Fanaa...A SaJan SS!! updted (01/01/13) pt 8

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: mars14

hey radhiii [Hey bakri]
firsltyyy happpyyy me firsttt😆 [hehehhe first me i posted ss loll]
congooo janiii [thnk u so much jaaniii]

[omg thnk u so much for pic n thnksss a ton...]

secondly i love its tilte...FANAA.omg...i loved it seriously...😳
[even i love this title... n story is on our sajan 's fship n they will fanaah
for eachother...]

thridly ff based sajan friendshippp...🥳
[yahjhhh]
u r rocking radhiii...
[aww thnks jaan]
reading the whole update...i was in tears...😭
[awww muje laga tu khush hogi... kahi ye khushi ke to aasoo nahi the...???]
sach mein it was fablous...😛.

u described sajan friendship...❤️...
[yahhh]
swear specchlesss...😛
[itna sab bolne ke baad speechless dats gus lolll]
loved gunjan samrat a lottt❤️
[i also love them...]
no wordsss😛
[itne sentenses likhne ke baad ab kya words bachenge lolll]
just perfecttt and januableee😊
[wo to haiii]
last scene was really emotional one...😭...
[wo bhi to haii lolll]
loved classroom scenes......loved our sajan moreee❤️
😍
[heheheh our sammy made this loll]
n turly i said i had never read such an awesome part before...😍...!!!!!!!!!!!
[e lo... koi baat nahi ab padhegi...]
no words...want to say so much...but there are no words to descibe...👏👏
[again no words bt i will nt repeat my sentense lolll ita kent ke baad bhi
abhi tuje kuch kehna haii loll n still u have no words loll u r great bakti loll]
how much i loved this one...

and seriously

and

and for ur this ss

[thnksss]
loveee u jani [me too u...]
u rocksss [awww]
it was mindblowing,amzing,rocking,superbbb😉[thns]
and yeah plsss conitnueee sooon[going to updt just nw///]
seriously cant waittt😳then dont wait lolll
love
meri [Radhu...]

oh han sabsey imp baaat...add me in pm list...aur sab sey pheley mjhey pm karna😆 []ye p.s. baaki reh gaya tha lolll/////
and lastly again i loved ittt
continue sooonnn

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Hey frnds Radhu here... here is the nxt part
njoy it.. n its my story to mystry to hogi hi lol..

PART 2

After sumtimes she came out of library n was
going to the class...
n saw Samrat was coming towards her
.he came n hugged Gunjan..n Gunjan too hugged him...
his hug was saying dat he was nt well..
he want to talk to her... he want to share wid
her... he needed her...

"Samrat ghar chale ??" Gunjan asked... Samrat
broke the hug..

"kyu kya hua tabiyat to thik haii na tumhaari
tum class bunk karna chahti ho...???"
Samrat tried to cheer her up...

"nahi wo bas thoda headache ho raha haii..."
Gunjan knw him very well...

"ohkk chalo chalte haii..." Samrat said without
any arrgument as he too wanted to go to home..
bt without his best friend he couldnt go...
n he knw Gunjan was doing all these for only him.

They sat in car.. n Samrat was driving car...
Gunjan put CD n played... n songs playing...

" Ek bhi accha song nahi haii..." Gunjan said
to grab Samrat's attension... bt didnt get any
attensuion...

"Samrat teri choice itni kharab kab se ho gayi..."
as soon as he heard Gunjan... she looked at her.

"tu kehna kya chahti haii??? "

"yahiii kki teri choice bhi tere sade huye chehre
jaisi sadi hui haiii..." Gunjan said while pointing
at his face...

"oh hello... is chehre par to harr ladki mar
mitne ko taiyaar rehti haii..." Samrat said
'while looking at her...

"kya kare Samrat Shergill ka charm hi kuch aisa
haii ki koi bhi resist nahi kar sakta..."
Samrat added n smirked ...

"acchawww samne dekh kar drive kar agar accident
ho gaya to tu khud apni sakal nahi pehchan payega.."
Gunjan said n laughed...

"tu to aise baat kar rahi haii jaise tuje acchi
driving aati ho..."

