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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Hey ppl, r u missing Nilesh's "give me d beat guys" ??

U'll surely get it in the next update.. :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

wooohooo mick just discovered this thread today and your writing is wonderful i love how you describe the situation and create the environment around the characters and your plot is excellent loving this yaar kya baat hai 👏

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~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

next part coming up soon.. i hope show acha ho aaj taki sab khushi khushi update pade

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kumjoo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

When are you gonna update MICK..Promo is awesome...

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~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

@PREETY: bas thodi der aur.. i promise its gonna be super big n awesome.. me n farah have been working on it since 2 days now.. so imagine how its gonna be.. :P

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~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Recap:

Rey: N U KNOW WAT SHARON??
ITS ALL OVERRR.. FOREVER...
I never expected that i wud ever say this to u but
i regret the day we became friends...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART 5:

(Rey goes straight to the Basket Ball court n takes out his frustration by playing aggressively.. he is so damn angry with his so called friends.. Vicky n Nilesh plan to find Rey n apologize for all that happened coz of their mistakes.

While Kriya feels annoyed n guilty that all this misunderstanding involves her n she should do something to get them back as buddies. She takes a step inside the Rehearsal hall to talk to Sharon but she realizes that she is not a suitable person to be talking at this time n can even make matter worse..

So she goes to Common roon where her team is practising. She takes Swayam out from the common room n tells her abt wt happened just now between Rey n Sharon. )

K: Rey n Sharon bahut upset hain swayam. Mujhe lagta hai humein kuch karna chahiye. Please tum sharon ke paas jao n usse sambhalo, mein Rey ko dekhti hun.

S: (Shocked that Kriya asking me to support Sharon) Ok kriya.. But mujhe samajh nahin aa raha, ki tum Sharon ke liye itna kyu soch rahi hoo..

K: Sharon nahin swayam.. Rey.. sharon uski best friend hai.. N waise bhi Sharon ne mujhe uss din canteen mein meri help ki thi wen none of u were there.

S: okaayy.. but y Rey?

K: Kyuki mere wajah se hi inn dono ki ladai hui hai..

S: ok Kriya..But kya tumhe lagta hai ki Sharon mujhse milna bhi chahegi iss time??

K: haan.. kyuki iss waqt usse sabse zyada ek dost ki zaroorat hai..

(Swayam is Thinking of something to cheer Sharon jisse uska mood badal jaye)
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(Vicky n Nilesh decide to go to BB court n meet Rey)

(Every1 is silent initially wid Rey playing n Vicky n Nilesh looking at each other)

V: Reyyy.. (Darr darr ke )

R: chale jao guys yahan se.. mujhe akela chodd do..

V: Rey.. plz yaar humare baat toh sunle ek baar

R: ab kuch raha nahi vicky baat karne ko..

N: Rey.. hum bas tujhe yeh kehna chahte hain ki v r very sorry for all that happend..

V: Rey.. Humne uss din campaign speech rakhwayi thi taki tu sabke saamne vote appeal kar sake.. par tum time par nahin aa paaye n baki log wait kar rahe the.. toh sharon ne de di speech.. mein maanta hun ki usne jo kaha woh usse nahin kehna chahiye tha, but elections mein yeh sab fair hai na..

R: haan i agree vicky ki fair hota hai ki tum opposition ke against kuch bhi kaho.. but tumne yeh nahin dekha ki mere opposite Kriya thi.. N tu pehle se janta hai ki mein usse like karta hun.. fir bhi tumne yeh nahin socha ki mujhe aa kar bataye ki meri absence mein kya kya hua..

V: Mein janta tha Rey.. but isse tumhari n sharon ke beech differences aa jate which i did'nt want.. isiliye meine tujhse kuch nahin kaha..

N: Haan Rey yeh sach bol raha hai.. hum bas apni frienship ko save karne ki koshish kar rahe the.. thats it..

(Rey sees some point in this but still pretends that he is not ok wid all this)

V: bhool ja yaar.. m happy that ki ab sab sahi ho raha hai.. coll mein sab teri n kriya ke tareef kar rahe hain abt the amazing work u guys are doing as GS n Asst GS..

R: Sach?? Yeh tumne kissne kaha??

V: (Vicky n Nilesh look at each other as they had made this last sentence aise hi to make Rey feel good) Yeh tujhe Nilesh bataega.. kyu Nilesh.. {amazing expressions hote hain inn dono ke jab mazak kar rahe hote hain}

N: Haan haan.. GIVE ME D BEAT GUYS ~~

{Vicky makes the beat for Nil .. dhin dhin chak de dhin dhin cha.. }

"College mein hua hai GS ka election..

kria ka hua hai assistant GS ka selection..

Kriyaansh par hai sab ka attention..

Sab keh the hai ye hai PERFECTION.. "

R: Kriyaansh??

V: Haan Kriya + Reyaansh = Kriyaansh.. kya Rey tu bhi na.. :P

R: (Rey gets a smile on this one like u guys have it right now.. :P ) acha theek hai guys.. but next time mujhse kuch bhi hide mat karna especially if its related to Kriya.. :P

V: (with a big smile) of course Rey.. tu toh bhai hai mera.. :)

(All 3 get into a group hug.. :P )

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(Sharon was sitting on d floor wid her head on her knees crying out confused nd pissed at herself for wat to do '.. She knew that whatever she said dat day in d speech was a bit too mean but like come on after all it was the elections nd she did it all for Rey soo that Rey wins d election' but now she feels she just have lost it all' she has lost her best friend for whom she did everything' why was everything going wrong??

The lights of d rehearsal hall went dim all of a sudden n Sharon felt sumbody entering nd picked up her head to see that it was Swayam )

Sh: pls aaj mein bilkul mood mein nahi hoon kaam ke liye so jus leave me alone

S: kaam ke liye nahi aaya hoon n na hi tumhara assistant ban ke..

Sh: luk I'm not interested soo pls jus leave...

S: chale jaunga but just want to say one thing Sharon nd pls listen 2 me fr once

(Swayam requested'. Sharon did not have d energy 2 fight bak'. So Swaym took dat as a yes nd sat down beside her.. )

S: Sharon yeh nahi kahunga ke tumne galti ki hai nd all dat...but just want to say dat galti har insaan se hothi hai lekin uss galti ko sudharne ka mauka bhi ussi insaan ke paas hothi hai. Yeh rone se ya phir aasu bahane se u cannot mend everything Sharon u need to do sumthing'.baat abhi bhi beegdhi nahi hai soo u hav the chance to make it all rite nd dnt loose this chance Sharon..

Sh: baat bahut bigad gayi hai Swayam.. Rey ne.. Rey ne toh mujhse.. apne bestfrnd se friendship todh di.. {She is very much Hurt}

S: mujhe toh laga tha Sharon agar iss colg mein Rey ko koi ache tarah se jaanta hai toh who tum ho..

Sh: wat do u mean??

S: Sharon y dnt u understand from Rey's pt. of view.. chahe woh koi bhi ho but Rey can never bear to c any1 being insulted ('nd especially Kria' said Swaym in a very low voice but Sharon didn't hear that)...aur isi liye who itna gussa hai ke tum uski Best Friend ne aisa kuch kiya jo usse bilkul pasand nahi

Sh: lekin maine jo bhi kiya I just did it 4 him so dat he can win..

S: i know that.. but Sharon its not always abt winning nd tum khud socho usse bura kyun nahi lagega'. aftr dat speech jo kuch bhi hua.. d slap incident nd Rey misbehaving wid Kria nd all.. he is hurt coz uss ke doston ne usse baat chupayi.. n usse pata bhi nahi tha ke Kriya ne usse slap kyun kiya.. it is kyun ki kriya soch rahi thi ke tum ne jo kuch bhi kaha speech mein who sab Rey ke keh ne par kaha'. nd its all becoz he trusted u guys especially u Sharon.. i hope tum samajh rahi ho jo bhi mein keh raha hun..

Sh: but ab mein kya karoon???? he does not even want to c my face

S: luk Sharon Rey ne jo bhi kahan woh gusse mein aakar kaha'. jitna mein usse samajh paya hun, he can never break up his friendship wid u.. he needs u everytime.. he's jus angry.. give him sumtime.. but till den agar tum kuch kar sakti ho toh it is to mend up everything.. rone se kuch nahi hoga.. u need to try n fix everything..

{After thinking a lot over Swayam's words}

Sh: u knw wat, u r rite.. i'll try n fix this up as soon as possible..

(Said Sharon sitting up straight and wiping off her tears)

S: u okay now??

