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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Awesome part😊😊

finally ar got mariied

loved it ❤️

and thanks for the pm...continue soon😊

and take care:-)😃

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

awe some update...dear take cre of ur self
thank u soo much for eid wishes
lov and take care
maria

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

woww they r married ab... Waiting fr their more nd more romantic momentsss

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

The following 8 members liked the last post...

PoonamT, TANVI_SEXY, KaJen_addiction, crazy4KASH_AR, teenorchid, AR_LOVER, XxDeansChickxX, samades...thanks a lot friends for your precious comments...love u...

now the ...chapter 23

RECAP

his trance broke hearing a sweet ,whispering voice..."arman,kahan khoye ho? panditji kuch kah rahe hain..."

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NOW

"nahi riddhima ,koi kuch bhi kahe ab mai tumhara hath kabhi nahi chudunga.." arman uttered tightened his grip more ...

"dr. arman,ab riddhima aapki amanat hai,koi nahi kahega uska hath chodne ko..bas humara ashirbaad liziye aur apni dulhan ko ghar le jayen..." dr. sashank told in a loud voice and all started to laugh.

"kya karte ho arman,tum bhi na..bilkul pagal ho.." riddhima whispered making her face red tomato.

Now arman got his sense back and looked all around…,friends, guests,senior doctors,sanjiwani staffs... all were laughing to see his condition…and realizing about it now our hero too became red red..showing his charming dimples…flushing his white teeth, whispered.."sorry basket.."

Riddhima gave a sweet,lovely glance at her dulha …her arman! Nothing had changed! Still he was crazy for his riddhima like before..….she assured him with eyes and said in a low voice.."its ok ,chalo ab ashirwad le len.."

"ya sure.." saying it arman got up and first they touched nani's feet and then dr.sashank and padma…they blessed the newly couple..and dr. sashank hugged his ladli daughter tightly ..uttered with choked voice and teary eyes..….."sorry beta,mere kaaran aapko bahut takleef uthani padi..aur mai janta hun dr. arman aapko bahut khush rakhenge..duniya ki sari khushi denge.. wish kabhi ek pal ke liye bhi usse alag na hona padey aapko...may god bless you my child! bhagwan dono ki jodi hardam banaye rakhe.."

Riddhima's eyes full of tears...she said.."sorry papa,maine bhi aapko bahut takleef di..

Atmosphere was made a bit serious type..all had tears in their eyes...then atul tried to handle the situation with his silly joke …." arman aur riddhima..mere bhi paaw touch karo….dono apne jiju ke pair touch karo…

and anjali :" haan ,mere bhi..

arman : "champ! tu mujhse kab bara hone laga? aur anji tum bhi!"

atul shaked his head : "haan,hum barey hi hain na..aur tujhe mai waise hi apni khubsurat sali ko le jane dunga? kimat deni paregi...

arman folded his hand and made antics : " dekh atul..tu kahe to mai lakh baar tere pair chu lun..har roj subah aakar touch karunga,but plz. meri biwi ko mujhse alag mat kar...

all laughed to see his antics and on his words..

muskan .."hero ,tu bilkul nahi badla..

arman : "muski,tu kahan badli hai,abhi bhi rahul ke peeche jutey lekar...

rahul cut arman's words to save his position .."chup arman! sabke samne! tujhe kab akal aayegi?

nikki : "ab to jo akal thi wo bhi chali jayegi,riddhima jo mill gayi..dekhna kaise tightly hath pakadkar khada hai..

everyone's eyes were turned towards arman-riddhima,who kept holding each other hands tightly…

nana told : " thik hai apple,aise hi mazbuti se pakadna…ye to bulbul hai,ud jaye to?

riddhima blushed : "nana,aap bhi?

nana : "haan to!..is apple ko tumhe patane ka tarika mai hi bataun..sab kuch mai hi sikhaun aur aaj thora mazak nahi kar sakta? ye mera janam siddh adhikar hai..

arman (confusingly): "kya kaha aapne janam siddh...

rahul made understand the meaning " birth right ,nana ka birth right hai tumhe tease karna...

arman laughed : "achcha!!!

nana excited..."haan to? mujhe 34 fimey 35 natak ka experience hai..mai sab kuch sikha sakta hun..apple ,tu bhul gaya wo heer-rangha..

nani tried to stop nana.. : " bas! bas! chaliye,ab baaten band...sab aasharibaad karen is jodi ko..

riddhima pouted ; "kya nani,aap bhi mazak kar rahe ho,hum chote bachche hain kya?

