Fanaa...A SaJan SS!! updted (01/01/13) pt 8

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sanaayaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

nice update..

plz pm me ur all ff's update 4m nw..

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Grace7391

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Amazing update...

Sajan's friendship is so adorable..

Do continue soon

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rija

@gunurlove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Congratulation Radhi for your new SS...😃

Its Again a very Wonderful story having Gud concept...⭐️

Sajan friendship written fantastically ...sorry for reading it very late...but finally i did read it and found it an awesome story...really liked it a lot👏👏👏👏👏

very first scene of shukla ji and Samrat was very close to original Mjht...😃😳

fabulouse scene...

Sajan friendship is not new for us...but this kind of frndship is quite new...Gunjan belongs to poor family and her Dad is so BAD😡😡😡😡...

but Samrat took very good care of her...similarly Gunjan too behaved with him in the same manners...😳..Superb...👏

thanks for the pm..

now do continue it soon...

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Frst of all congratilations on ur new ss ...iy was superb story line ...loved SaJan friendship ,their care for each other ...cont soon dear n thnx for the PM

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

All Your Stories Pending Naaa :( 😒

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

HEy Frnds hii to all... i knw u all are very angry
with me dat i didnt updt frm long time...n didnt
post any note... sry kaan pakad ke...
actually i moved in mumbai for my further studies
n here i have my own problems... nw i got my
laptop n so able to come online n updt whenever
i get time... sry for the mistake as wrote part
in hurry...

part 3

"Chashmish meri life support system haii aise usse dur nahi
jaane dunga... usne harr baar mera sath diya tab
jab mere ghar walo ne bhi nahi diya... sabse
jayda muje samja...itna jitna sayad mein kabhi
khud ko nahi jaan paya.. naa mere ghar wale..
wo hamesha mere liye sab kuch karti hai... to mein
to itna uske liye kar hi sakta hu na..."
Samrat thought... n again opened door n went to
room n started to place all book back in place...
n heard Gunjan was coming with a bowl...

"wohhh finally Chashmish ke hath ka
halwaaa..." Samrt said with excited
face...n snatched bowl frm her hand...
n started to eat...Gunjan looked at shelf...
n saw all books were placed there...

"Samrat tune books waha kyu rakhe????"
Gunjan asked with slight anger...

"kya Chashmish tu bhi itni intelligent ho ke aise
sawal muje puchti ho of course wo books rakhne
ki place haii to wahi rakhunga na... tumhe itna
bhi nahi pata ..?? pata nahi college me top kaise
kar leti ho??? " Samrat smirked... n teased her...

"Samrat tu janta hai ki ab is baat ka koi fayda nahi
haii fir kyu tu aisa kar raha haii???? Tu janta hai
ki mein kal se college nahi aa paungi to fir tu
kyu...?????"Gunjan said sadly n sat on her bed..
n Samrat placed bowl on side table...

"Chashmish tu bhi naa tu janti hai ki agar tu
College nahi gayi to mein bhi College nahi jaunga
mein College nahi gaya to mein padh nahi paunga
agar padh nahi paaya to examz me fail ho jaunga
agar fail ho gaya to koi muje kaam nahi dega...
agar koi muje kaam nahi dega to mein kamaunga
kaise... agar mein nahi kamaya to apna ghar kaise
chalaunga...aur ghar chala ne ke liye paise
chahiye... to uske liye muje chori karni padegi...
aur agar meine chori ki to kabhi na kabhi to muje
police pakad hi legi...to muje JAILLL
jana padega Chashmish... mein jail me???????
aur ye saara blam tuj par aayega... aur me nahi
chahta ki meri wajase meri Chashmish pe blam
aaye..." Samrat said all these in one breath n
speedily... n Gunjan was looking at him confusingly
n figuring out wat was Samrat talking about...

"Samrat ye sab tu kya bol raha hai???"
Gunjan asked in perplexed tone...

"in short tu kuch bhi soch na bandh kar aur
kal tujhe College aana haii n dats final..."

"Samrat tu jaanta ho ki its nt possible for me...
tu kyu ek baat ko samaj nahi rahe ki ab haqiqut
ye haii ki mere Sapne toot rahe haiii... aur muje
haqiqut me jeena haiii... " Gunjan said angrily
n tears were streaming frm her eyes...

