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Posted: 13 years ago

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"You cannot love a thing without wanting to fight for it."

-- Gilbert K. Chesterton

chapter -- 8

Arman was getting ready to return when muskan came….

Arman : " muskan ,teri shonu kahan hai?..

Muskan : "soi hai,thori der mein uth jayegi to tere paas le aaungi."

Arman : " haan,meri flight raat ko 10 baze hai..usey tab tak thora pyar kar lun."

Muskan pleaded : "arman,plz.mat ja na…hum tumhare bina bahut akele hain,sanjiwani bilkul suni pari hai,jaise jaan hi nahi hai."

Arman kept rahul-muskan and their daughter shonu's pic in the bag…"muskan,yahan mai nahi rah sakta..

Muskan (with an angry tone) " keun nahi rah sakta? Kya riddhima hi teri sab kuch thi? hum kuch bhi nahi? Wo to apni life mein apne husband aur beti ke sath khush hai,to phir tu keun apni life aise gujar raha hai? agar usey tujhse sachmuch pyar hota to wo sab kuch chodkar tere paas aa jati,arman pyar kuch sacrifices mangta hai to tu akela hi keun?

Arman : " nahi muskan,riddhima se mai koi sacrifice nahi mangta… usey bahut tang kiya,bahut sataya,bahut rulaya..ab wo sidh ki biwi hai ,mujhse usse kuch nahi chahiye..aur mai akela kahan ,mere sath mera pyar hai..

Muskan(angrily) : ' idiot..pyar ka kya puja karega?? Aarti utarega?? Pyar kar to usey sari duniya se cheenne ki taakat rakh..

Arman smiled.." mera pyar meri puja hi hai muskan..

Nikki came in the room.." pyar puja hai but friends? Kuch bhi nahi?

Arman gave nikki a one side hug ."friends meri jaan hain..kaisi hai nikki?"

Tears rolled down nikki's eyes…"tumhare bina kabhi thik rahi arman? Jab college mein achanak chodkar gaya tab bhi nahi,aur aaj bhi nahi..'

Atul came in.."mat ro nikki,arman kisi ki nahi sunta,ye uske bachpan ki aadat hai..

Rahul entered.." ek basket ki chod,hai na arman?

Arman hugged atul tightly .."kaisa hai champ ? Agli baar aaunga to teri beti se milunga..aur nikki tere bete se bhi…aur unke sath khub masti karunga,khub pyar karunga unhe."

atul : "apni jarurat na ho toh thode hi aayega..selfish man!!

arman bowed down his head as he has done a big crime...rahul saved him from this situation..."chalo friends,baaten waten kar lo aur koi senti talk nahi..mai arman ko wapas launga ye rahul garewal ka wada hai...

muskan patted him : "oyye mere paunjab ke sher, aisa ho gaya to ye kudi teri umra bhar ka gulam...

rahul glared at her with an attitude..."wo to tu pahle se hi hai...

...

nikki,atul and rahul had night duty,so they said goodbye and left for sanjiwani...now muskan was busy with cooking arman's fav dishes...arman was lying on the bed...alone!upset!sad!...again he had to leave his fav place mumbai,his friends,his rishima...a lone tear escaped from his eyes...rishima! his second love! first love was a silly cute angel...who had changed arman's life with her simplicity,innocence and dearness... and second love is a little,sweet sensible angel...but both have the same thing...both made his life beautiful ...whether it was for a while...

"jindagi ke din chahe kitni bhi lambi ho...kuch khushi ke pal hi humey yaad rahte hain,sari jindai nahi..aur wahi pal,wo pal dene wale hi humey yaad rahte hain..saari duniya nahi."

"pappa..."..rishima's voice achoed in his ears...arman closed his eyes tightly but couldn't control his tears... ."sidh kitna lucky hai itni pyari beti pakar...of course sidh bahut lucky hai,arman ne jis riddhima ko paane ke liye itni ladai ki,sidh ne hi usey paya...

a lonely darkness was scattered the entire room,as the same arman's life.. arman was trying to control his tears but they were coming uncontrollably to make wet the pillows...suddenly he heard a sweet, kiddish voice..."pappa..pappa...

arman opened his eyes with these words..."papa nahi shonu,uncle..papa to..

his tongue sticked to see who is in front of him!!! riddhima!! basket !! riddhima was standing with rishima in her arm!...