Nani held riddhima's ears…"bachche to ho hi,burna koun itne ulti-sidhi harkat karta hai…

Arman warned ;"khabardar nani ji,meri dulhan ko kuch kaha to! Ab kisi ko bhi usey dantne ka haq nahi hai…

Nani made a smack on his shoulder.."usey to dantungi,teri pitai karungi…

Billy came : "chaliye..baki ke function kahtam kar lete hain..

Dr.subhankar and dr. kirti came towards them and gave an envelope…"arman –riddhima,ye humari taraf se..

Arman opened the envelope and took out two tickets of paris…riddhima jumped to see it.."paris!!

Dr.subhankar : "haan,mujhe yaad hai jab sir and padma mom ko hum sabne milkar paris bhejne ka plan banaya tha to arman ne kaha tha , mai bhi paris jaunga honeymoon ko,usey paris bahut pasand hai…tab to nahi janta tha ki ye "usey" humari pyari riddhima hai….

Riddhima : "thanks dr. subhankar and dr.kirti ,and yes..i love paris so much….

Arman : "thanks sir..by the way,kitne baze ki flight hai?

Dr.subhankar : "don't worry,kal early morning ke hi hain,aapne kaha tha na..

All were surprised : "kya!!!!itni jaldi!! Abhi to kitni rashme baki hain…

Arman (making innocent face) : "ya,actually mai aap sab ko aur takleef nahi dena chahta..sadi ho chuki,aap sab tired honge so apne apne ghar jakar rest karein…thanks for attending …

Rahul hit him : "saaley! Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega..hum tired ho gaye ya tu ab humey nahi chahta,riddhima jo mill gayi.

Atul : "do not disturb ka board laga deta apne ghar ke samne to bhi chalta..

Arman : "wo to lagega hi,honeymoon se aane ke baad,mere ghar par….

Their talks made riddhima's cheeks red tint..she looked at the ground to hide her situation…

Nikki :"hayye! Kaise sharma rahi hai dekho! "

Arman : "nahi,ab meri biwi ko sirf mai dekhunga,chalo sab…

Muskan waved her hands..: "hum aise thore hi na jayenge..

Arman : "dekh muski,mere jute chupaye hain to la de de…" maine sabke gifts meri dadima rishima ke paas rakh diye hain,tum sab le lena..and promise sabko pasand aayenge…chalo riddhima..

Riddhima (surprisingly) : kahan?

Arman : "mere ghar aur kahan…mom wait kar rahi hai …

all friends : "wooo!!!!...ab mom ka bahana!!!

Nani : "arey chup! Aise kaise..chalo pahle dinner karo ,tumhare friends bhi bhukhe hain tumhare sath dene ke liye ..phir bidai rashm hogi..

Arman smiled : "ok,nani ji... as you wish...

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AT ARMAN'S HOUSE

Arman and riddhima got out of the car and stopped for a while in front of the house…they glanced at each other lovingly and stepped into the house…their dream house,where they were now going to start their dreamy life,which they had seen in their dreams a lot time, waited for it from years or centuries!!arman had still held riddhima's hand tightly,as if he leaves it for a while,riddhima will be lost….billy in other car,was smiling to see his ammy's madness…..he wished in his heart…"god! Mere bachchon ko kabhi alag na hona pade….har pal dono sath rah sake ab..bas itni bless banaye rakhna…

Ananya welcomed them with aarti and mangal tika…they touched ananya's feet ,ananya blessed them and pulled riddhima in her arm lovingly…she had tears in her eyes…she knew the value of this girl in her son's life…losing her,arman was totally annoyed with his life..offended with everyone…mom-papa,friends,mumbai..and all…now ananya was relieved that ammy will be very happy with life…with his riddhima,his beloved wife…

Arman : "mom,kya soch rahi hain,apni bahoo ko andar nahi le jayengi,thak gayi hai beechari…

Riddhima blushed hearing it…how arman was worried about her!

