asked looking at Shilpa and one could felt and sensed helplessness and weakness in her voice..

Shilpa turned her face towards Samrat who gave her signaled to tell her truth

"Beta,we are searching him..whenever he got upset he used to do same I know he would be in his friend house, ,when he will feel better he will come back we are trying to call him up but he is not attending our calls we are too worried but don't worry he will come back soon"she tried to calm down her and he looked towards Samrat who too gave her assurance look but Why?

Why her heart was telling her nothing is right? Something worst would happen soon and then his words again and again echoed in her mind

"Sigh! You could not understand my love, you always thought it was lust, I did not do anything I have nothing to say you more.. I am the reason of your pain so trust me I will leave you forever and will not again come in your way"

"I will leave you Forever"

"No it can't happen he cant leave me, he has to come back" feeling helpless and guilty she closed her eyes and tears were dwelling up in her eyes..

"Beat I know he will come back soon" Shilpa aunty tried to console her

"I have to meet him, I have to see him" she said getting up from her bed throwing comforter on other side while Samrat and Shilpa tried to calm down her but she was feeling very restless..

"Don't worry. I am going to find him and I will back with him"Samrat gave her assurance and walked out from there while she just closed her eyes as tears were burning in her eyes

"Mayank where are you please come back"Nupur closed her eyes and prayed and let her tears to flow

It was 2 hour past to go Samrat in searched of him but he did not came back yet and Nupur was feeling restless sitting closed to entrance door in hope' now the door will open and she will see him'while Shilpa was trying to console her who was too hell worried at unexpected absence of his son

"Please Mayank come back I love'."she thought and paused a bit and realized what she was going to think..

"what I am thinking ?

"How could I love'.."She again take a paused and tried to convinced her heart

"may be it is guilt, guilt for taking him wrong, guilt for blaming him but not there is something more and that is a new and strange emotions,feelings which is related to him,which I never felt before"

She closed her eyes and all the moments which she spent with him flashed in front of her eyes..

"I love Mayank"her heart beat raised at her confession while her lips curved into smile

"I love him and I cant live without him"she confessed to herself and felt content in her heart but "where are you"a thought made her worried again and her trial of thoughts broke due to sound of car and Nupur rushed towards the outdoor

When she saw Samrat coming towards him while his face was telling him he could not find him and her feet froze at that place

"bhabhi i searched him everywhere,i called everyone but no one knew where is Mayank"samrat told Nupur ,he was too hell upset

"I am sorry bhabhi I could not''."he said in helpless yet with guilt tone

"Samrat let's go with me"she said opening the door of car

"but"he tried to stop her

"go and start the car..i will search him and I know I will find him" she said

tried to be strong

Samrat knew her condition after getting unconscious Doctor gave them instruction to do take care of her and suggested complete bed rest as she was weak but he knew too she would not listen him

"ok"he sat again in the car and they searched him everywhere, every possible place where he could be but they could not find him

Feeling helpless she closed her eyes and tears flowing from her eyes as she did not want to loose him at any cost she wanted to tell him that she too loved him truly, deeply,madly

She opened her eyes and her eyes fell on him,he was sitting on bench near some park in darkness

"Samrat stop the car..here is Mayank"her eyes filled with tears while smile spread on her face after seeing him

Samrat stop the car and both came out of car.Nupur rushed towards him

"Mayank"she called his name and he turned his face back after listening her voice

Their eyes met and she could not help but smiled to see him infront of her while he was shocked to see her there

"Nupur"he said in almost in whispering tone while trying to convinced his mind

"Its not his dream"

She rushed towards him and hugged him tightly and let them her tears to fell

Bitterness imprisons life; love releases it. Bitterness paralyzes life; love empowers it. Bitterness sours life; love sweetens it. Bitterness sickens life; love heals it. Bitterness blinds life; love anoints its eyes.

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Precap
"how dare you leave me alone..do you have an i dea how much i was scared"holding his shirt in her fist she shaked him while tears were flowing from her eyes and Mayank was starring her in disbelief

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"i love you Mayank"

"i love you too Nupur"
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"Mayank"she screamed
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here is next update..plz press like tab n do comments😳
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Nice update Maria, looks like a confession is on its way.
Loved the description at the end.
Congrats for second thread ... its well deserved. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on the second thread...
Thank god they found him...
Update soon 😳
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🥳congratulations... 🥳 for d 2nd thread...
m sooo happy for u sis...😃
plzzz ase hi beautifully ye ff likhte rehna ok...😉
love u sis...🤗🤗🤗

now abt d update...
m so glad dat she accepted her feelings now...😃
n at last dey found Mayank...😊
bt wht is dis PROMO han????????😲😲
m glad dat u make dem confess der love...😳
bt why she SCREAMED?????????????????😲😲😲
i hope u r nt planing to snatch my Mayank from Nupur...nehiii😒
plzzz NOOO nooo NOOO😭😭
dont do dis...😭😒😭
agar asa kiya na to iss bar main sach mein lad parungi...😡😡😡
nehi plzzz sis dont let anything happen to Mayank plzzz...
make MayUr together forever...
bt plzzz han say me 1 thing r u planing to end dis ff...
den plz let me tell u dis ff is really dear to my heart n isse end karke plzzz mujhe dukhi maat karna plzzz...

ps: i hope meri sweet sis plzzz meri guzarish sunegi hain na sis!!!!!!!!

waitinggg eagerly for ur update...
plzzz update super soon plzzz...
ho sake to abhi warna kal...😆😉
bt plzzz dis time m badly wanting u to update it ASAP plzzz
love u sis...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...😳
n Awesomeee Updateee...👏

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Congrats on the second thread👍🏼

Amazing part
loved it
continue soon

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