"now they were face to face...just 1 or 2 foot steps away!!... both were kept silence!!just wanted to say so many things….just wanted to do a lot complaints to each other..just desired to remove each others grievances. But both lips betrayed at that time….both were making complaint, resentment, love in their heart… both were narrating their 2 years journey without their love ,but in their heart…"

Both were kept silence!! Desiring in heart to spend their life just like this position,standing in front of their love, face to face….looking at each others eyes only their own image !!…

suddenly rishima stretching her little arms..."pappa...lub u...

arman's lips parted..."love u rishima...

riddhima : "iska naam rishima nahi armina hai...

arman (with a guilty face) :" mai ja hi raha hun bask...errr...sorry riddhima...mai yahan aana nahi chata tha,bas rishima ke liye...

riddhima ( in a frigid voice) ..." tumne suna nahi arman,iska naam armina hai...arman ki beti...

arman stunned to hear this!!...he was so excited that gripped riddhima's soldier strongly… .."kya kaha !! meri beti!!"

riddhima breathed :" chodo mujhe..dard ho raha ..

arman moved his hand quickly .."oh sorry mrs. modi...lekin ye..rishima!...meri!!!...

now riddhima gave him a cool,piercing look.. : "haan, mrs.modi ko arman mallik ka gift...

arman looked at the ground..."sorry mrs.modi...

riddhima laughed like a mad..."maaf kar dun? bada aasan hai na maafi mangna..sorry kahna?ok,i will forgive you ..agar apna gift wapas le lo...

arman looked at her surprisingly.."kya kah rahi ho!! mai armina ko!! tum iske bina kaise rahogi!!..

riddhima laughed sarcastically.."jo gift meri life barbaad kar de,uske bina mai nahi rah paungi? do you know arman mallik?aaj bhi tum mere aur sidh ke beech diwar bankar khade ho..armina bankar,ek aisa barrier ,jo armina ke rahte kabhi nahi tut sakta…...aaj bhi hum husband wife nahi ban paye..tum shayad aage badh gaye but humey badhne nahi diya...mai aur sidh abhi bhi anjaan bankar ji rahe hain..like a hell life u have gifted me...

riddhima's words were hurting him so badly,he broke down on his knees..."sorry riddhima,mujhe batao mai kya karun ki tumdono khush ho..mujhe batao...

riddhima : "apni beti wapas lo..mujhe sidh ke sath jeene do...

arman (confusingly) :" but sidh,dr.sashank...

riddhima cut his words.."sabko pata hai aur kisi ko koi farak nahi parega..wo khush honge ...unhe armina nahi chahiye…

arman sighed to see armina's cute face,who was unable to understand anything and waiting for her papa, showing her dimples...

he opposed : "riddhima ..armina ko tumhari jarurat hai...bachche ko papa se jyada ma ki jarurat hoti hai…

riddhima : "but mujhe nahi..she is an unwanted child mr.mallik..aur unwanted child akela hi aata hai,akela hi rahta hai..meri tarah...kisi ko uski jarurat nahi hoti…

arman whined in pain ...: "nahi riddhima,meri beti unwanted nahi hai..wo mera pyar hai...and promise you..mai kabhi bhi usey akela nahi chodunga….mujhe uski jarurat hai,jeene ke liye…

armina uttered..."pappa...

arman stretched his arm..."rishima shona...pappa hain na..

in shifting rishima arman's arm,riddhima touched him!...they shieverd!and at once controlled their feelings...

riddhima held armina's tiny palms,kissed..caressed her cheeks and whispered…"khush rahna meri angel"…and left the room….now arman 's eyes were following riddhima ,sticking armina in his chest...again his love was going away from him!...but now she had given him the most beautiful gift in this world! As armina!!...

hope you liked it...plz. make a comment ,how it is...

love you all
punam

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neelima

@araja1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Awesome part. loved it and thanks for the pm

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Niharika

@Altaira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

i really they get bac together as soon as possible can't see them apart like thiis...gr8 part loved it

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Niharika

@Altaira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

oops double post sorry

Edited by Cutiepie_KSG - 13 years ago

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

oh God! i can't c dem apart! want dem 2gether soon!
can't wait 4 next part!
plz cont asap
thnx 4 pm
luv ya...Sunita:)

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helen_of_troy

@helen_of_troy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

hey punam,

awesome part dear

the bond of friend ship btw them is very nice

armaan is so sweet

i just cannot see tears in his eyes

why is ridz so rude to armaan

ye kitna bhi dhoor ho jaye

ar are eternal

lekin i want them together asap

continue soon dear

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

❤️dharmitha

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Gaurav Shanbhag

@AR_LOVER

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

awesome ff
cont soon
do pm me

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

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thanks a lot dear for your lovely comments...hope you will like this part ...

now the story...chapter -- 9

"GUNAHON KA DEVTA"

"Let man fear woman when she loves: then she makes any sacrifice, and everything else seems without value to her"

( Friedrich Nietzsche quotes)

riddhima's letter to anjali

meri pyari di,

mai riddhima gupta,aapki choti sis,aapki ridhzi'wo bahan jo shayd duniya ke liye ek bojh hai. wo bahan jo kabhi kisi ko koi khushi nahi de payi. Duniya mein aate hi ma ki jindagi barbaad ki,is ghar mein aate hi papa ko tumse cheene'tumhari har waqt yahi sikayat thi na ki papa tumse jyada mujhe pyar karte hain,tumne kabhi kaha nahi,par maine tumhari aankhon mein dekha hai'wo bahan ,jisne tumhare papa ko takleef pahunchai,tumhare best friend ko tumse cheena'

par mai janti hun meri di duniya ki best di hai,jo bachpan se apni choti bahan ko duniyadari ,practical life ko sikhane ki koshish ki'sahi 'galat samjhane ki koshish ki,par mujhe nahi aaya di'sorry di,tumhari ridhzi haar gayi. Usey jisne bhi pyar kiya,usne sabko takleef pahunchai..apne papa ko,ma ko,di ko,friends ko,husband ko and apne pyar ko,jisne uske liye apna sab kuch chod diya,jiska sapna sirf tumahri ridhzi ,uski basket thi..usey bhi hurt kiya.