Ananya : "haan beta,ye to mere ghar ki laxmi hai..aao riddhima beta…apna ghar sambhalo..

Arman : "nahi mom,abhi nahi..abhi to aap hi sambhalo…riddhima ko rest karna hai…

Ananya laughed :"ok beta..mai janti hun….

Arman caught riddhima's hand and moved towards his room saying ..."chalo riddhima ..rest kar lo...

Just then they heard a sweet voice from behind: "riddhima mili to apni rishima ko bhul gaye pappa? Very bad…very very bad!!!

Love you all
punam

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vidu87

@vidu87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

super awesome update

luvd it

cont soon

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

yayyy. Thank God u updated.. Wheee...they are married yayyy. Ab wo saath rahain geee... Loved friends teasing nd armaans possessivenesss...finally she came to her home as mrs armaan mailk.. Awww rishima is so cute. So want AR moments ab. Plzzz ziade se

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Aww! so sweet! finally they r married nd 2gether 4 life! why did u stop there? wanted more :-(( cont asap...waiting 4 some AR romance! thnx 4 pm

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

nice update punam love it:)

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

PoonamT, KaJen_addiction, vidu87, crazy4KASH_AR, teenorchid, AR_LOVER, XxDeansChickxX, samades...thanks a lot for loving and commenting on gunhaon...

now,you are surprised na? how i managed and updated so early...but the main problem is even me too not got the reason updating so early...😃😃😃😃😃...anyways,you read when you can manage...and please give a comments how it is...

RECAP

Arman : "chalo riddhima…

Just then they heard a sweet voice from back : "riddhima mili to apni rishima ko bhul gaye pappa? Very bad…

NOW...(chapter--24)

Riddhima turned and saw that rishima and angel were standing there : "rishima,angel...aap abhi tak soi nahi? Wahan se aaye to bahut time ho gaya..

Rishima : "offo! Mumma! Mai so jati to dadi akele sab sambhal sakti kya? Mai aur angel di ne dadi ki bahut help ki ,hai na dadima?

Ananya (lovingly):" haan bachchon…I love you both….tum dono toh meri pyari pyari angel ho…

Rishima and angel : "love you too dadima…

Riddhima :"aur mujhe?

Rishima : "aap to sabse pyari ho..love you mumma…

Angel : "ya masi….

Rishima held riddhima's hand : "aur aaj aap humare sath rahengi..

Riddhima : "sure beta…

Arman : "arey yaar! Tum dono kahan se aa gayi? Chodo meri basket ko..

Riddhima pleaded :"plz. Arman..kal hum chale jayenge na..

Ananya : "arman beta,waise bhi aaj raat riddhima tumhare kamrey me nahi jayegi,ye rule hai…

Arman (got an idea) : "ok,to kya mai bhi riddhima ke sath…nahi ,means bachchon ke sath rah jaun?mai bhi unhe kal miss karunga na…

Billy : "nahi,bilkul nahi,apne kamre me ja….tu kabhi nahi sudhrega..

Rishima and angel giggled…

Rishima : "pappa wait ,mujhse aapse baat karni hai…

Arman looked at riddhima from the corner of his eyes and sighed…"chalo,aur kisiko na sahi meri beti ko mujhse baat karni hai…

Rishima : "maine itni mehnat ki aap logon ke liye,meri gift dena to aap bhul hi gaye…

Arman came towards her and lifted her chin with his finger : "meri princess ko kya chahhiye apne pappa se?

Rishima : "jor se nahi bol sakti,aapke kaan (ears) mein kahna hai..

Arman took his ear near her…rishima whispered: "mujhe ek golu chahiye..

Arman confused…"ok,but golu!! Ye kya hota hai? koi teddy hai kya?