Sh: yes much better..( Sharon said with a weak smile n Swayam got up to leave )

Sh: Swayam'. thnx

(Swayam smiled nd was abt to leave but turned bak nd bend to Sharon wid a chocolate in his hand)

S: I thot ke tum depressed hogi toh dis one's for u... :P

Sh: Swayam tum. . .

S: ahhh dnt worry dark choclate hai low calories.. :) nd yaha andhere mein toh koi nahi dekhega tumhe khate hue .. soo its ok.. :P

(Sharon smiled nd took d chocolate saying him thnx.. thanks for being there.. nd Swaym leaves frm there)

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Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago

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~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Swayam then meets Kria on the way ...

K: hey Swaym kya hua?? is she alrite now?

S: yeah much better but Rey kahan hai??

K: patha nahi maine tho sab jhaga dekh liya but abhi tak nahi mila

S: Rey ke samjha ne ke liye kuch tho soch na padega

N: u r jus gona walk in to dead end

Swaym nd Kria turns to c who spoke nd dey find Nil nd Vicky cuming towards dem

V: he's rite dude Rey ka gussa saatwein aasman ko chu raha hai

K: kya aap log Rey se milkar aaye ho ??

V: haan.. milkar aaye hain.. thoda better hai woh ab.. n he's ok wid us now but wid Sharon I dnt think so

N: xactly he's sooo pissed off wid Sharon

S: guys dats it hume kuch toh karna padega..

V: sirf kriya hi usse theek kar sakti hai..

K: Mein kaise??

N: Tumhari baat hi sunta hai woh aajkal..

S: (Smiling ) Haan yeh toh mein bhi notice kiya hai.. :)

(Every1 is smiling n Kriya's kinda feeling happy abt it)

K: toh theek hai.. agar aap sab ko aisa lagta hai.. toh mein baat karunge Rey se.. but woh hai kahan??

V: shayad ghar chala gaya hoga ab tak..

K: chalo theek hai.. mein karti hun kuch..kal college mein milte hain to make some plan.. :P

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(Rey is driving through the empty streets heading back home (thinking abt d tag Kriyaansh) when he heard his favorite song being played on the radio which made him think about his baat-cutter. He stopped the car n pumped up d volume and got out of the car into the empty street where one or two rickshaws were passing by.. he den started dancing on this song n right then it started raining.. {Ab baarish toh karwani hi thi na.. haina?? }

{A very humble Request guys.. Please listen to the lyrics of the song carefully n think abt the scene. May be u can skip watching video part n can save that to view it later. Just feel the lyrics. Hope u like it.. Its one of my favourite's n hopefully Piyu can make a VM on this}

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LGGhgqNtyRk

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LGGhgqNtyRk[/YOUTUBE]

Rey felt even better dancing in d rain.. the song felt like was speaking out all his emotions..he then found a long stick on d ground and picked it up and started dancing around with it imagining Kria..OMG was he really imagining her or was she for real n even his imagination seemed to be sooo real that is what love has brought out of him and it did feel MEJICAL.

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(The Next day Kria-Swaym-Vicky-Nil meet up in the canteen all sitting and thinking about what should they plan for Rey and Sharon to be friends again)

(Nil ka bulb jalla)

N: guys I know ki dono ko music chala ke dance karne dete hain may be unka gussa thanda ho jaye while dancing and they will be friends again ..

Vicky hit Nil at the back of his head

V: puppets hai kya jo nachayenge.. dono ko nachne ke liye manayega kaun..

(Kria on the other hand remembered the socials day where Rey danced soo rudely with her becoz he was soo angry at her.. wat if he does the same with Sharon that will just make everything worse )

K: Nahiii (shouted out Kria coming out of her thoughts) i mean nahi.. hum dance nahi karwayenge kuch aur socho ..

V: idea!!!!.. I knw I knw...hum na Sharon ko kuch acha gift karthe hai and will say Rey ne diya.. isi bahane se woh Rey se baat tho karegi...

K: Vicky yeh secretly gift dena and all no way.. Rey ko aur gussa aa jayega nd remember dono ko manana hai sirf ek ko nahin..

V: arey secret gifts mein kya burai hai waise bhi woh toh usse milthe rehte hain...

(Said Vicky luking at Swaym who was shocked nd thinking did Vicky really knows that he sends the gifts to Sharon)

S: Kria I dnt think plan kuch kaam karega. u just talk to Rey na.. woh waise bhi tumhari baat kabhi nahi taal sakta.. jus tell him ki Sharon is his Best Friend and how can he do that to his Best Friend..

K: MIL GAYA

N: kaun Jaaddu ?? {LOL.. farah.. M curious to know how did that strike?? }

K: shut up Nilesh idea mil gaya.. guys hum kitne bewakoof hai.. I mean humne yeh pehle kyun nhai socha.. all we have to do is REVERSE PSYCHOLOGY... (Excited Phase mein hai)

S: hmmm yeh maine pehle kyun nahi socha??

K: arey tumhare wajah se toh idea mila hai

S: wat?

(Kria was all hyper nd xcited nd went around the boys explaining her idea (imagine Kria's bg music))

K: socho guys socho.. Rey ke liye Sharon uski Best Friend hai

N: usmein kaunsi nayi baat hai..??

K: beech mein mat bolo nilesh'aur koi bhi agar uske Best Friend ke baare mein kuch bhi bura kahe toh usse bilkul bhi pasand nahi aayega rite?

S: oh so u mean k humein Rey ko ye realise karwana hai ke agar Sharon ke saath kuch bura hota hai toh he can never tolerate it..

K: exactly.. ab Sharon k against koi kuch kahe n Rey kuch na bole aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta rite? Ab bas dekhte jao kaise mein apna 'K' effect dikhati hoon..

(Vicky n Nil r confused with Kria's 'K' effect)

V: Karan johar ki movie dekh kar aayi hai kya??? { Oh man.. this was so hilarious Farah }

N: nahi mujhe lagta hai yeh idea uski movie se hai..

V: guys tum log planning karo mein washroom se hoke aata hoon

(Vicky leaves from the canteen and is walking in the corridor when he meets Sharon)

Sh: Vicky hey tumne woh.. eehh tumne Kria ko kahi dekha?? ya phir Rey ko ??

V: KRIA (screamed out Vicky)

Sh: Vicky y r u shouting mein yahin hun..actually mujhe unn dono se maafi maangni thi iss liye

V: MAAFI( screamed Vicky again) sorry sorry par maafi kis liye?

Sh: jo galti maine ki hai I have to mend it.. and I cannot afford to loose Rey...

Sh: toh have u seen them??

V: haan dekha na.. woh actually Kria ne kaha tha k woh washroom ja rahi hai.. J

(Sharon was about to leave)

V: but uske baad who usne kahan woh canteen jayegi

Sh: ok fyn mein canteen jati hoon

V: NAHII I mean tum abhi kyun canteen ja rahi ho..go check d washroom.. phir canteen aa jana..

Sh: fyn (Sharon was leaving when she turned bak to Vicky) ek sec usne tumse kaha??

(Vicky felt he hit a stone if Sharon comes to know then he will be dead)

V: who maine usse Swayam se baat karte hue sun liya tha..

Sh: yeah ok I'll c u later

(Before Sharon would stop again and ask him further questions he made a run to the canteen.)

N: Vicky kya hua tu toh washroom gaya tha na?

V: haaann

N: kya haan...bhooot dekh liya kya??

V: Sharon

N: wat Sharon bhoot ban gayi?? :P

S: shut up Nilesh.. Vicky tu pehle paani peeh aur phir bata..

V: Kria.. Sharon aa rahi hai yahan..

K: arey dats perfect chalo hum plan A start karte hai..

V: nahii who tumse maafi maangne ke liye aa rahi hai

K-S-N: WAT???

V: haan maine usse kuch waqt ke liye divert kar diya hai but who kisi bhi waqt aa jayegi yahan..

N: I dnt believe this..

S: I don't believe this at all..

K: r u sure Vicky??

V: abhi abhi mil kar aa raha hoon yaar

K: Vicky do one thing tum jhake Rey ko yahan lekar aao jaldi..

(Vicky runs off to get Rey and jus then Simmi n Rinni enter the canteen. Kria gives sum work to Nilesh and he slowly moves out of the canteen without Rinni-Simmi noticing)

(Vishaka-Neha-Bharat-Amar enters the canteen and sits wid Kria and Swaym who were busy staring at d entrance of d canteen)

N: Swayam aur Kria we all here.. then tum dono ke eyes y on d door??

K: nahi bas aisi hi..

(After few minutes enters Sharon and Simmi nd Rinni say hi to Sharon but she just shows her hand and tells them to wait and moves ahead towards Kria. Kria and Swaym as soon as Sharon entered jumped up from their seat)

Sh: Kria mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai..