"haa aati to haiii meine humari car drive ki
haii..."

"kaun si wo khataara car jo 25 saal pehle tumhaare
papa ne kharidi thi..."

"haa wahi car samje so muje driving aati haii..."

"ek minute Chashmish.. tumne wo car drive ki thi??
magar kab... jahaa tak mein janta hu tumhaare papa
tumhe wo car touch bhi nahi karne de te... to
fir tumne kab drive ki?????"

"wo ek baar papa bussiness ke liye out of town
gaye the to wo car ki keys ghar par bhul gaye the
to ek baar chalayi thi... aur driving to tumne
muje sikhayi thi..."

"wah Chashmish ne chance maar hi diya kyu???
sher ke muh me hath daal ke lol..."
Samrat said n laughed...

" Samrat plzz aisa matt bolo..."

They reched home n Samrat n Gunjan came out of
car n walking towards door...

"to kya bolu tere papa ki to mein...kitna khadus
haii yaar... jab dekho tab tuj pe chillata rehta
haii teri har ek baat se usse problem hoti haiii
jab dekho tab tuje kosta rehta haii... naa wo
khud tuje pyaar karte haii na teri mom ko karne
dete haii...pata nahi har waqt kyu itna tumse
gussa rehte haii..." Samrat said n entered home..

"tum jaante ho Samrat ki papa aisa kyu karte haii
unhe hamesha se hi ek beta chahiye tha... aur
unke ghar beti aayi...aur beti sirf boj hoti haii"
Gunjan said with broken voice...
n Samrat noticed it..

"Hey Chashmish tum fir se ...mein hoo na tere
sath hamesha.. so dont wry..."

"tum ho is liye to aaj tak mein uss ghar mein hu
warna papa to muje kabhi bardast nahi karte..."

"aur mein tumhaari wajase... warna tum bhi jaanti
ho ki muje bhi is ghar me rehna accha nahi lagta
jaha love aur care ke siva sab kuch milta haiii..."

Samrat said bitterly...n ordered Servet to bring
juce...

"Samrat hum kyu fir se apni baaten kar rahe haii..
accha ye bataao kya hua????"

"kya kya hua???" Samrat asked...

"Samrat college me kuch hua kya???i mean tum aise
hi aa kar hug nahi karte..."

Samrat sat on sofa... n became silent...
n Gunjan too sat beside him...

"Chashmish wo.." Samrat said n again stopped...

"Sanjana ne kuch aisa puch liya kya???" Gunjan said
n Samrat turned n surprised ...

"tumhe kaise pata chala ki Sanjana,, i mean..."

"wo mujse hi tumhaare baare me puch rahi thi...
wo tumhaara interview lena chahti thi... "

"wo aayi thi... meine use mana kiya ki mein koi
interview nahi deta... par wo kehne lagi ki uski
job ka sawal haii... is liye maine usse kaha ki
thik haii wo mera interview le sakti haii...
fir usne mere baare me pucha.."

Flashback...

"to MR. Samrat Shergill.. aaj tak aapne apna koi
interview kyu nahi diya??? jab ki aap ke saare
family members koi na koi success ke news me
rehte haii...???" Sanjana asked...n started to
record it...

"i dont like it.. muje sirf apni life simple se
jeena accha lagta haii... aisi liye" Samrat replied

"aur bataaiye aap ko kya accha lagta haii aur kya
nahi..??"

"as a shergill... we love success...aur muje
apni personal life discus karna accha nahi lagta.."

"ohkk sry ab jyada personal questions nahi puchungi
bas sirf ye bataiye... aap ke paas sab kuch haii
paisa daulat shourat name royality sab kuch to kya
kabhi aap kuch miss karte haii...???"

"no m Shergill so we have everything..."

"ohkk last one aisi koi baat ya koi secret jo koi
naa janta ho...????"
as soon as Sanjana asked this question...

" i Dont want to continue this... plzz go..."

"plzz Mr. Shergill.. "

"i said gooo.." Samrat shouted...
n snatched tape n broke it down... Sanjana
afraid n left frm there... n everyone was looking
at samrat...

