SS ON MAAN's MEMORY LOSS EPILOGUE- PG15 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome!!!
awww maan knws abt his accident..
curious to knw abt the person who admitted maan...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
lovely update...thanks so much.
wow poor maan n geet..both in hospital...
u mentioend teh person a few times...i m not sure who that person can be...
i have a feeling it is a negative character...
thanks for the update..
muah😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Nice update!!!!!!!

So the story is moving towards ML... great yaar...

Eager to know the person who admitted Maan in the hospital
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awasome update!!
who is the person???
me very curious
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx 4 pm

Who's the mystery person ????


thnk god maaneet and their baby is safe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice!...

glad to see that maan and geet are fine!
wonder who the person is...
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Friends...


Thanks for your likes & comments which were much needed & inspired me to continue my SS...

Updating next part very soon.

With lots of ❤️❤️

Jyoti.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 20



Next Morning...

In Hospital - Maan's Room.


After checkup Maan went to Geet's room. Nandini saw Maan & was about to leave allowing Maan & Geet to talk with each other.


Nandini : Di, you & Jiju carry on I am waiting for Dev near reception.


Geet : Nandini you can stay here & tell your jiju, i am not going to talk with him & turns her side to left so that her back can be faced to Maan.


Nandini : but Di...


Maan : Y i can't talk with my wife.


Geet : No


Nandini went out & was waiting for Dev at Reception

Maan : If you don't want to talk to me that's fine, I am going, quietly came near her.


Geet turned her side & was surprised to see Maan sitting near her.


Geet : Y didn't you leave???


Maan : Is it possible for me to leave when my sweetheart is in hospital bed, how r u & my baby???? caressing her face.


Geet : both are fine. First tell me what happened.


Maan made her sit properly, holding her hands.


Maan : First of all I am SORRY dear. I was coming home but I didn't knew what was happening to me & my head started paining badly, so I stopped the car, afterwards I don't know what happened, when I came to sense doctor told that somebody admitted me in hospital & I am waiting to meet him.


Geet : I too want to meet him. But Maan how many times I told you not to think while driving. Didn't even think of me & our baby???? When I heard that you were admitted in hospital I was totally lost & if any thing would have gone wrong with you, damn sure I would have been certainly dead.


Maan : (Kept his finger on her lips) Geet, I am fine now & Y it will go wrong with me when my Mishti is with me.


He took her in embrace, at the same time he didn't revealed what Adi told him & decided henceforth not to think of past any more. They came out of hug when Geet sense the baby's movement…

Maan moved his hand on her tummy…Hey baby once again SORRY dear, promise I will never ever do this again, giving a cross look at Geet & kissed on her tummy.

Slowly came near to her ear & whisper, Oh I forgot my Mishti will not forgive me so easily unless & until I kiss.


Geet : Maan again you started.


Maan : Geet, So what & its too long time that I haven't kissed u.


Geet : but this is not the place Maan.


Maan : yes I know & it will be continued once we reached home.


Geet : Mmmaaannn & hugged him …… I love you Maan.


Maan : I too love you Geet, beyond anything.


By the time Dev & Adi reached the hospital. Nandini was waitingfor them.


Nandini : Dev, Jiju is with Di & doctor wants to meet you.


Dev : Adi, Nandini you both wait here , I will meet the doctor.

In the meantime, Maan called Adi & asked him about office routine.


Adi : Maan Sir, I am waiting for your exactly outside of Geet's room.


Maan : Adi u, in hospital???? Ok fine wait outside I am coming.


Adi : Ok Sir….


Maan : Adi you here, where is Dev???


Adi : Dev Sir went to meet doctor & by the time Dev Sir comes lets wait in your room.


Maan : Ok…


Adi : Maan Sir, sorry but I had to tell dadi everything as you were not picking up the phone.


Maan : Its ok. Adi…. But we have to keep Geet in dark about this & I don't want her to be tensed now. I will have a word with Dadi about this...


Adi : yes sir….

In Doctor's Cabin

Doctor : Mr. Dev, everything is fine with Mr. Khurana & he has a appointment after two days, so he should be here.


Dev : Yes sure….. by the way doctor, the person who admitted bro hasn't come yet??? Did he tell you his name.


Doctor : No. Mr. Dev.


Dev : as soon as he comes let me know.


Doctor : oh at last u came… there he is Mr. Dev who admitted your bro.


Dev turn around to see the person who he is but was 😲😲😕

& a name came out of his mouth……… VICKY tum yaha??????




Hope U like it...



Next update soon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vicky
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