"tuje muj par bharosa nahi haii ??? muj par...???
apne Samrat par..." Samrat shook his head n
continued...

"thik haii... mein jaa raha hu..." Samrat said angrily
n slowly took out his mobile from his pocket n
secretly placed it on bed... n turned... n left
quickly...

Gunjan saw his retriving back... before she could
speak he left...

"Ye to Gussa ho gaya...ab kya karungi????
pehle padhai chhut gayi aur ab Samrat gussa ho
gaya...pllzzz bhagwan ji aisa matt karo mein
apne sapne ke bagair jee sakti hu par apne dost
ko naraz nahi dekh paungi... plzzz bhagwan ji..."
Gunjan was praying god...

"usse jaa kar manati hu... par kaise papa ko
kya bolungi ki Samrat ke ghar kyu jaana haii...
papa to waise bhi gussa haii..." Gunjan was
talking to herself n saw the bowl of halwa was
on side table...

"Samrat ne meri wajase halwa bhi nahi khaya..."
A tear dropped frm her eyes...she picked up bowl
n about to go her gaze land on bed... n saw
Samrat's mobile was there...

"Samrat apna cell bhul gaya...mein de aati hu
aur sath sath uska gussa thanda kar ke aati hu...
waise bhi jab bhi wo gussa karta haii usse headache
ho jaata haiii..." Gunjan thought picked up his
cell... n went to her dad...

"papa wo Samrat apna cell bhul gaya haii... "
Gunjan said in low n soft tone...

"cell bhul gaya... are beta jaao usse de aao...
jaldi me chala gaya to bhul gaya hoga..."
her dad replied in shoft tone... everyone knws
when it comes to Samrat her dad can never be
harsh... as he was nt only Samrat also The Shergill..
n he respect shergills a lot...Gunjan nodded...
n went to kitchen n inform her mom... her mom
smiled... then Gunjan filled a tiffin box with halwa
n took it with her...

AT SHERGILL MANSION...

Samrat came with a small smile...

"Chashmish jarur aayegi... muje manane...
aur meine apna cell bhi waha chhod diya taki use
yaha aane ka reason mil jaaye..."he thought n
smiled...

"kaka ek oil ki bottle mere room me de kar jaao.."
ordered kaka n kaka smiled as he knew who would
come...n Samrat went to his room...

after 30 minutes Gunjan reached Shergill mansion...

n asked servent about Samrat n he told dat he was
in his room... she went to room... n saw he was
playing games in his laptop...

"Samrat..." Gunjan called him... n he looked up
n saw Gunjan was standing at door...n again
make himself busy in game.. n acted as he didnt
see her... or he didnt care... Gunjan smiled seeing
him... n his face... she slowly went to her n sat
beside him... as soon as Gunjan sat beside him
he forwarded his hand to ask to give him sumthing

"jo bhi dene aayi hai wo de..." Gunjan smiled...
n gave his mobile to him... Samrat held it n
again back to his game...

"tujhe kaise pata chala ki mein tuje kuch dene
aayi thi..."

"ab mein apna mobile intetionally waha chhod
kar aaunga to tumhe muje wapas dene aana hi
tha..." Samrat said n laughed... n Gunjan was
socked n glared at him in fake anger...

"haawww... u cheater... muje laga tu gussa haiii
aur mein tujhe manane aayi thi... aur tu haiii ki..."

"are mein kabhi apni Chashmish se gussa ho sakta
hu kya????" Samrat said while hugging her frm
side...

"Samrat tubhi na kabhi nahi sudhroge... hamesha
muje pareshan karte ho... par ab ye mauka bhi
tumhe nahi milega... kyunki ab mein college jo
nahi aane wali..." Gunjan said in soft tone as she
accepted reality...Samrat didnt want to argue
her as he knew wt was store in future for her...

"Chashmish aisa kuch nahi haii sab kismat ki
baaten haii ... haa ye baat alag haiii ki is baar
tumhe scholership nahi mili... par kya pata ab
mil jaaye... u knw tumhaara pata nahi par mein
bahut lucky hu..." Samrat laughed...
n Gunjan too smiled seeing her best frnd...
n heard her cell was ringing...
zhe picked up cell...