Flashback...

"Samrat plzz calm down... "

"kaise calm down karu Chashmish... i just cant
forget it... i cant..." Samrat said n tears
started to fall down frm his eyes...

"Samrat tuje pata haii jab bhi hum kisi chiz ko
bhul ne ki koshish karte haiii na to wo hume
aur yaad aati haii humare aur karib aane lagti haii
aur dhire dhire humare dil aur dimag me beith
jaati haii... tum plzz wo jo kuch bhi hua haii usse
bhul ne ki koshish matt karr...usse yaad hi matt
karo... kyunki bhul ne mein aur yaad na rehne mein
bahut bada fark hota haii...usme teri koi
galti nahi thi... plzz" Gunjan said n hugged him
for his comfort...

"Samrat its 7 years nw... usse yaad bhi matt karr..
usse apne dil dimag mein mat beith ne do...aur ye
bata... ghar aaye guest ko kuch puchega bhi ya
aise hi bitha kar rakhegaaa...???"
Gunjan said while broking hug...n wiped his tears

"Chashmish tu nahi hoti to mera kya hota..???"

"waisa hi haal hota jaise tum nahi hote to mera
hota..." Gunjan said n both laughed..

"Chal tere liye sandwich bana deta hu..."

"oh to MR. Shergill ko meri sikhayi hui sandwich
yaad bhi haii????"

"aur nahi to kya u knw wt m sharp student..."

"yahh i knw is liye exams me itne acche marks
aate haii nahi???" Gunjan asked teasingly...

"Chashmish tu ghum fir se mere marks par kyu
aati ho yaar...jaise tu basket ball match me mere
basket jaisa bada sa zero ho waise hi me studies
me teri maths ka zero hu... so we are equel
in ur maths n we tied in my match..."
n both went to kitchen... n Samrat took bread..
n tomato.. n all stuff...

"wah kya explaination haii..." Gunjan said
n sat on counter beside stove...

"Chashmish wo to mein hu hi taarif ke kabil..."
Samrat said in his style...

"show off... accha ye batao tumhaare mom dad
kaha haii???? Gunjan said n asked.. as no one at
home..

"Chashmish ye bhi koi puchne ki baat haiii..
of course dad apne bussiness trip pe aur mom bhi
unke sath party attend karne..." Samrat said
sacractally...

"ohhh n daadi aur daadu.????"

"wo Bua unhe America le gayi apne ghar... wo waise
bhi wahi rehte haii...aur mein hamesha ki tarah
tere sath... jab bhi koi mere baare me puchta haii
to wo log unka all time favourite answer de dete
haiii ki Samrat... wo uske liye to Gunjan haii
na wo Samrat ko sambhal legi..."

"to mein hu naa fir tu kyu chinta karta hai.."
Gunjan said coldly...

"tu haiii is liye to ab tak is ghar me hu warna ghutan
si hoti haii muje is ghar mein... warna pyaar aur
care kya hoti haii wo to muje kabhi pata hi nahi
chalta..." Samrat said n gave sandwich to Gunjan..

"kaisi lagi???" Samrat asked.. as Gunjan ate first
bite...

"superb tu naa ek kaam kar choppati par sandwich
ka stall kar le bahut chalega..."
Gunjan praised.. n laughed..

"haa ye thik rahega kam se kam ek aam insan ki life
to ji sakunga... warna hamesha yai hota Samrat
hum SHergill haiii hume ye nahi karna chahiye
wo nahi karna chahiye... hume aise bodyguard ke
bina bahar nahi jaana chahiye... aise bahar stall
par khana nahi chahiye... u r Shegill made dance
everyone on ur fingure...we Shergills are king n all..
n bla bla..." Samrat mimicked his dad'...
n laughed...

" u knw wt Samrat sab log tere jaisi life jeena
chahte haii ... like king..."

"haa kyunki unhe pata nahi haii na ki is life mein
koi life nahi hoti... sirf paisa aur show off hi
hota haiii n more over rules n restictions of
high society...not less then hell..."

"Samrat itni bhi nafrat nahi karni chahiye...wo jo
bhi haii jaise bhi haii haii to tumhaare apne naa??"

"kash harr koi teri tarah hota..."Samrat said
n smiled..

just then Gunjan's cell rang...

"Hello papa..."

"haa thik haii abhi aati hu..."
she cut the call...

"Samrat mein Chalti hu papa ne muje ghar bulaya
haiii" Gunjan said with fear...

"mein tumhe drop kar deta hu... " Gunjan nodded
as she knew only Samrat can save her frm her
father...

they reached Gunjan's house.. Gunjan quickly came
out of car n entered in her home... n saw her
father was fuming in anger...n Samrat knew her
dad will nt tell her anything to her infront of
him.. so he also parked the car..

IN HALL

"aa gayi??? kaha thi ab tak??? kitne paise udaaye
aaj tune????? aur ye sab kya haii ha???
Gunjan's dad showed her a letter...

"teri college se aaya haiii fees nahi bhari haii
naa... is baar tuje scholership nahi mili kya???
aur agar nahi milne wali ho to ghar beith jaana...
meine to pehle hi kaha tha ki mein teri padhai pe
ek paisa bhi nahi kharch karne wala... ladki ho
kal sasural chali jaao gi.. agar beta hoti to
muje kuch kamaa kar deti tu kya degi muje...
mere paas teri padhai ke liye na pehle paise the
na ab haii... samji tu beith jaa ghar par..."
Gunjan's dad said in anger n Gunjan was crying...
n Samrat was listening all these frm door...
Gunjan ran to her room...
n Samrat came in...Gunjan's dad saw him...

"Are Samrat tum kab aaye.. kaise ho..?? tumhaare
parents kaise haii??"

"ji uncle sab thik haii..."

"are beitho na khade kyu ho???"

"nahi uncle wo Gunjan se kuch books leni thi.."

"Samrat tum to jante ho ki Gunjan ko ab padhai ka
shokh nahi raha... aur is baar to wo muje keh rahi
thi ki usne bahut padhai karli ab nahi karni hai..
meine samjaya par nahi maani wo... to ab to uske
paas books bhi nahi hogi..."Gunjan's dad lied
n hearing this Gunjan's mom socked n Samrat was
hell socked.. as they knew FOr GUnjan Study is
everything... her life...

"uncle mein Gunjan se mil kar aata hu.."

"haa beta tum uske bahut acche dost ho aur usse
miss bhi bahut karoge mil lo usse..."
Gunjan's dad saw face concern.. n Samrat left
n went to Gunjan's room...n saw her she was
packing her all books in a box... Samrat felt
really bad... n she couldnt see his Chashmish in
pain...Gunjan felt sum1's presence at door...
she looked up n saw Samrat was standing at door...
she got up frm her bed...

"are Samrat tum gaye nahi...??"Gunjan asked..
n Samrat walked towards her... n envelope her
in his strong arms...n held her tightly to let
her knw dat no matter wat he was always with her...
Gunjan couldnt control anymore n cried her heart
out...n Samrat let her cry.. as much as she wanted..
after sumtimes she broke the hug...

"Samrat wo ab muje aur nahi padhna.. to ab mein
in books ka kya karungii... to ek kaam karr..
mein isse pack kar deti hu.. tu le jaa.. tere kaam
aayegi ..." Gunjan said with broken voice...
Samrat snetched book frm her hand... n stared at
her...

"plzz Samrat agar books mere samne rahegi to muje
baar baar padhne ka mann karega... jo ab mein nahi
kar sakti..."

"tere sapne ka kya Chashmish jo tune dekha haii.."

"sapna...ab koi sapna nahi Samrat...papa muje
padhai ke liye kabhi paise nahi denge.. aur is baar
scholership bhi nahi mili haii...mera sapna toot
gaya Samrat toot gaya... aur sath sath Gunjan bhi
toot gayi..." tears were streaming frm her eyes..
n broke down n sat on bed...