Di,janti ho mai kuch bhi nahi ban payi. Koi bhi rishta nahi nibha payi.na ek achchi beti,na bahan,na friend,na hi kisi ki patni,na kisi ka pyar aur na hi ma. Maine sabko dhokha diya hai. isliye mai ab kisi rishte mein bandhna nahi chahti.

Mai janti hun di ki sidh mujhe divorce nahi dega aur na hi armina ko apnayega.mai us nanhi bachchi ki jindagi barbaad nahi kar sakti.isliye usey maine sahi place par pahuncha diya hai..uske papa arman ke paas..duniya ki sabse safe place..aur mai janti hun arman usey apni jindagi se bhi jyada pyar dega.

Mai ja rahi hun di,kahan ye mat puchna..aur please mujhe dhudhne ki koshish bhi mat karna. Burna tumhari ridhzi wahan chali jayegi jahan se kabhi wapas nahi aate'I swear'

Aur di,bas ek request'plz. Arman aur mere kisi bhi friend ko mere baarey mein pata na chale..tumhe tumhari ridhzi ki kasam'..

Ps. Maine apne divorce paper par sign kar diye hain. Mai arman ke siwa kisi ki nahi ban sakti.

Love u di
Tumhari ridhzi

Anjali threw the letter in front of dr.sashank and burst out in anger ''''..' mill gaya chain papa aapko? '

Dr.sashank gave her an angry look '... " riddhima to pahle se hi nasamajh hai,apne man ki karti hai par aapko maine samajhdar socha tha.

Anjali (rudely ) : " kisne kaha aapko ,mai samajhdar hun? Agar hoti to us din sidh ke sath ridhzi ki saadi rok na leti? Sab kuch jante hue bhi humne usey ish shadi ke liye majbur kiya'

Sidh : "anji,usne apni marji se sadi ki thi..

Anji :" tum to kuch bolo hi mat'meri bahan ki jindagi ko hell banakar rakh diya'promise mai apni ridhzi ko wapas laungi,but mujhe ab tum dono ka divorce chahiye'jo meri bahan nahi kar payi,wo mai karungi'mai usey ish tarah kho nahi sakti'.

Atul : " anji,chup ho jao'itna gussa tumhare liye thik nahi..'.

Anji fumed in anger'" shut up atul!..mujhe mat samjhao..aur abhi mai apni angel ko lekar ja rahi hun..jab tak ridhzi wapas na aaye,mai is ghar mein nahi aaungi..its my promise'.aur mera mooh kya dekh rahe ho,chalo!!!!!!!'

Atul picked up angel in his arm '"chalo beta,humey masi ko dhudhne jana hai na..'.

Nani (nervously) : "beta anjali,ruk ja'aur sashank,humey police mein report karni chahiye'na jaaane meri bachchi kahan hai!

Dr.sashank: "nahi, police mein report karne se baat failegi, mai us pagal ladki ke liye apni aur apne sanjiwani ki badnami nahi kar sakta.'

Padma(with choked voice) : "ye aap kya kah rahe hain?

Sidh : "papa, kuch to karna chahiye na..

Dr.sashank assured him patted his shoulder."daro mat,mai janta hun wo kuch dino mein wapas aa jayegi.aur uske wapas aate hi tum dono australia chale jana aur wahan apni happy married life start karna.aur ab to armina bhi nahi hai..tum dono bahut khush rahoge,its my promise.

''''''''''''''''''''''''

Bi (surprisingly) : "ye kya kah raha hai arman beta!! Koi apni bachchi ko!!! Is tarah!!!'.

Arman squeezed armina in his chest and kissed her soft forehead '.."nahi bi,armina uski nahi meri beti hai.usne khud kaha hai'usne mei beti ko unwanted kaha bi..promise mai apni beti ko duniya ki sari khushiyan dunga,kabhi bhi ma ki kami mahsoos karne nahi dunga''..

Bi (with teary eyes) : " haan beta,mai bhi tumhare sath hun. Hum dono is gudiya ko princess ki tarah rakhenge'

Arman(in his heart) : "aur bari hokar wo ek famous dr.banegi'dr.riddhima gupta ki tarah'"dr.rishima gupta mallik".

love you all

punam

Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago