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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
awesome update dear😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Awesome loved it
Thanks for the PM
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Note :-
Hi All
how r all
Happy Navaratri To Every one
sorry for late updating as ,I was little busy then out of town and went to my home town for Durga puja but now will start to update from this Friday
love
rakhi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No problem dear
Waiting for ur update
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread:-D
cute Maaneet moments ...me wondering how he gonna make her blouse fit😕😳😆
Di ...r u planning to show Dev negative ...coz I'm getting -ve vibes about him.
loved the update ...awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
updating 😛
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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di waiting . .
I cme 2 ur thread 2 ask u 2 update
Yipee saw u r status. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: luv_DD

di waiting . .
I cme 2 ur thread 2 ask u 2 update
Yipee saw u r status. .


yes typing last part some of editing and adding
thnks dear😳
yes this time I got late but now start updating from today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: luv_DD

happy durga puja di. .


Happy Durga Puja and Happy dashera dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbglM_cvqj4[/YOUTUBE]

Vm credit goes to roopali(
rsroopali)

Next Part:-

Farmhouse:-

Maan panting besides her and said jaan, r u fine.

Geet who is red,in shyness due to her husband's love, passion just hugged him and hide her self in him and nodded in yes.

Maan hugged her back and said u r still blushing like newly wed, aabhi bhi.

Geet whisper slowly oh,,,oh'.maan smiles and hugged her and said I love ur shyness,Geet smiles slowly .

Later after, both of get ready , geet make little break fast and coffee for herself and maan and dad.

Dad and maan:- geet we will be late

Geet:- no one will be late but complete break fast both of u then will go.

Maan mockingly yes madam.

Geet look at him then said to dad,vicky called in the morning want to talk to u.

Dad:- oh my phone is switched off , ok will call him.

Later they start their journey..

Dad take his seat besides driver and maaneet sat on the back seat.

After some times, geet falls on sleep and maan placed her head on his shoulder when dad said maan, kya decide kya ,

Maan:- dad kis baarein mein?

Dad:- geet, ke further study ke baarein mein,

Maan:-yes she will do CA and I'll help her,

Dad:- good, maan, I don't want to tell much as u know what will be good for both of u or not but don't leave her, and more before admission or after admission jo small break hain take her with u and went for some holiday not here ,here we all r here, friends, relatives, work, u can't enjoy here, go and spend more time with each other,

Maan smiles and look at geet's sleeping cute form , the way her hand clutch his shirt and she almost buried her face on her neck, maan said yes dad.

Later all take rest and at evening they reached at HP.

Geet looks excited and said maan,

Maan smiles and said yes jaan,and dad chuckled to hear it

Geet feel embarrassed ad whacked maan and said maan .

Maan kya hua?

Geet rolled her eyes and come out from car.

Maaneet and dad r greeted and welcome by geet's family, they enter the home .

Meera come and take geet with her to meet rajjy in her room.

Brij said maan chalo take some rest ,

Maan smiles then take blessing from dad, papa jee , mama.

Dad is busy to talk with dar jee then he also retired in the room , will meet rajjy after some time.

Here at geet's room:-

Maan took a shower and open his laptop to check few mails when geet come and hugged him from behind and said kya kar rehe ho?

Maan:- baas kuch mail check, rajjy se mil lya.kiase hain oh?

Geet:-pata nehi mujhse kaha feeling sad, excited, happy everything. Some times smiling or something looking lost.

Maan:- It's happen jaan.abhi kya kare rehi hain oh

Geet:- taking rest,mama ne abhi usse thori der ke liye sone ko kaha, subha dress ka aur jewelry ka trial then beauty parlor mein gaye so abhi mama ne kaha rest lene.

Maan smiles and kissed her cheek then said u also take little rest,

Geet yawn then said hmmm but have to take shower.

Maan:- ok , if u need help then tell me

Geet look puzzled and said help for what

Maan smirked naughtily and said oh about giving u shower or '..

Geet look all red due to shyness and said no thanks and went to her cupboard and asked where is my dress.

Maan again said pehene ka kya jarurat hain without and soon received a cushion and said maan, kitna besharam ho gaye ho aap,,

After some time, geet shouts maan mere kapre.

Maan already take them and said bahara nikal dia ,

Geet:-pls dijiye na.

Maan:-iye lo

Geet take them and said thanks

Maan who is looking disturb and talking with some one when geet come out with towel tied in her hair and seen maan is almost shouting some one on phone then understand it's DEV

Geet shook her head and think what is the new problem now?

She sat on the dressing table and drying her hair then went to put the mangal sutra when maan hold her hand and said let me do it

Geet smiles and nodded when maan tied it and kissed her neck slightly and then take the pinch of sindoor and fill her mang and hugged her tight and said shaam ko chalte hain bahar sirf , mein aur tum

Geet turned and said kaha.

Maan:-pata nehi baas chalte hain , as I heard here is so many good placed where no one disturb .

Geet look at him then said ok and maan said btw tumahra pyaara devar vicky is not coming as he has imp date tomorrow.

Geet :-usse toh baad mein dekhungi mein.then said maan, kya hua, kuch problem,

Maan no jaan, oh actually dev is busy and will go aboard coming month so .

Geet:- kya but jaha tak mujhe pata hain , aise toh kuch schedule mein nehi hain

Maan rubbed his temple and said I know, isliye toh,

Geet look at him and said kya maan, dev kuch galat toh I mean kuch galat iya koi usse '

Maan turned and said no geet, but I guess something more there is'.

Geet:-kya ,

Maan cupped her face and let me find out dear, now don't think about it and I'm going to meet yash as dad told me already that he is here so '.

Geet nodded.

Later maan meet rajjy and talk with her .After their dinner, when every one leave to their respective room when geet come in the room and noticed maan is still disturb and Geet think I know there is such problem but she has to divert his mind other wise he will think and loss his peace of mind and sleep, he already take immense of work load, family pressure not now and more he is still thinking and feeling guilty about our separation, hmmm I have to do something

Geet come behind him and see he is again talking with some one, she smiles and went to prepare bed then changed his dress and find him still busy with in phone but now she guess it's vicky .

Maan:- kitni baat kaha hain meine, no first just forget all and concentrate on the work dad told u and see the other work , don't ,vicky , u already lied to yash that u r not coming cause of some date but that was not true .ok, hmmm,

After finish the call he look at out side and again went to seep thinking mode.

Geet come close to him after changing her night dress and hugged him from behind and hold his waist and said kya soch rehe hain aap itna.

Maan :-kuch nehi.

Geet:-jhooth

Maan :- nehi sweety, jhooth nehi hain,

Geet:-ok but where is our night outing

Maan:-kal jayenge meine brij se baat kar liya hain kal adhi raat ko mein aur tum jayenge.

Maan turned and said lagta hain aapko bahut jaldi hain mere sath ekele rehene ka,

Geet who is looking at him then tiptoed and said y I'll be feel shy with my sher, after all I'm his sherni and kissed his lower lips.

Maan look at her with wide eyes then pull her and said really my sherni. He caressed her face by his long finger and pinch her lower lips slightly and geet moaned ahhh then look at him when maan sensuously rubbing her both lips and

Then ,Geet bite his finger and maan said ahhh, geet

Geet innocently said I'm fulfilling ur conditions baby and kissed his nose then said huskily kal ke liye ready rehena mr khurana .

Maan pull her close and clutched her waist tightly and said of course sweet heart, jab aapne bola itna pyaar se toh hum kaise inkaar kare'

Geet :-that's like my hubby dear.

Maan:-accha my sweet heart wify

Geet giggled then placed her head on his heart and kissed his chest and said maan

Maan raised his eye brow and said aaj kya khaya hain ha and then take her in his arms and placed her on the bed and come besides her then pull her close and said again kya khaya hain aaj.

Geet:- roj jo khati hoon ohi, actually u know mr khurana , ek raaz ki baat hain

Maan rubbed his nose with her and said kya hain oh raaz.

Geet hold him by his neck and raised little bit and said aap aur aapka pyaar.

Maan look at geet and feel that she can make him feel like , she can make him fall for her , her cute talking, innocent ness, trust, care, love for him, he kissed her eyes and said my jaan.

Geet smiles ''.

Next day morning, maan wake up and see geet is not in the bed .

Maan get up and look here and there then found her coming from bathroom. He smiles then frowned and said bata ke nehi ja sakte the tum.

Geet who is wearing the bathrobe said good morning maan, then kaise batati aap so rehe the, and u need some good sleep, do u see ur self lately, u r become so weak and slim.

Maan get up and hold her from behind and as usual his fav dipped his head to her hair to take smell from her beautiful hair and said m absolutely fine jaan,but now give me my morning kiss, u r when geet slapped his hand and said no kiss, go and take bath fast,I have to ready , u know rajjy's sasural wale aatehi honge subha kuch puja hain iha then will go to GUDWARA then come back here for lunch later evening mein party hain so , mere pass bahut kaam hain choriye mujhe

Maan look at her by mirror then said ok , but iye jo abhi chor raha hoon na baas function tak uski baad tum sirf mere paas rahoge, samjhi.

Geet smiles and said but raat ko toh mein aa nehi sakti.

Maan:-kyuon ,

Geet think u r so innocent maan ,I'm still discovering u the angry young man maan Singh khurana innocent also, who is hot handsome dashing , dhak dhak of million of girl,many girl still dream of him and want to marry him , that person is so innocent her chain of thoughts break by maan who is saying to her tumne toh kaha saara function tum sirf bahana dhoond rehe ho,bolo na u don't want to spend time with me, hmmm and freed her and turn when geet hold his waist and said meine kaha kya aapne suna sahi se

Maan:-mujhe kuch sunna nehi hain tum aapna kaam karo,

Geet:- aap bache sach mein ho gaye, mujhe kehethe ho m kid and what u r doing , maan sun rehe ho aap.

Maan:- mujhe kaam hain bahut '.

Geet :- hey baba jee inhe aab kaam hain aacha thik hain jaiye aap se abhi baat karnke koi phayda nehi hain'

Maan just once look and went to bathroom for shower.

Geet after getting ready make the bed then placed his kurta and payjama in white color and said now I should go ,oh wait 10mins waise sir ka dimag abhi garam hua hain nehi dekhnge toh phir se .. here maan come out with wearing white towel and looking more hot, he ignored geet and said now I have to find out my cloths , uff, dadi hoti toh kitna easy hota, kaha dhoondo.

Geet:- drama king, dadi hoti, dadi kab se help karte hain, khud ka kaam khud karte hain phir bhi dekho'. Suniye aapka dress iha hain.

Maan look at her then with attitude come and take dress and said thanks dadi ma na bola hoga aapko na, thanks.

Geet's mouth wide open and she said aapko, aab aapko, huh, jab dekho bacche ki tarah zidd nehi toh attitude dekho oh oh inka toh button kaise lagaya hain aab aayega maja . and she cough ahem ahem but maan ignored and said kash dadi ma iha hoti, are uss baar toh Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti ne mere help kya tha, kash she is in here.

Geet look at him then pull him towards her and said look mr khurana don't u play with me like this, u thinking u will said some lie and I will believe no and now come here I'll put the button correctly .

Maan let her do but still praising mere Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti ne mere help kya tha, kash she is in here., she can do it more efficiently.

Geet give him angry glare then said then go to meet Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti ko'

Maan chuckled and said she is here

Geet look here and there then asked kaun

Maan:-ohi jiske baarein mein aapne abhi mention kya.

Geet :- I'll meet u so called best friend and Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti se

Here later all r busy in puja, maaneet doing arti and geet taking arti of rajjy and her would be husband samar'.

After puja all went to GURDWARA here in delhi no one know a big storm coming

DELHI, KM:-

Dadi ma who is this lady dev, and y she is claming her self daughter in law of this house

Dev:-I'm married already

Dadi ma :-What ?R u crazy or out of mind, what r u saying,

Dev:-it's true I know all this sudden but I loved her.

Dadi ma then what about meera, all know when dev said I don't love her and dadi ma slapped him and then

Dadi ma :- get lost from this house

HP:-

At terrace geet is roaming here and there and said Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti se toh aab mujhe bhi milna hain hmmm when some one caught her slim waist and nuzzle her neck and said meet me at 10.40 here u will meet Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti se '.

Geet turned and maan left from there but before going maan wink at her and said tumhara dress bed pe hain and accessories bhi '

Geet:-dress mere liye , accessories ek baar mein mil loon uss lerki se phir dikhati hoon aapko bhi aur aapke pyaare dost se

Precaps:-

Old Precap:-

Dad:- we need to go back to DELHI 😭

New Precaps:-

Precap 1:-

Geet kaha hain oh, jisse ke liye aap ,,,bulaiye usse mujhe bhi milna hain

Maan pull her and said see this my Dadi ma ke bete ki bahu ke pati ke bhai ke bhabi ke pati ki sasur ki beti ke bhai ke behen ki sada jee ke poti se '.😛

Precap 2:-

Bahon mein chale aao humse sanam kya hain parda 😳☺️ 😛 😉 😆😃😊

pls see the note below it's imp

this part is little light as next part is only for twist and twist before that I want to little light moments so

guess precaps jitna sahi guess hoga utna jaldi update hoga

hope u all love this update

pls read and do comments

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love

rakhi🤗

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago

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