Arhi FF : Intruders of the Heart~Chap 8 Updt pg32.

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: nottieangel
amazing!!!!!!
pls continue and send me a PM!!!😃

Thank youuu so so much notttieangel !!!!!!!😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
i just read ur ff and it is awesome

Thank you😃 Btw I love Aamir Khan as well. Fanaa❤️

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: lara3110
Superb. Loved every bit. Arnav murdered Shyam with words. 😃

Lara hun😃 Always a pleasure to hear from you. I'm glad you liked the choice of words. I wanted words that were somewhat able to knife open that slimy snake 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: parul-fan
Awesome pm me when u update plzz

Thank you so much parul-fan. I love parul too 😃

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Haniibee
WOW!!! I read the whole thing in one go and so far in 6 parts you have given us a towel wearing Khushi and Arnav, total ownage of Shyaam (hahahaahahah) and a hot kiss!!!!
GOD WOMAN!!!!

This FF is so good that if you don't update soon I will pee my pants! Seriously! I am ADDICTED!!!!!!!!

Please PM me if you update again!

Lotsa Love!

Haniibee you are so sweet 😳 lol please no peeing. I don't think I have toilet paper handy😆 Plus that jobs is reserved for Shyam 😉 You're such an angel and I hope I don't disappoint you. WOMAN I would love to hear more about you and more from you so keep commenting 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: meenaluma
the ff is superb pls add me to the pm list

Thank you so much Meenaluma 😃

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Juicee_Sushie
Wow love your FF...just read all of it to Chap 6!!!!

It's HOT HOT stuff, fantastic, please update very soon!!!!

😆 lol HOT for Arhi and very very COLD for Shyam Babua 😆 Thank you so much and I hope all 6 chaps pleased you 😳 Thank you hun😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
👏whoa...soooperb...
loved it to the core...😉...
pls pls pls pls pls pls pretty pls PM me wen u update nah...

~sam⭐️

Hi Sam😃 A pleasure to make your acquaintance in this virtual world😆 Thank you for your comment 😳

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Shuveniya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: zafi
Wow, i hope something like this does happen on the show.👏⭐️ they already have feelings for each other, then they find out about shayams evil ways. Decide to get married to protect their families and then they have hot kisses and steamy nights☺️ then they figure out how to deal with shayam.😡you write so well, they should hire you as a writer on the show. Way to go.Please continue soon. Can't wait. Your effort is much appreciated.

Zafi!!!😳 You humble me with your sweet words . It leaves me wanting to write more . Thank you so much. If I was the CV, there'd be a lot more steamy ARHI and ALOT less Shyam !!!😃 I guess we'd all do that no?😆 Keep commenting hun and your effort in doing so is equally appreciated it 😳