Rishima whispered : "buddhu! Itna bhi nahi jante? Mere chottu se bhai ka naam hai ye…

Arman said without thinking about it… …"ok!!mill jayegi…

And realizing the meaning , sprang : "kyaaa!!!!!

Rishima giggled : "abhi nahi baad me,mai wait karungi…

Arman : "ok,nani ji,promise you..but 1 saal baad…

Rishima took a deep breathe…"I know…

Riddhima : "kya chahiye beta? Aur arman,wo jo maang rahi hai de do na,itne din baad keun?

Arman smiled : "wo kya maang rahi hai bataunga,but abhi nahi akele mein…

Billy : "I think sabko apne room me jana chahiye burna yahin khade khade subah ho jayegi…

Rishima and angel : "ok,daddu…gdn...

They held riddhima's hand to go their room.riddhima looked at arman who threw a flying kiss secreatly…riddhima blushed and showed her tongue to him…

Arman told through his eyes : "oyye hoyye! Kal iska reply dunga basket!…be ready for it…

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*HONEYMOON *

"phir wahi raat hai,phir wahi raat hai khwab ki
Hmmm..raat bhar khwab me,dekha karenge tumhe"

"arman,dekho,kitna khubsurat nazara hai.."riddhima yelled happily like a kid.

They reached paris a while ago.….and now they were in famous 5 star hotel "RITZ HOTEL".

Arman came towards and hugged her from back.."haan,bahut khubsurat…

Riddhima was looking out of the window..…she uttered.."maine itna khubsurat scene kabhi nahi dekhi..i fell in love with paris arman!

Arman caught her from waist and nuzzled on her neck.."ya ,maine bhi nahi dekha aur itni khubsurat khusboo bhi bahut dino baad wapas mila mujhe !!…missed it a lot...mujhe pyar ho gaya basket phir se…..

Riddhima turned towards him: "achcha! Kisse?

Arman put her locks behind her ears…"meri patni se..meri jiwan- sangini se..meri jaan se…ish duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki se…

Riddhima's cheeks became red tint..she kept down her gaze…

Arman touched the tip of her nose lovingly : "oyye hoyye! Tumhe pata hi nahi basket,tum kitni khubsurat ho…

Riddhima rounded her eyes : "achcha! To aapko pata hai dr.arman mallick?

Arman pulled her in his arm.."thora thora,but pura pata karna chata hun…

Riddhima pushed him.."besharam!!"

But she was unable to free her from arman's tight grip…may be she had a secret desire in her heart to live there forever,in arman's strong arm! The safest place in this world!! waiting for it from a long time… so not tried again and surrendered…

Arman Squeezed her in his chest and whispered …"kya mai apni khubsurat biwi ko apni bahon me le sakta hun? Plz…

Riddhima closed her eyes and shaked her head in yes…arman grabbed her waist and lifted her in his arm..riddhima wrapped her arms around his neck but didn't open her eyes…arman made her sit on a swing which was decorated with orchids…and sat beside her..riddhima kept her head on arman's shoulder closing her eyes..both were kept silence…only feeling each other's proximity…then arman's hand grabbed riddhima's waist and cuddled her.

They both kept silence but a lot words they had to say each other.. to say how they lived their life without each other..how they missed each other,how much they waited for each other…how much dull their life was without each other…how they forgot the whole world after separated from each other…

Riddhima : "arman..

Arman :"haan basket…

Riddhima : "mujhe na paris me bahut ghumna hai..mujhe bahut kuch dekhna hai….

Arman caressed her hair lovingly…"okay,batao kahan kahan jana hai meri basket ko?

Riddhima (excited) : "Eiffel Tower,Arc de Triomphe,Champs Elysees,Chateau de Versailles,Louvre,Musee Cognacq-Jay,Notre Dame Cathedral,Sacre CoeurPlace de Bastille..…"she told in one breathe and was puffing heavily...

Arman was surprised.."basket! tum achanak se french keun bol rahi ho?kab sikha?kahin khushi se pagal to nahi ho gayi? apne arman ko pakar!!!!!!!!!!!

love you all
punam