"HEllo..."

"haa mein Gunjan Bhushan..."

"kya??"

"sach me?? thnk u... thhik haii mein kal aaungi.."
n she cut the call... n looked at Samrat
happily... she was overwhelmed hearing call..

"Samrat u r right... muje ab scholership milne
wali haii... m so happy... " n hugged Samrat
tightly... n felt content dat she had nt to leave
her dream n also a important part of her life
her best frnd Samrat...Samrat was in double
joy then Gunjan... only he knw how much he was
happy seeing his best frnd happy... he didnt like
her tears...his support system is back nw...
with his assual as always...they broke the hug...

"Samrat is pal agar tune kuch aur bhi manga hota
na to mil jaata..."

"is liye to kuch aur nahi yehi manga haii... tum
nahi jaanti Chashmish muje teri kitni jarurat
hoti haiii...aur uss din ke baad jaise tune muje
sambhala haiii... wo ..."before he could continue.
Gunjan stopped him...

"Samrat... ye kya fir se wahi baat... tu khush
nahi hai kya ki ab muje padhai nahi chhodni
padegi..." Gunjan knw how to divert his mind...
he will forget his worry when he will think about
her...n Samrat smiled seeing her attempt...

"wo to haiii celebration to banta haii.. kya kehti
ho...???"

"aaj nahi kal college me waise bhi raat hone wali
haiii...muje ghar jaana haiii..."

"itni bhi jaldi kya haiii...celebration kiye bina
nahi jaane dunga... aur to aur aaj tumne gussa
bhi dilaya... aur uski wajase muje headache bhi
ho raha haii..."Samrat held her hand... n demanded
Gunjan smiled...

"sabka solution haii mere paas... ye lo halwa...
ho gaya celebration aur headache ki baat haiii
to abhi head massage de deti hu..." she handed
him tiffin box... n looking for oil bottle...

"bahut chaalak haii tu.." Samrat commented...

"tere sath rehti hu na to wo bhi bann gayi .."
Gunjan replied... n took oil bottle...n sat on sofa...
Samrat too went there while eating his fav halwa..
n sat on the floor...Gunjan started his head
massage... n Samrat was cracking jocks while
eating halwa...

then Gunjan left...

At night 10

Gunjan was laying on her bed with a big smile
in her face... she took her mobile... n texted
Samrat...

on other side Samrat was combing his hair in
front of mirror...

***beep*** ****beep****
Samrat saw 1message frm Gunjan he smiled
widely... n opened the message...

:)))))))))))))

Samrat smiled seeing this... means everything
was solved... her parents were agree n alll...
Samrat replied...

Gunjan heard her mobile got msg...
she knew its Samrat's reply... she opened msg...

"dats i want ...:P"
Gunjan smiled widely reading this msg...
n replied...
Samrat was waiting for her reply... n got reply..

"n nw u knw wt I want... tc..."

Samrat read the message...

"yah i knw wat u want ok bye gn sd tc...
n keep :))))))))))))) ;)"
he replied...

"ok .. bt fir bhi dont drink too much ok... n driver
ko sath le jaana... bye...T.C."
Samrat read the message n smiled everyday he
got this msg frm his Chashmish... n he replied

"no i will not take care of my self i knw i have
u fore me to do dat :P...bbye getting late ...
girl no 44 is waiting for me... ;)"
Samrat replied n left for club...
n on other side Gunjan read message n shook
her head n went to sleep in dreamsss...

in her dream she saw sum1 was whispering

" TERE DIL ME MERI SAASON KO PANAH MIL JAYE
TERE ISHQ ME MERI JAAN FANAAA HO JAAYEEE"

in her ear... she smiled dreamily...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...

Love'😉
Radhi.

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 13 years ago

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Gonna Read After Coming Backk From College 🤗 FINALLY You Updateddd . Post Other Storiesss TOOO 😳

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358674

@358674

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!

fantastic update

really nice 👍🏼

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

hey radhi glad to see u it was once again lovely update hon loved it it was pleasure to see sajan's wonderful friendship and bonding they both r each other's support loved samrat's cute nok zok with her now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm