FF:Tell Me Your Dreams- Part 9-pg 24

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

awww,,loved it..so nice of their friendship,and love...finally realising their love..i hope khushi say her heart out b4 its too late..waitin for nxt..

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

So KKG is getting enlightened!

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Awesome...

hmm so they r goin to realize their feelings...

continue soon

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

I loved this part Niha!

Finally the penny has dropped with Khushi!!

I just hope she can speak to Arnav before he leaves.

I really want them to acknowledge their feelings for each other now!!

Thanks for the PM sugar!!

😊

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Dear Niha,

I read part 5 and 6 back to back... (with many interruptions🤔)

My comments?😛

Well..

I felt every bit of it! Every nuance, every emotion, every situation, every heartbeat, every instance of uneasiness and awkwardness... just the whole package 🤢😭

Today when I started reading your P5, I felt like you had just sprinkled the rainbow colors on the floor. Then as I read on, I felt you slowly started to dance.. delicately and gracefully carving your every move like a goddess... eventually getting intense, fierce, and pacing, increasing anticipation with the increasing speed of music, the movements getting more sketchy and consuming more and more of the floor... and finally when you were done and walked out, a beautiful dancing peacock lay on the floor adorn in rainbow colors...

It was mesmerizing, captivating, enthralling, fascinating, killing, gloom inducing, hopeful, and hopelessly romantic! ❤️🥺

I cannot wait to see what happens next. Please post the next part like TODAY please 😳

I am on my knees begging!

🤗

love you for this piece of art!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

I completely love your story and the way it is progressing

thanks for the pm

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Ur OS have become a short story honey so u might as well change that and we'll see if it goes upto becoming a ff

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Hey Niha...I had been stuck up...so commenting late!
I loved the school part! It was so so cool...protective Khusi...that too over Arnav!
Oh Man! Shyam ne kar di entry...bad luck!
Great going! Thanks for the pm!

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

arre Arnav to wapis aa hi jayega... par mujhe tumhari chinta hai... tum jab jati ho tab aane ka pata hi nahin hota... is baar zara jaldi update karo.. nahin to phir se sabhi parts padhne padenge... 😛
Mere memory issues ka bhi khayal rakho...😆

Cheers,
Monsi

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
mujhe kyun kuch keh rahi ho ... Arnav jaa raha hai ... ussey naraaz ho .. apni khush ko akele chor uss Shyam ke hawale kar jaa raha hai idiot 😆😉

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#120

awww sweetie pie !!! gimme 2 days !!! 😊

Originally posted by: monsi08
arre Arnav to wapis aa hi jayega... par mujhe tumhari chinta hai... tum jab jati ho tab aane ka pata hi nahin hota... is baar zara jaldi update karo.. nahin to phir se sabhi parts padhne padenge... 😛
Mere memory issues ka bhi khayal rakho...😆

Cheers,
Monsi

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