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Posted: 13 years ago
kahan gayab thi itne din...very lovely part...rishima is soo naughty sahi armaan ki beti hai..loved the part..waiting fr shadi
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Posted: 13 years ago
too cute! Rishima is so adorable!
loved AR moment! wish 2 c some more AR lovey dovey moments!
cont asap
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing as always cutey pie..👏
Just loved the way Rishima talks yaar..she's soo matured..kabhi kabhi lagta hai..woh sabki nani ma hai..😆
& AAR toh as always..lovely ..😳
Thanks for sharing another ossum FF sisi.. luv ya..muaah! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part😊😊loved the way rishima speaks❤️...
waiting for ur next update and thanks for the PM:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends, PoonamT, peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, KaJen_addiction, Jyo_Ksg, teenorchid ...thanks a lot for your lovely and inspiring comments...so sorry for late...hope you will like this part too...thanks a lot...


chapter --20

recap


And the next scene was there , Arman was chasing rishima to drag her ears and she was running away to save herself yelling with a high volume''."nanu,save me!!..your great enemy dr.arman was trying to kill your rishima!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





now


Arman almost caught up rishima ,just then'."dr.arman!! ye kya ho raha hai?"


Dr. sashank was in front of him !!'arman got nervous and rishima slipped from his grip and ran to hide behind his nanu'


Dr.sashank : "kya ho raha hai dr.arman? "

"Ji'wo kuch nahi"..arman uttered controlling his breathe.

Dr.sashank : "aur aap to evening ko aane wale they na'itni jaldi kaise aa gaye?


Arman :"ji,actually..wo ..wo..


Dr.sashank asked him making fake anger '"wo..wo kya?

Arman got more nervous and ''.."ji..wo..i miss you'"..saying this he bit his tongue '."hey bhagwan! Ye kya bol raha hun! Sasurji ko mai kab se miss karne laga!'


He heard a kiddish laugh behind from dr.sashank'.

Dr.sashank (surprisingly) : "aap mujhe miss kar rahe they!


Arman fumbled again'"ji,wo nahi..aapko nahi..wo riddhima..nahi..rishima ko miss kar raha tha'ya'" he shaked his head as if he was not believing his own words.


Dr. sashank : "oh! To aap rishima ko bahut miss kar rahe they..ok'

Rishima came out from behind and said '"nanu..aap bhi na,buddhe ho gaye ho,kaan bhi gaye hain..papa said riddhima not rishima'..


Arman showed her a slap'.


Rishima : "dekha nanu ! bhalai ka jamana nahi raha,maine hi miss riddhima ko dhudha aur mujhe hi ab aapke dr.arman slap dikha rahe hain..


Dr.sashank :"very bad dr.arman'aapne agar meri rishima ko touch bhi kiya to'


Arman said in his heart : "aap ka hi jamana hai sasurji ,pahle apni beti ko aur ab meri hi beti ko touch karne se mana karte hain,had ho gayi '..


Rishima teased him : " papa,kya aap kuch kahna chahte hain? Boliye ,boliye'.


Arman showed her eyes'


Rishima (in a loud voice): "achcha!, toh ye top secreat tha!'sorry ,mujhe nahi pata tha'aap mumma ko dating par le jana chahte hain? ok, mai kisiko nahi bataungi."


Arman whispered: "chupp!! Saitan ki bachchi!!"


Dr.sashank : " no, dr.arman 'ab mai apni beti ko sadi se pahle kahin bhi akele nahi bhej sakta'


Arman cut in the middle .." akele kahan? Mai toh hun'


Dr. sashank glared at him'" hmmm'wahi to dar hai''


Door bell rang''


Dr.sashank : "chaliye'atul,anjali sab aa gaye'


arman : " ji,sir''.



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all were gathered in the drawing room after breakfast. Atul , anjali,rhaul,muskan ,nikki,dr.kirti, dr.shubhankar , riddhima ,nani,padma were sitting on the sofa. Actually nani had invited all friends on breakfast and launch..Dr.sashank on a chair and arman was standing near the window'..glancing secretly at riddhima from there. angel and rishima were sitting on a coach ,continuing their sweet conversation.




Dr.sashank : " to ,sab kuch pakki'sadi next week,'.ganesh chaturthi ke din'ganpati bappa meri riddhima ki jindagi khusiyon se bhar denge...and mujhe ek grand arrangement chahiye'rahul,atul and dr. shubhankar sab kuch sambhal lenge'anjali aur dr. muskan ki 3days leave hai..wo riddhima ke sath jakar saare shopping kar lenge'phir wo dono duty par rahenge to dr. nikki and dr.kirti leave par rahenge'baaki sarey shopping riddhima unke sath kar legi'.ma aur padma ghar ke arrangements dekhegi'aap kya kahte hain dr. arman? '


No response from other side because dr. arman was lost on her basket's charm''


Dr. sashank : "dr. arman..are you there?

Dr. arman's trance broke'.."ji,sir'nahi sir'

Dr. sashank : " kya aap yahan nahi hain ya hain?

Rahul teased him : "ji sir, actually arman yahan hai par yahan nahi hai'uska kuch kho gaya hai,uska hi dhyan hai,hai na arman?


Dr. sashank frowned : " kya matlab? Kya kho gaya? Kab? Dr.arman ki aadaten gayi nahi ab tak?


Muskan made a light smack on rahul's back and managed'" sir,rishima aapko kuch kahna chahti hai..hai na rishima beta?


Rishima saved her pappa from this positon'"ji nanu'mai kahna chahti thi,humey to koi kaam diya hi nahi?


Dr. sashank : " bete, aapke dada- dadi aa rahe hain,aapko unke paas hona chahiye na?


Rishima jumped with joy'"yeee!! Kab aa rahe hain billy dadu?

Dr. sashank : " bas thori hi der mein,aur phir aap aur angel unke sath dr. arman ke ghar jaoge'wahan ka bhi arrangement dekhna hai'.


Nani : "beta,mai bhi jaun? Unhe akele yahan paresani hogi..


Dr. sashank : " sure ma'aur dr. arman aap bhi'


Arman (making an innocent face) : "lekin sir,mujhe bhi sadi ki shopping karni hai to keun na ek sath hi'I mean riddhima aur mai'


Dr. sashank (strictly) : " nahi,bilkul nahi'maine bataya na aapko,aaj se aap sadi tak riddhima se nahi miloge,okay!..


Arman(with a broken heart) : " ok'..


Riddhima giggled. arman warned through his eyes'."ek baar sadi ho jane do,phir kis tarah meri baahon se dur rahti ho dekh lunga'saari jindagi ,ek pal ke liye bhi alag nahi karunga dr. riddhima mallick!!!...jitna tadpaya hai,gin ginkar badla lunga sweetheart !! its dr.arman's promise to his basket!!!!...



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love you all
punam





Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey Punam!
awesome part!
desperately waiting 4 AR wedding! cont asap
thnx 4 pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...😊😊
and thanks for the pm:-)...continue soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update cutey pie!! Too good.. Thanks for sharing..Luv ya.. muaah! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
desperately waitng fr their marriage.
And rishima is so naughty. Sahi armaan ki beti hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends...PoonamT, peachgirl, TANVI_SEXY, KaJen_addiction, Jyo_Ksg, teenorchid..thanks a lot for your lovely and precious comments...hope you will like this part too...


recap


Riddhima giggled. arman warned through his eyes'."ek baar sadi ho jane do,phir kis tarah meri baahon se dur rahti ho dekh lunga'saari jindagi ,ek pal ke liye bhi alag nahi karunga dr. riddhima mallick!!!...jitna tadpaya hai,gin ginkar badla lunga sweetheart !! its dr.arman's promise to his basket!!!!...

chapter --21


now







HALDI -- RASHM




today was riddhima's haldi 'rashm held. The relatives and friends..all had come to attend the ceremony.riddhima's friends muskan,nikki and anji di were putting haldi on her 'they were teasing her with arman's name'riddhima was laughing'how happy she was! As she got her life!dr. sashank watched riddhima from a distance'.he remembered when he had brought teddy for her..she was happy like this..and today she was too much happy cause today she was getting the most precious gift of her life..her arman!





why did he never understand this small thing? dr. sashank remembered the day when riddhima was being married with sid forcefully! how much sad she was that day! Tried to leave her life too'but dr. sashank couldn't understand her pain'why! Is he a perfect father? ..he cursed himself and said sorry in his heart to riddhima.



she is looking like a doll...a beautiful,innocent doll! ...dr. sashank prayed to god..." bhagwanji,ab meri is masum gudiya ki jindagi mein koi gam na aaye...isi tarah muskurati rahe apne arman ke sath..."