The rest of the weaklings get up in anger ready to fight Sharon's words

Sh: I actually wanted to say..SORRY.. to all of u..

V-N-B-A-R-Si: WAT??

Outside the canteen Vicky pulls Rey in

V: chal na tu mera bhai hai kitne dino se saath mein mil kar khana nahi khaya..

(But when Rey enters he smells a different atmosphere in the canteen and his eyes shift to Sharon and the Weaklings)

Sh: look I just wanted to apologize for insulting u d other day..

Neha sat down all shocked

N: not believing Neha's ears..

Sh: toh tumne mujhe maaf kiya?

K: eh Sharon its ok.. purani baat ko bhulana hi behtar hota hai.. M glad u came up..:)

Sh: thnx Kriya..

(Sharon felt relieved she has fixed half the problem and now it was time to talk to Rey. She turned arnd and saw Rey standing in the entrance n she wanted to speak to him but he just ignored her and went and sat on the other side. Sharon went over to sit with Rinni-Simmi)

(Nilesh is outside the canteen and thumbs up the boys behind him and goes inside and sits with Vicky-Rey)

(Few dazzler boys n girls enter the canteen and start talking loudly)

D1: Arey tune suna Rey broke his friendship with Sharon

D2: acha hua waise bhi Sharon is soo full of herself..she deserves it

D3: I knw tell me abt it..she's sooo mean and rude and soo bitchy

(Sh-Si-R were all shocked hearing all this...on the other hand Rey was getting furious hearing d foul comments on Sharon)

D4: jo bhi hua acha hua waise bhi Sharon se baat karne jao tho aisa lagta hai ke woh tumhe kha jaayegi..she's so arrogant man..

(Rey jus cudnt take it anymore he got up from his seat to face those ppl who went all mum when they saw Rey)

R: so u guys were saying sumthing..abt Sharon

D4: well jo bhi kahan sach hi toh kaha hai na..Sharon is so-

Rey raise his hand to stop the guy from saying anything further

R: enuf.. aaj keh diya next time better be careful..

(Kria came up to Rey)

K: kya bura kahan inn logo ne jo bhi kaha sach hi toh tha..

(Everyone was shell-shocked of what was going on)

R: Kria jus stay out of dis.. u dnt knw Sharon...

(Rey cud not believe Kria was pulling this matter)

K: nahi achi tarah se jan gayi hoon Sharon ko

R: kya janti ho tum uske baare mein?? u guys dnt knw anything.. I know k woh aisi kyun hain.. nd I totally understand her.. woh jo bhi karti hai she does it all for her friends.. uske tarike galat honge but she always thinks the best for her friends..

K: acha toh phir aapne kyun friendship todi??

R: gusse mein tha I did'nt mean it..

(Rey said in anger and Kria smiled and was happy that she finally succeeded. She gave Sharon a gesture to come n talk to Rey)

Sh: Rey I'm really sorry plz I really did'nt mean to plz forgive me

(Every1 was waiting for Rey's reaction. Rey smiled and said)

R: Sharon don't.. ye avatar waise bhi tumhe suit nahi karta..and tum hamesha meri Best Friend thi aur hamesha rahogi. .no one can change that not even me.

(Rey hugs Sharon)

R: plz next tym aisi galti mat karna and never break my trust again..

Sh: pakka promise Rey .. NEVER..!!!!!!

(All the dazzlers started cheering and they all went for a group hug. While Kria watched them happily smiling. Rey was into a group hug but looking only at Kria. Rey thought that Her smile suggested that it was her plan to get him n his friends together. He smiled back and gave a small gesture to appreciate what she had done for him n said thanks in his mind. Clear signs that she also feels something for him.. :P)

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That's all for now.. I hope u guys liked it as much as i n Farah did preparing this fr u.. it took us almost 3 days to prepare all this.. i hope our hard work n love for D3 pays off..

PS: Farah had a huge role in making this post possible. I hope she will be there with me in the coming posts as well so that v can create MEAGIC just like this.. :) :)

Please post your long long Comments n suggestions so that we get motivation to do even better.. :P

Thanks for Reading...!!!!!!!!
~~~ Mick N Farah ~~~

Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 13 years ago

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princess258

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

wow its owsum owsum linesss... its wonderful ...

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farah sharmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

WOW colour mein kitna acha lag raha hai😳 nd now dat i read it in one go all of it...its AWSUM😃...arey mera naam itna bhara bhara kyun likha😆...hope every1 likes it😳