"sayd Gunjan toot sakti haii...kyunki usse aisa
lagta haii ki uske sapne toot gaye... par meri
Chashmish... Samrat ki Chashmish kabhi nahi toot
sakti... wo to hamesha Samrat ko sikhati hai na
ki khud par trust karna chahiye... ki sab thik
ho jaayega...agar khud par trust nahi kar sakti
to muj par kar... mein hoo naa tere sath..."
Gunjan put her arms around his waist n hugged him..
n hide her face in his tummy...

"aur agar tum nahi hogi to muje us shukla aur
deodhar sir se bachayega kaun????"
Gunjan broke the hug n smiled...

"ye hui na baat.. aur ye bata... ghar aaye guest
ko kuch puchegi bhi ya aise hi bitha kar
rakhegiii...???"Samrat copied Gunjan n Gunjan
smiled...

"kya khayega????"

"aaj naa bahut kadwi kadwi baaten ki haii... aur
suni bhi... so kyu na kuch meetha ho jaaye..."

"sidhe sidhe bol na ki halwa khana haii..."

"hay kitni jaldi samaj gayi... ab jaa aur jaldi se
banaa de..." Samrat said n Gunjan smiled n shook
her head in no... n left...

as soo as Gunjan left n samrat went to balcony n
close the door... n Samrat made call...

"hello.. Samrat Shergill bol raha hu..."

"ab tak aapne Gunjan Bhushan ki fees kyu nahi bhari?"

"harr bar muje batana na padega aap ko????
kal tak usse scholership ke name se paise mil
jane chaiye... aur usse kabhi pata nahi chalna
chahiye ki wo paise mein deta hu...samje aap...
agar usse pata chala to aap jante ho... mein Samrat
shergill hu.. kya anjaam ho sakta haii..."
Samrat said angrily n cut the call...

"Chashmish meri life support system haii aise usse dur nahi
jaane dunga... usne harr baar mera sath diya tab
jab mere ghar walo ne bhi nahi diya... sabse
jayda muje samja...itna jitna sayad mein kabhi
khud ko nahi jaan paya.. naa mere ghar wale..
wo hamesha mere liye sab kuch karti hai... to mein
to itna uske liye kar hi sakta hu na..."
Samrat thought... n again opened door n went to
room n started to place all book back in place...

TERE DIL ME MERI SAASON KO PANAAH MIL JAAYE...
TERE ISHQ MERI JAAN FANNAAA HO JAAYE...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...

Love'
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

awesome update...loved their friendship, their care for each other

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ekts_dmgmjht

@ekts_dmgmjht

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

AWESOME UPDATE
JUST LOVED SAJANS FRNDSHP
N GUNJIS DAD IS SO RUDE
THANK GOD SAMMY IS HELPING HER
CONTINUE SOON
N THX 4 D PM

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368758

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

WOW!!! Radhu 🤗 Fabulous update loved it...SaJan was so cute & adorable..😍 Love the way they support & help each other...😃 Wish everyone get friends like them..Gunjan's DAD is really so harsh..Poor Gunjan..😭..But atleast she have Samrat who loves & takecare of her..The SECRET SaJan was talking was very suspicious..😲 😕.I like the ending ..the two lines of the song..It was really COOL..😛 Plzz continue soon..

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445892

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

hey radhiii

(last commmetn ka reply awesome tha lol)

teri update mein aik he baat bol bol k thak gaye hon

amaazinggg...rockinggg.loved ittt yarrr

just just loved sajan a lottt...what a friendshippp of sajan...just loved them a lot...

u r rockstar lol...mystryyy cant wait for it...its superbbb...

love

meri

Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

fabulous update...love sajans friendship...cont soon

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Awesome part. Sajans frndship is amazing. Loved it. Thank u so much 4 d pm.

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Nila

@Glowing_Star

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

It was the cutest update. loved it to the core. SaJan care for each other sooo much..

cont soon. thanks for pm.😊

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Fab update
par ye sam ki life ka secret kya hai?????jaldi disclose kar
wowww gunji sam ki life ka support system hai aur vo hi scholarship ke nam par gunji ki padhai sponser kar raha hai
what a frndship yar
par jab gunji ko is bare me pata chalega tab kya hoga?????
hope kuch jayada bura na ho bcoz gunji hate lie & liers
cont soon

kriti

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