"nanu,mumma bahut khubsurat lag rahi hai na?"...dr. sashank heard rishima's voice...


"ji beta,wo hai hi duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki..."


"aur mai?" rishima asked naughtily.


" aap to pari ho...apni mumma ki tarah khubsurat...par meri beti aapki tarah saitan nahi thi..." dr. sashank teased her.

"hmmm, but mai to saitani aapke sath karti hun,aapki punishment hai,humey apne se dur jo rakha..." rishima chuckled.


"sorry beta,chaliye udhar kya ho raha hai dekhte hain...humari princess ki sadi me kuch kami na rah jaye...hum dono ko hi khyal rakhna parega na'dr. sashank caressed her silky hair.."...



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at night..






riddhima was looking her hands which was full of mehendi'.dream ! a beautiful dream! Which was now to be completed such a long time. how much she waited for that day! To see arman's name in her hand!!..she touched arman's name with her lips...



mobile started to sing..."dill mill gayye...dill mill gayye..."


riddhima picked the mobile...it was none except arman..."bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho..."

riddhima smiled..."mobile mein bhi dikh raha hai kya?"

"hmmm...aur pata hai,mehendi ki khubsurati badh gayi hai tumhare hathon me sajkar..."


" o' achcha! aur kya dikh raha hai aapko janab! "riddhima chuckled.

"aur tumne jo arman ko ek pyari si kiss di...oyye hoyye! mai to loot gaya is ada par..."arman whispered.


"maine tumhe kiss kiya!" riddhima asked surprisingly..."kab?"

" wo arman ke naam ko,jo mere basket ke khubsurat ,soft hathon me likhi hai..."


and in a while riddhima understood everything...her eyes started to search him all around the room and found that he was hiding himself behind the curtain.


"arma-an! are you mad! tumhari aadat gayi nahi!.."riddhima cried .


arman came out of the curtain and put his finger on riddhima's lips..."sh-sh-sh! chup! abhi mere dushman ,mere sasurji aa jayege..."


" arman,tum pagal ho kya? aisa bhi koi karta hai? kal tumhari sadi hai aur aaj tum khidki se,is tarah...


before she completed her words,arman pulled her in his arm and pressed his lips on her...at first she shied away for a while and next closed her eyes to enjoy this moment...after a while arman parted her and whispered..." bas ..ab suhagraat tak pyas nahi lagegi..."


riddhima blushed heavily listening this...she hid her face with her palms...arman held her soft hands and smelled mehendi's fragrance...but riddhima was still closed her eyes'..arman was mesmerizing to see her angelic beauty!!...no make up..no jewelleries...only a pink nighty she had worn,which was transparent and showing her silky cream skin with her perfect figure..her silky hair was playing on her cheeks and a few on her shoulders'..arman tucked them behind her ears and whispered lovingly..."lagti hi nahi ki ek 8 saal ki bachchi ki ma ho...waisi hi ho,jaisi intern ke 1st day ko dekha tha aur apni jaan luta baitha tha..."


riddhima touched his dimple : " hmmm...janab jhuth bolna bhi jante hain...1st day ko aapne dill nahi hara tha dr. arman...tab to hum dushman they ...


arman : " hmmm...achcha batao kab maine tum par dill hara tha...

riddhima : " jungle night ko...

arman (surprisingly) : " how do you know? maine to nahi bataya...


riddhima : " janab,aapne nahi bataya par aapki ye saitan aankhen hain na,unhone bata diya tha...


arman caught her from waist and made more close..."aur tumne basket! tumne kab dill hara tha?'


riddhima peeped in his oceanic eyes : "pata nahi,mujhe to achanak hi laga mai tumhe pahle se hi janti hun,shayd pichle janam se...ya uske pichle...


arman (mischieviously) : "to pahle hi batana tha na...bekar mein mai itni ladkion ke peeche nahi bhagta,tumhe search karte hue...


riddhima pushed him..."baaten banana tumse koi sikhe...jao ab...

arman blinked eyes : " chala jaun? tum miss nahi karogi?


riddhima (dreamily): "jaoge tab to dulha bankar aaoge...mujhe intzaar rahega arman ...jaldi aana mujhe lene...


"oyye hoyye basket! love you!"...arman again dragged her in his arm , kissed her cheeks and breathed..." mai jaldi aaunga basket...bas aur thora sa intzaar,phir arman riddhima ko koi alag nahi kar payega...



love you all
punam



Edited by anamika2010 - 13 years ago

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